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Into
I will be a wilderness
I will be a candle lit near curving flesh
Like drowning pools
My eyes
Set upon
Your own
Set upon
A mythology of man
Created by the heat
Urgent friction
Of my thighs
The brass and hinges
Of fingers grip
Begging not
To be torn away
Begging
And always then....
A wilderness
And trail setting off into
Begins
I will be a candle lit near curving flesh
Like drowning pools
My eyes
Set upon
Your own
Set upon
A mythology of man
Created by the heat
Urgent friction
Of my thighs
The brass and hinges
Of fingers grip
Begging not
To be torn away
Begging
And always then....
A wilderness
And trail setting off into
Begins
Published 11th Nov 2021
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11th Nov 2021 11:33pm
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12th Nov 2021 6:55pm
After seeing Relic 54's comment I read this and thought, yes, that describes the candlelit shadowy scene.
12th Nov 2021 11:34pm
I like this. Very well written. I can feel the desire when I read it. Also I like the word choices. Very unique descriptions. Good work!
16th Nov 2021 12:27pm
21st Nov 2021 3:24am
Dear J,
Love how you’ve concluded this! Wonderful irony. Meanwhile, this made me think of a couple of different aspects regarding sex. Mostly the opposites- playful and intense sides of it.
“ The brass and hinges
Of fingers grip
Begging not
To be torn away” great metaphor. Wish I could think like this!
Excellent write. H🌷
Love how you’ve concluded this! Wonderful irony. Meanwhile, this made me think of a couple of different aspects regarding sex. Mostly the opposites- playful and intense sides of it.
“ The brass and hinges
Of fingers grip
Begging not
To be torn away” great metaphor. Wish I could think like this!
Excellent write. H🌷
24th Nov 2021 3:56am
16th Dec 2021 4:04pm
Hello,
The poem is to express your wilderness or restless in your partner. The great way of your expression firing up in your and its deep-seated impact on...
Love,
KS
The poem is to express your wilderness or restless in your partner. The great way of your expression firing up in your and its deep-seated impact on...
Love,
KS
