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Hands clasp neck's nape
eyes lock
sharing ecstasy's ardour
tongues, two twining flames
in frenetic dance writhe
breath combines, lips press
exchange sui generis flavor
Breasts commingle
in voluptuous fusion
firm, crimson nipples
spirograph on hot,
sweat-sheened flesh
sparking hedonic tingles
in time with each gyration
Firm hands on supple cheeks
keep eden's portal in place
pubic percussions incite
ecstatic, sonorous shrieks
with upward thrusting
blood swollen shaft
the hooded pearl caresses
until, at last,
his seed is sown
in her nectar blessed domain
By blissfull smiles
the truth is shown
of love's sweet labor gained
and again
and again
and again
eyes lock
sharing ecstasy's ardour
tongues, two twining flames
in frenetic dance writhe
breath combines, lips press
exchange sui generis flavor
Breasts commingle
in voluptuous fusion
firm, crimson nipples
spirograph on hot,
sweat-sheened flesh
sparking hedonic tingles
in time with each gyration
Firm hands on supple cheeks
keep eden's portal in place
pubic percussions incite
ecstatic, sonorous shrieks
with upward thrusting
blood swollen shaft
the hooded pearl caresses
until, at last,
his seed is sown
in her nectar blessed domain
By blissfull smiles
the truth is shown
of love's sweet labor gained
and again
and again
and again
Published 30th Oct 2021
| Edited 25th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Ah the beautiful mechanics of love making.
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30th Oct 2021 1:55am
Hi! GW
This is so sensual and hot!!!
Tongues, two twining flames.
I do love a good make out session - rest follows naturally.
This is so sensual and hot!!!
Tongues, two twining flames.
I do love a good make out session - rest follows naturally.
30th Oct 2021 4:10am
Thank you so much Adelphina❣🌹 I am elated that you like the piece and found it stirring.😍
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- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
30th Oct 2021 5:32am
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2nd Nov 2021 5:39pm
Merci Beaucoup Bon Mot! I am glad that you like it and I am humbled by your high praise.
Cheers!
Cheers!
30th Oct 2021 7:21am
Visualisable scene. Favourite lines:
Firm hands on supple cheeks
keep eden's portal in place
pubic percussions incite
ecstatic, sonorous shrieks
with upward thrusting
Firm hands on supple cheeks
keep eden's portal in place
pubic percussions incite
ecstatic, sonorous shrieks
with upward thrusting
2nd Nov 2021 5:43pm
Dear Solomon,
I am always pleased to read your comments and I so appreciate your continued support. I am glad you like the piece...and especially the stanza you highlight...I enjoyed the writing thereof.
Cheers!
I am always pleased to read your comments and I so appreciate your continued support. I am glad you like the piece...and especially the stanza you highlight...I enjoyed the writing thereof.
Cheers!
Ohhh my!
This is like a five alarm fire of exquisitely written and deeply desirable, masterful poetry. Wonderfully delicious with powerful impact while being so poetically and descriptively pretty. Not to mention highly arousing. Quite an achievement of the highest level, in my opinion!
There's a very fine line, balancing the artfulness of erotica (trying to remain within the mind's eye) vs becoming too graphic— This piece is the perfect union of lush intensity and deeply heated romanticism. You've managed to maintain and find that balance, flawlessly! I was swept away completely.... Ohh swoon!! Talk about thrills and tingles!!! Yes, indeedy.
An utterly outstanding job emanating that desirous joy... again and again and again.... *wink
I exuberantly thank you for sharing this heart pounding journey with us! 🙏🏻
Much love, BB
🐻🐰
🌹 - B
xo
This is like a five alarm fire of exquisitely written and deeply desirable, masterful poetry. Wonderfully delicious with powerful impact while being so poetically and descriptively pretty. Not to mention highly arousing. Quite an achievement of the highest level, in my opinion!
There's a very fine line, balancing the artfulness of erotica (trying to remain within the mind's eye) vs becoming too graphic— This piece is the perfect union of lush intensity and deeply heated romanticism. You've managed to maintain and find that balance, flawlessly! I was swept away completely.... Ohh swoon!! Talk about thrills and tingles!!! Yes, indeedy.
