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… pressure for measure
just five pounds
is all it takes,
to end a life,
to make hearts break,
from life to death
is the measure,
with just five pounds,
of index pressure.
is all it takes,
to end a life,
to make hearts break,
from life to death
is the measure,
with just five pounds,
of index pressure.
Published 29th Nov 2021
| Edited 21st Mar 2024
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29th Nov 2021 10:13pm
Thought provoking piece of work written in depth and deepness, for guns don't kill people, it is people that are the killers of people a very righteous piece my brother poet 🙏👊👊👊 OG
5th Dec 2021 7:39pm
great hearing from you my brother
your inspirational feedback is always spot on
cool breeze
Warrior Respect
your inspirational feedback is always spot on
cool breeze
Warrior Respect
5th Dec 2021 8:04pm
It is a very beautiful thing that deserves a great honor and respect for it's a time when the truth be told for no one is untouchable for a bullet don't know you till it hits you at home 🙏👊👊👊
30th Nov 2021 3:08pm
"with five pounds,
of index pressure."
We've made it that easy to kill.
No one blames the guns for killing people. We've always known it was the person behind the trigger, but do we stand a better chance to curb violence by changing people or restricting the weopon most used.
Personally, I don't think people will ever change. We're just as violent now, maybe more so than any time in history.
"with five pounds,
of index pressure."
This piece is short but thought provoking. It should at least get people talking about the problem. Whether people can agree with anything to do something about it is another thing.
Great Write.
of index pressure."
We've made it that easy to kill.
No one blames the guns for killing people. We've always known it was the person behind the trigger, but do we stand a better chance to curb violence by changing people or restricting the weopon most used.
Personally, I don't think people will ever change. We're just as violent now, maybe more so than any time in history.
"with five pounds,
of index pressure."
This piece is short but thought provoking. It should at least get people talking about the problem. Whether people can agree with anything to do something about it is another thing.
Great Write.
5th Dec 2021 7:48pm
yes my brother.. but, as long as there is money to be made it appears that we will never be able to break the cycle,
gun violence is a part of the American Way of Life..
Respect!
gun violence is a part of the American Way of Life..
Respect!
