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Give me your Submission
3am
I should be sleeping
Instead it's you I'm weighing
Your past is buried
Scars remain
I am your confidant
I'm more too
The next step awaits
I've been patient
Running out of time
We are union of something
Bigger than both of us
Heat, passion and pain
Cerebral
Augmented for growth
Greatness
I should be sleeping
Instead it's you I'm weighing
Your past is buried
Scars remain
I am your confidant
I'm more too
The next step awaits
I've been patient
Running out of time
We are union of something
Bigger than both of us
Heat, passion and pain
Cerebral
Augmented for growth
Greatness
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Re. Give me your Submission
7th Nov 2021 5:08pm
Makes me think of Fetlife. Poets must have an overactive sex drive?
Big like.
Big like.
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Re: Re. Give me your Submission
7th Nov 2021 5:19pm
My sex drive is active and I aim to keep it that way with women of superb sexual intelligence...
Thx E
Thx E
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7th Nov 2021 8:01pm
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7th Nov 2021 7:56pm
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Re. Give me your Submission
7th Nov 2021 9:51pm
Yessirrr! it's always good when this is in the equation:
"We are union of something
Bigger than both of us"
You hit the nail on the head, my guy
-Charles
"We are union of something
Bigger than both of us"
You hit the nail on the head, my guy
-Charles
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Re: Re. Give me your Submission
7th Nov 2021 9:55pm
I try to write these from a psychological standpoint.
For those who know it and for those who don't.
It's a heady pot of steaming gumbo
I do my best ...
Thanks always for reading and the RL ADD
APPRECIATE
For those who know it and for those who don't.
It's a heady pot of steaming gumbo
I do my best ...
Thanks always for reading and the RL ADD
APPRECIATE
Re. Give me your Submission
7th Nov 2021 10:35pm
good afternoon dearest Poet
so sexy is your inking
your desire her need
culminating in pure fire...
great write💕
so sexy is your inking
your desire her need
culminating in pure fire...
great write💕
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8th Nov 2021 00:13am
Re. Give me your Submission
8th Nov 2021 9:04am
I can't sleep after waking at 3:10am for no reason, here I am. I like the union and something bigger, it's good.
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Re: Re. Give me your Submission
8th Nov 2021 10:40am
Sleep is precious but it eludes me
There's always poems to keep us whole ...
Thx R
There's always poems to keep us whole ...
Thx R
Re. Give me your Submission
8th Nov 2021 5:14pm
Oh those late night, early morning thoughts do bring about the most torrid thoughts and machinations.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Give me your Submission
9th Nov 2021 10:48am
Yes
For me it's early morning
Lying in bed
Can't sleep
Mind in the Chamber of desire
Thx Wally
For me it's early morning
Lying in bed
Can't sleep
Mind in the Chamber of desire
Thx Wally
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2022 7:45pm
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