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Islam
Islam claims to be
A religion of love and peace
Mohamed being the last prophet
Thus insulting Christians and
Christianity in passing.
Lowering Jesus Christ
To the position of mere prophet
How insulting
Claiming Allah to be the only true God
How insulting to the other civilizations
That predate Islam by thousands of years
Insulting the beliefs of other humans
Seeking and finding answers in their own creeds.
Islam is pretentious and an insult
To people of all other faiths
An insult to the rest of humanity.
A religion of love and peace
Mohamed being the last prophet
Thus insulting Christians and
Christianity in passing.
Lowering Jesus Christ
To the position of mere prophet
How insulting
Claiming Allah to be the only true God
How insulting to the other civilizations
That predate Islam by thousands of years
Insulting the beliefs of other humans
Seeking and finding answers in their own creeds.
Islam is pretentious and an insult
To people of all other faiths
An insult to the rest of humanity.
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Re. Islam
very stupid, prejudiced and narrow-minded. It's poor poetry too and yes - too much to stomach - bye.
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Re: Re. Islam
Your opinion. i have studied that religion...and many others, as well as history of Mohamed and read tons in regard to that civilization, from Turkey and ''La grande Porte'' which controlled the travels to Mecca way back when. I have read about a particular king in Persia who, not liking some of the passages he found in the Quoran, paid a nice sum in gold to get all the copies collected....and had them burned. My comments are not exaxtly ''out of nowhere',
Re. Islam
11th Nov 2021 00:23am
Once a writer or a poet starts with their personal opinions in their poems regarding religion and politics they begin to alienate a lot of their audience.
I used to like Stephen King until he got to political.
Allah is the word for God in Arabic.
Even Christian Arabs call God Allah.
Jesus is a prophet. God is not begot or begotten. No father or son. 🥱😘
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Re: Re. Islam
11th Nov 2021 00:28am
Re. Islam
Anonymous
11th Nov 2021 00:49am
In an attempt to provide Friendly Feedback regarding your poem without straying too far into Honest Critique, I'll just say that it qualifies more as the average blogger's editorial or opinion posted on Facebook than poetry.
That being said, it's too bad people are criticizing the content rather than commenting on the writing itself.
That being said, it's too bad people are criticizing the content rather than commenting on the writing itself.
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Re: Re. Islam
11th Nov 2021 1:03am
True. Perhaps I should take a dep breath on that one. I go on sites such as Quora and, ok, my problem because religions are set in stone. Just like politics, as another person commented above. Conversations in regard to those lead to heavy confrontations. Imagine living in the Middle East. Always sitting on time bombs. As for politicians, some of these persons must have very hard skins. PS: Just another thought: I've written quite ''heavy'' poems on this site in regard to pedophile priests or priests fucking nuns and never got the kind of negative or irate comments like I just got with this attempt at criticizing that religion which tolerates NOTHING. I wonder why the huge difference.....
Re: Re. Islam
11th Nov 2021 1:03am
True. Perhaps I should take a dep breath on that one. I go on sites such as Quora and, ok, my problem because religions are set in stone. Just like politics, as another person commented above. Conversations in regard to those lead to heavy confrontations. Imagine living in the Middle East. Always sitting on time bombs. As for politicians, some of these persons must have very hard skins. PS: Just another thought: I've written quite ''heavy'' poems on this site in regard to pedophile priests or priests fucking nuns and never got the kind of negative or irate comments like I just got with this attempt at criticizing that religion which tolerates NOTHING. I wonder why the huge difference.....
Re: Re. Islam
Anonymous
11th Nov 2021 1:18am
Eh. Any religion in the hands of poor leadership is a recipe for disaster. It's a bit of a folly to single one out of the crowd, especially when Christianity is attending.
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