An utterly outstanding job emanating that desirous joy... again and again and again.... *wink
I exuberantly thank you for sharing this heart pounding journey with us! 🙏🏻
Much love, BB
🐻🐰
🌹 - B
xo
2nd Nov 2021 5:54pm
Dearest, Blue
I have lingered on every word of this beautifully written comment emanating from a genuine heart and a captivatingly sensual soul. I am so glad that the romance shines through as well as the eroticism. That is my ideal sensual scenario the melding of the two. Without the romance the sex is mechanical, oh so stimulating, but ephemeral and hollow.
Thank you so much for this truly kind and loving assessment of my work
.🐻💕🐰
I have lingered on every word of this beautifully written comment emanating from a genuine heart and a captivatingly sensual soul. I am so glad that the romance shines through as well as the eroticism. That is my ideal sensual scenario the melding of the two. Without the romance the sex is mechanical, oh so stimulating, but ephemeral and hollow.
Thank you so much for this truly kind and loving assessment of my work
.🐻💕🐰
2nd Nov 2021 12:58pm
You demonstrate such a wonderful mastery of words and poetry. Another very sensual and hot erotic piece with a great flow. I love being immersed in the gorgeous imagery playing out in such beautifully placed words. Once again, your words play out in the mind vividly so that you can feel and visualize each kiss, touch, and the climax. This is the perfect mix of passion, romance, and sex to really set off fireworks in the mind while not being overly descriptive. Loved it.
2nd Nov 2021 6:11pm
Dearest, Kristina
I am so pleased that you enjoyed this piece and that it moved you in a way that fulfill a poet's dreams. I am thrilled that you find that it appeals to so many levels of your senses. To make the reader feel something is an honor and a privilege I don't take for granted.
You inspire me to keep shooting off firweworks ✨✨💖🌹
I am so pleased that you enjoyed this piece and that it moved you in a way that fulfill a poet's dreams. I am thrilled that you find that it appeals to so many levels of your senses. To make the reader feel something is an honor and a privilege I don't take for granted.
You inspire me to keep shooting off firweworks ✨✨💖🌹
18th Nov 2021 4:28am
25th Jan 2022 9:59pm
Cheers, Kristopher
I enjoyed, very much, writing this piece and I am thrilled that you enjoyed its reading.
I enjoyed, very much, writing this piece and I am thrilled that you enjoyed its reading.
25th Jan 2022 9:03pm
25th Jan 2022 10:02pm
Aww Leticia, thank you for the Sweetlovin 😍 Your comment elicited a huge smile. I am glad that you enjoyed the piece.❣
22nd Feb 2022 2:04am
Whooo-eee!! I'm just gonna step outside for some air..... 😳🔥🔥
Ahem. Lovely reading. Really well done... Bravo!
❤k
Ahem. Lovely reading. Really well done... Bravo!
❤k
22nd Feb 2022 2:27am
Ha ha gotcha❣❣ Thank you so much, K. I used BandLab to record. I use the sky sound filter for my voice...I tbink it has a sort of old-timey radio sound.
I am thrilled that the piece left you breathless...or are you just blowing sunshine...never mind, I'll take it😍
I am thrilled that the piece left you breathless...or are you just blowing sunshine...never mind, I'll take it😍
22nd Feb 2022 3:10am
22nd Feb 2022 4:43am
Yeah, I found a site with pretty awesome free downloads and the background comes with PowerPoint. I spliced the misic to keep the crescendo going.😍
23rd Feb 2022 10:58pm
Hey there, BB!
I adore the whole feeling you generated with the visual, music and of course the tremendous impact of the Author's verbal control and flavor added via spoken word. Damn, how I do so enjoy hearing how the author originally envisions the poem, verbally. It takes your gorgeously crafted piece to another level...
One that works so enormous well.
Excellent work, dear poet
You should really record more!
What a treat this was.... - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
I adore the whole feeling you generated with the visual, music and of course the tremendous impact of the Author's verbal control and flavor added via spoken word. Damn, how I do so enjoy hearing how the author originally envisions the poem, verbally. It takes your gorgeously crafted piece to another level...
One that works so enormous well.
Excellent work, dear poet
You should really record more!
What a treat this was.... - 💙
🌹 - B
xo
Anonymous
18th Oct 2022 6:21am
its so beautiful...full of love
18th Oct 2022 6:32am
Thank you so much, Olivia🌹 I am so pleased that you felt the love in this piece as I try to accentuate the romance and deep sensuality.
Anonymous
18th Oct 2022 7:02am
You have written very well. Thank you for giving me a chance to read..
