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Random Texts to My Love, I
I enjoy being out when
I’m sure it can be enjoyed;
honesty is the sacrifice
for honest conversation
regarding headspace
pushed past my limits,
doesn’t matter where I go ~
to the golden streets
of heaven, for a walk
…and I’d still be sorry
I ever left the house
I’m sure it can be enjoyed;
honesty is the sacrifice
for honest conversation
regarding headspace
pushed past my limits,
doesn’t matter where I go ~
to the golden streets
of heaven, for a walk
…and I’d still be sorry
I ever left the house
Published 14th Nov 2021
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14th Nov 2021 6:21am
14th Nov 2021 9:02am
exactly how i feel a lot of the time ni force myself out then secret once people start to feel like a current im walking against
14th Nov 2021 5:42pm
14th Nov 2021 10:12pm
19th Nov 2021 11:12am
Dear L,
Second stanza is a force of human will power to me. Mentally and physically pushing past that “I’m so done” feeling. When I do that it’s typically a 50/50 chance of feeling as though I accomplished something greater and 100% chance I’m in physical agony. All of it wreaks havoc with my mental well-being and I love how you’ve captured that as the under current throughout. H🌷
Second stanza is a force of human will power to me. Mentally and physically pushing past that “I’m so done” feeling. When I do that it’s typically a 50/50 chance of feeling as though I accomplished something greater and 100% chance I’m in physical agony. All of it wreaks havoc with my mental well-being and I love how you’ve captured that as the under current throughout. H🌷
22nd Nov 2021 6:11pm
It's interesting how a text message can say so much as one struggles on the other side.
Hope all is well Luna.
Nicely penned.
Hope all is well Luna.
Nicely penned.
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22nd Dec 2021 6:10am
18th Jan 2022 5:52am
Personally I like the idea of getting out of the house, I like the idea of the other person leaving just so I could text my "cheery" disposition. Sometimes it's nice to be myself, I like being able to send my hollow words through the world wide web. Thank you for sharing about how things are on the other side, I wish you the best.
