The origin of the last one standing (a vile horror story)

Truly awesome comments, I'm humbled.  
I appreciate it so very much.  

A big ol' thank you, T!!  
—B

Breathtakingly good.
Mmm.
Superbly penned.
Terrifyingly brilliant.
Sheer quality.... period!

I LOVE 'terrifyingly brilliant' .... I mean how can I not?!?!? I deeply thank you for such kind words, I.  
I don't think I've EVER tackled a poem quite like this one, so all my horror movie watching this month has definitely come in handy.. lol...

I was certainly under the assumption that this poem would be untouched by commenting... lol (Which I am aok with. I had a blast writing it.).. so I very much appreciate you reading and taking the time. That's a reward, all it's own
(just noticed the RL add, you're awesome, Ty again.)  
Happy early Halloween 🦇
🖤-🥀
—B

Real good captivating story that brought the horror within a dark light of its own. I truly enjoyed.

Thems some smile making words, cs!
Sincerely ;)
It took me a while to get this one together, in addition to me never having written anything like it before, so I'm especially thankful for the shout out.

Can't wait to read your Halloween stuff later in the week!

Much appreciated, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 🖤
—B

This reminds us of a poem, we can't remember the name of it  but it was about a character who's whole existence was about making others happy. Though they was dying and sad on the inside it was about that endless outward appearance. Regardless of whatever the show must go on, once the curtains are raised it's action. We still can't remember the name but this is the forever nightmare with us severing as the monster living this type life. Tight work Lady  

Ohhh no .. I hope you remember it, so I can read it. I'm so curious. Keep me posted if you recall!!

Yes, that's definitely part of it, her keen way of pleasing. It's also that capability that she needs to be able to fool them enough to live... to survive her horrible experience anyway she can... At all costs to anyone in her way too... lol
My horror movie attempt....

Thanks for giving me your thoughts, Me.
I really was questioning myself and I'm so very relieved that you could see where I was taking this piece.

I dig the 'tight work'... :)

Much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

Try "Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy

ohh cool... thanks a bunch!

Sign me up ... well penned B ... nicely done ... put me in the seasonal mood ...

Will do, LilD!.... There's safety in numbers...*wink
lol... I'm so glad you're feeling the scare.!
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lol...

Thanks for visiting, for the generous list add and your 'killer' comments.
🖤 - B

THAT is pretty much scaring me to death.....though I have watched (bits) of British shows where women willingly get mistreated  in a dungeon (a game for money) and the higher up on the scale they go, the worse it gets.

Yesss!!
I was totally aiming for scared to bits! So you do me very excited and proud!!! 👍🏻
Ewww... lol... They say a well written scare is always scariest when pulled from a thread of truth....I absolutely believe that.

Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts, Robert!

You're a gem for reading and taking the time!
🌹-🖤
B

Kisses....Kisses.

Wow Blue that was so awesome. Scary, dark and twisted.i found myself begging her to hold on find the place in her head to block out the surrounding horror
Great job
Love and light
Ron x

I truly love the 'Wow!' Thanks very much for that Ron. I have never written this type of horror based writing before; and was leary af but I figured, I love horror movies so let's see what happens!!

I'm all smiles you found yourself rooting for her! So awesome!

All my gratitude for the list add and your killer (heh heh heh) comments!
Glad you enjoyed my twisted side.. lol 😏


Much love, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

In the horror movies me and you would be the last ones standing. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

haha!! 👍🏻 Yesss! Good call, Francisco
Thanks for being a fellow soul /sole survivor.. I really appreciate you.  
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Just wanted to stop in and say this ink is excellent. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Hi, Frank :)

I really appreciate your visit and I'm stoked that you enjoyed my maiden horror write attempt.
I'm a huge horror fan but normally shy away from writing it. I never really felt like I was a good enough of a writer, I suppose.... So I'm especially grateful for your thoughtful comments.

—Thank you.
🌹 - B

Deliciously dark.

Delectably desolate.

Such a stark vision of a proposed future,
only occurring in the movies, in the minds of most.

The thing about that is the tendency
for there to be a relationship between life and art.

I have heard a proposed future that has been called a "technological hunger games".

I have to say, I think about these things.

I always get to a point where I say:

"Bring it mother fucker."

Nevertheless, a cool excursion into this dystopian vision...

(I want to participate in the Blu
Horror Film Festival.)

heh heh heh

I actually have some movies I downloaded,
some are from last halloween.

I have like probably 4 TB of movies?

Oh...  I ordered a projector!!!  
and a 120" screen!!!

(in case you couldn't tell I'm geeked up about it.)

oh and some purple and black lights
that doe like a half a dozen tricks.

But the projector can do like I think a thirty foot screen?

I can project a Blu signal into the sky.

:)))

Cipher_O

Out.

I mean... Daaaaaamn .... and HELL Yeah!!  
It's movie night at pad Cipher_O!!
📽️🎬🎥🎞️🍿🍫🥤

Just my musings of a horror-verse where women (and basically anyone perceived to be weak) are forced to behave, jumping through evil sadistic hoops, based upon this very fucked up version of society that she's woken up in. Trying to save her own life, avoiding the public demands of streamed acts of incredible horrific torture.

Then, her finding her inner strength to enact her glorious revenge!! Vengeance will be hers!!
Mwahahahaha....😈...

See?!? Loads of horror movie influence... heh heh heh... I too get that, "fuck you motherfucker!", point!!  


I will keep my eye out for the Blu signal in the sky!!  

🌹 - 💙  

✌🏻 - B
THANK YOU  
(for bringing the best of everything, P!)  
x

Surreal.
Reminds me of the 1960s TV show The Prisoner.
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🙏🏼

I kind of remember that show..Not on very long... taken to a weird surreal prison... I think 🤔
Yes, that's the vibe, totally.
I somewhat borrowed the atmosphere /mindset from Wes Craven's the "The Last House on the Left" in my imagination and from the "I Spit On Your Grave" franchise .. that sort of feel, too...brutal, dark.. totally vile... lol...

Thanks for the read, and the generous list add, KP.

Much obliged, - 💙
🌹- B

Dear BV,

Eeeeeekkkkkk! Spooky. Creepy. Sleeping with one eye open. Goose flesh. I won’t sleep. I hate that I’m a scaredy cat yet loved every minute of this. The only thing scarier than this is my visa bill. Spooktacular write. H🌷

Hee hee hee hee! ... 🩸🪓🗡️🔨🩸

I never even figured you'd read this little horror show experiment of mine , much less comment—(only because of the subject matter) so I'm extremely proud and totally syked that you dug deep the bravery; peek through your hands to chance it!! That's courage!... *wink  

(giggling at your visa bill comments, btw! )

Thanks for seeing the scare factor here, H. I don't ever write pieces like this, so scary is DEFINITELY a much much welcomed response!!
I appreciate you taking the time to leave such cute comments and for the generous list add...  

You made my night :)  

Happy Halloween, dear lady! 🎃  
🌹-B  
x

Body modification and horror movies are like the creepiest to me. I remember this movie, the remake of the old 70s, but the newer one pushed more shock. Some of these lines were scary, mentioning her concentration on her objective.

A great entry for the comp.
Excellent spill (no pun intended).

Thanks Walter!
This is my first foray into writing anything trying to resemble horror! So, I am definitely glad you found some scare factor here, that's a little bit promising, indeed! I really appreciate your thoughts, my friend!... Thanks for braving it....
Har Har Har.... 😁

Happy Halloween 🦇
🌹 - 🖤 🧡
—B