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My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
Don't box me in
Cause these Spanish feathers
Been dreaming of embracing the wind
Rollercoaster heartbeat within
Small town Americana
West Coast Prima Donna
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby
it's time to go
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Nope I won't be touching the wheel
I just don't like the way they make me feel
Gotta be in the air that's the deal
Been burning in park for so so long
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby its
time to go
To a place of crystal air
Anyplace other than here
Together don't be scared
Cause I'm going to take you there
Cause these Spanish feathers
dream of embracing the wind
Won't be taking the car
cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Cause these Spanish feathers
Been dreaming of embracing the wind
Rollercoaster heartbeat within
Small town Americana
West Coast Prima Donna
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby
it's time to go
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Nope I won't be touching the wheel
I just don't like the way they make me feel
Gotta be in the air that's the deal
Been burning in park for so so long
Won't be taking the car
Cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Tired of kissing rainbows
from below
Come on baby its
time to go
To a place of crystal air
Anyplace other than here
Together don't be scared
Cause I'm going to take you there
Cause these Spanish feathers
dream of embracing the wind
Won't be taking the car
cause my wings
baby they stretch far
Author's Note
Just had this fluttering in my head and wanted to write down before it flew away.
Couldn't sleep.
Couldn't sleep.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 4:35am
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 4:38am
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10th Nov 2021 10:07am
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 11:56pm
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
It's a good time to write when you can't sleep
Which is often for me
This one has good bounce and cadence
Kind of a rap feel
BIG LIKE A
BIG LIKE AGAIN
RL AWARD
Which is often for me
This one has good bounce and cadence
Kind of a rap feel
BIG LIKE A
BIG LIKE AGAIN
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 11:58pm
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 1:03pm
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:01am
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
Spread those gorgeous wings and fly. I imagine Spanish feathers to be very colorful. :) This definitely reads like a song; I can hear it being sung as I read the words. And I absolutely love to travel. Like mystic said, your words always delight! You are so talented!!!
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:05am
Hi Kristina:)
Thank you for your gracious words.
It was on auto replay in my mind.
No way I was going to get any rest so I just stayed up
and wrote.
As always thanks for commenting chica!
Thank you for your gracious words.
It was on auto replay in my mind.
No way I was going to get any rest so I just stayed up
and wrote.
As always thanks for commenting chica!
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10th Nov 2021 3:14pm
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:07am
Awh...thanks Selina:)
That comment made me smile.
Fixing to hit yours up in a minute.
Can't wait to read:)
That comment made me smile.
Fixing to hit yours up in a minute.
Can't wait to read:)
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Nov 2021 3:38pm
This is uplifting and wonderful. I love the music vibe and the Spanish feathers. I’m flying high from this! 🌈
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:10am
Hi NG!!!
Thank you so much for your kind words.
So glad you enjoyed:)
Made my day amiga!
Thank you so much for your kind words.
So glad you enjoyed:)
Made my day amiga!
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:01am
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
11th Nov 2021 00:13am
Hey there!
Was on repeat on my mind:)
I'm sure you can relate to
those whispers in the ear.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Was on repeat on my mind:)
I'm sure you can relate to
those whispers in the ear.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
12th Nov 2021 10:42pm
"Cause these Spanish feathers
Been dreaming of embracing the wind " -that is awesome
I really dig your work!
Been dreaming of embracing the wind " -that is awesome
I really dig your work!
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
12th Nov 2021 11:08pm
Well hello again:)
What can I say. I love music and I've never flown so I was living
by imagination only. LOL
Coming from a pro like you I am honored you dig it!!!!
What can I say. I love music and I've never flown so I was living
by imagination only. LOL
Coming from a pro like you I am honored you dig it!!!!
Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
7th Dec 2021 9:24pm
A lovely light romp, you have to get it down when it hits you or it vanishes quickly,, at least that's how it works for me..
I loved reading this, it's a happy poem,
💜💜💜
I loved reading this, it's a happy poem,
💜💜💜
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
8th Dec 2021 11:27pm
Hi Whyme!!
So glad you took the time to read. It vanishes for me too.
I always keep the chorus but I will have a great verse and
poof. Just like Puff the Magic Dragon. Gone!!
Frustrating at times. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
So glad you took the time to read. It vanishes for me too.
I always keep the chorus but I will have a great verse and
poof. Just like Puff the Magic Dragon. Gone!!
Frustrating at times. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
8th Dec 2021 11:38pm
Yea, it drives me totally nuts,, I can actually be writing a poem and a next line clicks in my head but I'd have to change the one I'm writing on and then that blasted dragon flies in and puff its all gone,,
I mean, like milliseconds apart, crazy, and the whole thing has lost its original meaning.
I find it difficult enough to write but when that happens, it's just aggravating.
I don't write now like I used to, think I lost whatever little bit of mojo I used to have.
I miss it much. But I do like conversing with conversible people 😂, 💜💜💜
I mean, like milliseconds apart, crazy, and the whole thing has lost its original meaning.
I find it difficult enough to write but when that happens, it's just aggravating.
I don't write now like I used to, think I lost whatever little bit of mojo I used to have.
I miss it much. But I do like conversing with conversible people 😂, 💜💜💜
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Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
8th Dec 2021 11:44pm
I like conversing with
conversible people who
wear converse. hehehe
I couldn't help. It's the poetess in me.
Later gator:)
conversible people who
wear converse. hehehe
I couldn't help. It's the poetess in me.
Later gator:)
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
8th Dec 2021 11:54pm
Well, to be quite honest with you, I haven't ever conversed with conversible people who wear converse while they are conversing me either, so, that I think makes us, two very conversible people who should converse more while wearing converse don't you think so two so 😂💜💜
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Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
9th Aug 2024 8:26pm
Re: Re. My Wings Baby They Stretch Far
10th Aug 2024 10:58pm
Aww. Thank you:)
This is one of my older pieces. I came to this site
to learn and get inspired. I'm glad you enjoyed this:)
Welcome to DUP
This is one of my older pieces. I came to this site
to learn and get inspired. I'm glad you enjoyed this:)
Welcome to DUP