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A Mother's love
What could be more beautiful in the world
Smiles of a mother with a child in her arms?
These moments of enchanting love,
They are immortalized in paintings and poems
The tenderness laid down by the wise nature
Feelings of motherly devotion and love warm us
Like the face of the sun in the blue sky,
In its simplicity does not require embellishment.
Oh, how many times you, beautiful mothers,
Gave the inextinguishable light of the magic
Love in the eyes so calm and bottomless
And keeping the sacred secrets of nature!
Smiles of a mother with a child in her arms?
These moments of enchanting love,
They are immortalized in paintings and poems
The tenderness laid down by the wise nature
Feelings of motherly devotion and love warm us
Like the face of the sun in the blue sky,
In its simplicity does not require embellishment.
Oh, how many times you, beautiful mothers,
Gave the inextinguishable light of the magic
Love in the eyes so calm and bottomless
And keeping the sacred secrets of nature!
Author's Note
Another one for my Mom, she is very ill so now it is I who is her caregiver; I love her so much. And for all of the other Mothers who give so much love and wisdom for their children.
Some previous ones to my Mom;
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406790-mom-you-are-my-angel/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414101-rays-of-gold/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/429370-salty-diamonds-of-her-soul/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/383420-mom/
Some previous ones to my Mom;
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406790-mom-you-are-my-angel/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414101-rays-of-gold/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/429370-salty-diamonds-of-her-soul/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/383420-mom/
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Re: Re. A Mother's love
15th Nov 2021 9:15pm
Thank you so much for your kind words. And I am so sorry for your loss. It's really difficult to watch as my Mom's condition gets worse and will continue to do so. Still, I do everything I can to make these days as pleasant as possible and make sure she has no other worries. I know the time I do have is an irreplaceable gift that I cherish. It's very hard but I try to keep my spirits up for her. I know she loves me and to see my pain would only make things that much worse. I really appreciate your comment a lot.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I do hope it reminds everyone of the sacrifices a Mom makes and all the difficult roles she fulfills for her children and the family. And to give your Mom so much love, honor and adore her, because she won't always be around. My Mom was the one person who was there for me. We do share that kind of bond. I tear up writing about her and even responding to comments. She was first diagnosed with cancer when she was pregnant with me and they recommended she get an abortion but she refused. So I cannot help but sometimes feeling like I may have contributed her condition now. And still I know she would make the same decision. I love her so much.
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15th Nov 2021 10:14pm
Thank you again, you are so kind. I thought about not accepting comments like on previous ones about my Mom but these messages really have touched my heart. I appreciate them so much. xo
Re. A Mother's love
15th Nov 2021 9:43pm
She is blessed to have you in her time of need...such a warm, loving and endearing soul... a sure fire keeper xo
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15th Nov 2021 10:01pm
Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly hope she feels how blessed I am to have her in my life. And I would do anything for her to take as much of the pain away as possible. I really appreciate your beautiful sentiments so much. These messages have really touched my heart. xo
Re. A Mother's love
15th Nov 2021 9:46pm
Heartfelt and lovingly stated ❤
Wish I could tell your Mom what a fabulous daughter she has to write such love. Of course she knows .....
I wish for a miracle for both of you
Truly remarkable writing and sentiment
BL
RL
XO
Wish I could tell your Mom what a fabulous daughter she has to write such love. Of course she knows .....
I wish for a miracle for both of you
Truly remarkable writing and sentiment
BL
RL
XO
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15th Nov 2021 10:07pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am glad you could feel the love. She is a big reason for who I am so I always hope she knows that. I hold out hope for a miracle but the doctors have told me what to expect, still I am in denial.
I really appreciate your beautiful sentiments so much from the bottom of my heart. xo
I really appreciate your beautiful sentiments so much from the bottom of my heart. xo
Re. A Mother's love
15th Nov 2021 11:25pm
Hey beautiful that was such a moving poem. Caring, loving and heartfelt. Sending hugs and love across the pond
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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16th Nov 2021 00:24am
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am glad you could feel the caring and love from the heart. I always appreciate your lovely comments, hugs and love so much. And thank you for always spreading the love and light. xo
Re. A Mother's love
15th Nov 2021 11:36pm
My first poem here at DUP was in tribute to my mother. I feel your write, it’s wonderful she has you.! I’m and sending hugs and love!
💖🙏
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Thank you so much for the kind words. I will definitely go back to read that one again. Interestingly enough my first poem here at DUP was to my Mom also for Mother's day. I will always be there for her whatever it takes. I appreciate the hugs and love so much. xo
Re. A Mother's love
16th Nov 2021 00:04am
A mother's love is a beautiful thing. You and your family our in my prayers. Keep on writing.
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16th Nov 2021 00:30am
Thank you so much for the kind words. A mother's love is something truly magnificent and special. There is nothing else like it in the world. I appreciate your prayers a lot. Thank you for thinking of me and my family. xo
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16th Nov 2021 00:35am
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am so sorry for your loss. I will always do my best to honor her and the wonderful person she is. I hope my writing can help me express just how much I love her. xo
Re. A Mother's love
16th Nov 2021 1:59am
Remembering the love, you have a beautiful way of saying goodbye. I hope your mother finds grace in passing and you find closure for your pain. My heart breaks for this ending, as each day is just a relief that today is not the day. I know your pain as I have been tempered by those fires as well. If I could take your pain and carry it, I would. A beautiful poem, do you read these for your mom?
