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REBEL
Before reading the following, please note, this is by no means written to intimidate you. No, it isn't written to test you either. Even though the title might suggest otherwise.
All rise
He's a human being?
Oh, shut it..
Just look at him..
Nothing is as it seems..
I thought I figured it all out..
I did..
I killed it..
Buried it..
Although it is alive inside..
Fuck tobacco free zones
I am a Rebel..
Who walk freely on foot in the deserts
I don't need a Camel..
I thought, have I ever eaten a Caramel?
Complicated brain neurons a specimen upon which you cannot label..
Oh are you a model?..
I'm someone who If need be, even with less skills I can use a hand trowel..
We can clutch, touch and feel the rush.. Cuddle even if not much..
To read, to, write, to express my thoughts no Level..
You can't sedate me, you can't hypnotize me no feelings and the skin is free from any Scalpel..
An evergreen weed you cannot shovel..
Tune in the channel International and local..
I got myself many brothels..
Everybody goes!
All rise
He's a human being?
Oh, shut it..
Just look at him..
Nothing is as it seems..
I thought I figured it all out..
I did..
I killed it..
Buried it..
Although it is alive inside..
Fuck tobacco free zones
I am a Rebel..
Who walk freely on foot in the deserts
I don't need a Camel..
I thought, have I ever eaten a Caramel?
Complicated brain neurons a specimen upon which you cannot label..
Oh are you a model?..
I'm someone who If need be, even with less skills I can use a hand trowel..
We can clutch, touch and feel the rush.. Cuddle even if not much..
To read, to, write, to express my thoughts no Level..
You can't sedate me, you can't hypnotize me no feelings and the skin is free from any Scalpel..
An evergreen weed you cannot shovel..
Tune in the channel International and local..
I got myself many brothels..
Everybody goes!
Published 27th Oct 2021
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27th Oct 2021 8:02pm
Simply amazing, engaging my imagination and taking it where I will. Thanks. Hugs and peace, Oral
27th Oct 2021 8:48pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2021 10:02pm
I really enjoy this--
in particular, the world of its objects:
camel cigarettes, hand trowels, cuddles, and models--
the attitude / posturing tends to work really well for this reader, especially in the 1st part--
there's a genuine, authentic engagement with the addressee / the situation, even though the reader is kept quite a bit in the dark about that, aside from the general idea that the speaker is "rebelling"...
quite a bit to enjoy here!
reminds me a bit of Tate's "Fuck the Astronauts," especially the first stanza of his poem:
Eventually we must combine nightmares
an angel smoking a cigarette on the steps
of the last national bank, said to me.
I put her out with my thumb. I don’t need that
cheap talk I’ve got my own problems.
It was sad, exciting, and horrible.
It was exciting, horrible, and sad.
It was horrible, sad, and exciting...
Enjoyed!
in particular, the world of its objects:
camel cigarettes, hand trowels, cuddles, and models--
the attitude / posturing tends to work really well for this reader, especially in the 1st part--
there's a genuine, authentic engagement with the addressee / the situation, even though the reader is kept quite a bit in the dark about that, aside from the general idea that the speaker is "rebelling"...
quite a bit to enjoy here!
reminds me a bit of Tate's "Fuck the Astronauts," especially the first stanza of his poem:
Eventually we must combine nightmares
an angel smoking a cigarette on the steps
of the last national bank, said to me.
I put her out with my thumb. I don’t need that
cheap talk I’ve got my own problems.
It was sad, exciting, and horrible.
It was exciting, horrible, and sad.
It was horrible, sad, and exciting...
Enjoyed!
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