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16th Nov 2021 12:31pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. I will cherish each day with the hopes that there will be many more. And when the day comes a part of me will die but I will try to think of it as an end to her suffering and hope to find some solace in that. I am sorry you know this pain. And I am without words to adequately express my gratitude for the sentiment about taking this pain away. You are a beautiful kind soul that I appreciate so much. I do read these to her. xo
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16th Nov 2021 12:00pm
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16th Nov 2021 12:33pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am happy you thought it was a wonderful tender write. It is difficult to capture a Mother's love in words. I just hope I could put something positive out there for people in honor of her. xo
Re. A Mother's love
16th Nov 2021 12:18pm
no matter how many times we put to words to a mother and her love,
there will always be more to say.
each mother is original and her love to her child she instills, in her tender way.
thank you for sharing your heart.
there will always be more to say.
each mother is original and her love to her child she instills, in her tender way.
thank you for sharing your heart.
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16th Nov 2021 12:47pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. That is so true, there is always more to say and not enough words to adequately express the love. She really loved the previous ones so I was happy sharing them. This will definitely not be the last time I try to capture just a little of that love in words. Thank you for sharing in my heart. I really appreciate your beautiful words a lot. xo
Re. A Mother's love
16th Nov 2021 11:38pm
This is so tender but also strong in devotion.
As a mother myself - I feel so honored to have read this.
You are a wonderful daughter Kristina.
Loved this:)
As a mother myself - I feel so honored to have read this.
You are a wonderful daughter Kristina.
Loved this:)
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16th Nov 2021 11:49pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am glad you could feel the tenderness and strong devotion. My previous ones I mentioned in the author's note are more personal. But I always want to put something out that will honor all of the wonderful Mothers who give so much love in the world. So I am really happy that you read this and felt honored. I truly love that. xo
Re. A Mother's love
17th Nov 2021 5:00am
Kristina I am left speechless by this beautiful sentiment dedicated to your mom.
When I read your profound words, it is a powerful reminder to me of the greatest Love we will ever have in life,
Mother & Child
And of course, all of my love and prayers are sent to your mother and all of yours.
...mom has to be pretty damn amazing because her best friend has her aura and inspires.
Beautiful Write!
When I read your profound words, it is a powerful reminder to me of the greatest Love we will ever have in life,
Mother & Child
And of course, all of my love and prayers are sent to your mother and all of yours.
...mom has to be pretty damn amazing because her best friend has her aura and inspires.
Beautiful Write!
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17th Nov 2021 1:01pm
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am so happy I can provide a little reminder of something so important as a Mom's love and that strong bond which cannot be broken. We start life with it and it remains forever with us, in us. I appreciate your love and prayers more than I can express. And I love the beautiful sentiments contained within your words. I hope that I always display her wonderful aura in honor of her offering inspiration. To lose your Mom and best friend is one of the most difficult things in the world and I know a piece of my soul will go with her to comfort her. Thanks again, for your comforting words. xo
Re. A Mother's love
17th Nov 2021 12:45pm
No words can express how lovely and strong the bond is between you and your Mom. I know this is a deeply emotional time for you and I wish you grace in dealing with her illness. Having you by her side is the ultimate mother/daughter transference.
I wish peace for both of you.
You are selfless and it shows.
A beautiful write !!
I wish peace for both of you.
You are selfless and it shows.
A beautiful write !!
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Thank you so much for the kind words. From the very beginning she made such a huge sacrifice for me to live. I will never forget that and all of the love she has shown me. My life has not been easy with many trials, some of which she does not know about, but she was the one person who was always there for me. The one person who got me through it all. This is definitely a deeply emotional time for me and I thank you so much for your wonderful words and sentiments. I will be by her side until the end and I will honor her memory forever.
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19th Nov 2021 11:08am
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am happy you know exactly how I feel in relation to Mums and found it touching. It is difficult to capture a Mother's love in words. I just wanted to put something positive out there for all the Mums. xo Mums4ever!
Re. A Mother's love
21st Nov 2021 2:27am
Dear K,
Anything from the heart is perfection to me. It’s pure and genuine. This poem exudes those attributes. Your readers can feel the pulse of love between you both in this piece. Lovely lovely write. H🌷
Anything from the heart is perfection to me. It’s pure and genuine. This poem exudes those attributes. Your readers can feel the pulse of love between you both in this piece. Lovely lovely write. H🌷
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Hello Honoria, it is great to hear from you. I am happy if I could spread a little love. I always want to be seen as something positive. But honestly I feel so depressed right now and I am caught in a downward spiral. Even here there is so much negativity and I don't know what to do about it any more. Thank you for always being a bright spot.
Re. A Mother's love
22nd Nov 2021 7:42pm
Wonderful piece Kristina. I'm sorry your mom is going through this, but it sounds like this has brought you closer with a deeper appreciation for her. You expressed this with a sincere and beautiful reflection.
Sending positive vibes.
Sincerely,
W
Sending positive vibes.
Sincerely,
W
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23rd Nov 2021 2:46pm
Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate your thoughts a lot and you are always a bright spot for me here. I am definitely having such a hard time going through this, we are very close and I appreciate her so much. I am glad I can share some of that appreciation as I try to put out positive vibes in the midst of a lot of pain. And thank you so much for sending some back to me.