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Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
The well-trodden paths are beautiful, without flaws
And their trampled cover is smooth
There are no cobblestones, stones and sharp edges
There are signs from the words
The route is paved and it seems so boring
And every turn is predictable
And every step is already learned by passers-by
Everything is known there, in general
The peaks cannot be conquered in advance -
there are only plateaus
And all the rivers and seas are tamed
And the wind spreads at your feet quite calmly
Never knowing about storms
What boredom! With the crowd, losing their will
From point A to drag to point B...
And the wings are tied so tightly behind the back
And it's cramped, stuffy, fresh in the crowd!
The soul screams - there are other roads
Impenetrable dangerous paths!
But there is scope, there is will, there is freedom!
And my heart beats so loudly in my chest
And it can be scary to most -
The limit is not visible to the eye of those roads
Not many agree to be the first
And who dared, and did not dare
But there are those, challenging fate
And sending fear, peace and pain to hell
They step barefoot over the cliff
Driven only by the wind and the dream
They are honest, stubborn, incorruptible
their Universe is equal to the Soul
And if I ask - how did you live?
They will answer - it does not seem in vain!
Such are the only roads for me...
And their trampled cover is smooth
There are no cobblestones, stones and sharp edges
There are signs from the words
The route is paved and it seems so boring
And every turn is predictable
And every step is already learned by passers-by
Everything is known there, in general
The peaks cannot be conquered in advance -
there are only plateaus
And all the rivers and seas are tamed
And the wind spreads at your feet quite calmly
Never knowing about storms
What boredom! With the crowd, losing their will
From point A to drag to point B...
And the wings are tied so tightly behind the back
And it's cramped, stuffy, fresh in the crowd!
The soul screams - there are other roads
Impenetrable dangerous paths!
But there is scope, there is will, there is freedom!
And my heart beats so loudly in my chest
And it can be scary to most -
The limit is not visible to the eye of those roads
Not many agree to be the first
And who dared, and did not dare
But there are those, challenging fate
And sending fear, peace and pain to hell
They step barefoot over the cliff
Driven only by the wind and the dream
They are honest, stubborn, incorruptible
their Universe is equal to the Soul
And if I ask - how did you live?
They will answer - it does not seem in vain!
Such are the only roads for me...
Author's Note
It's always so interesting to hear about unique places people have been or want to go... :)
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Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 9:43pm
One can never find a true self identity if they follow the herd...climb the mountains, raft the dangerous rivers, unclothe your inhibitions and run wild and free...when staring in the face of danger we have two choices, turn and run or face it head on...you are the latter... refreshing piece k...I'll have to listen when I get out of here in 10 mins ;)
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 10:06pm
That is definitely well put, you can never reach your potential without taking chances. I love climbing mountains, rafting the dangerous rivers, and going off the beaten path. I started my journey early when we moved out of the country when I was young. From there I went through many trials and experienced a combination of very bad and great things but I did get to travel. And everything made me who I am today for better or worse. Thank you so much for reading (and listening when you have a chance) and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 10:49pm
Limits bind with velvet chains, lulling our spirits to sleep. We see the nightmare, not in our dreams, but on our waking to unless drudgery. A few, far too few, do not shake in fear and hide of this our nightmare but, like legends of the gods, pull the curtain of chaos aside revealing the potential of humanity. This, your most gentle poem, cuts the deepest of all your prose, for all our weaknesses have been exposed in razor sharp relief. Worshiping your feet for this poem. An eternity of foot massages are on me.
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:39pm
Ah, your comment is poetry in and of itself. In that chaos and facing our fears we can truly unlock human potential in ourselves and others. We must expose the weaknesses in order to move past them although the razor can definitely hurt sometimes; oh how many cuts and burns shape us. Wow, an eternity of foot massages; I LOVE that! sounds absolutely divine. Thank you so much for reading, or listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
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20th Oct 2021 10:54pm
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20th Oct 2021 11:40pm
That is so true Francisco. We must follow or make our path to really get to where we want to go. Thank you so much for reading, or listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2021 11:00pm
Your voice--it's southern!
Wow...
Nice recording.
Whenever I try to record my voice, it sounds like Tommy Lee Jones with a head cold, but recorded on the same wax cylinder TS Eliot used to record himself reading the Wasteland in 1917...
Oh well.
There's a powerful dis-connect between hearing your voice, and the voice I hear on the page of your poems.
I don't mean that in a good way, or a bad way.
This poem, read in your voice, reminds me a bit of Cavafy's wonderful poem, Ithika, which was read at Jackie O's memorial service.
Apparently, JFK's favorite poem was "I Have a Rendez-vous with Death"--Jackie had better taste in poetry.
Stubborn-ness is best applied to hope!
No sharp edges or unpredictable turns--how unlike the type-face & fonts of your poems;
the seams and wrinkles on the surface of the page, like linguistic inflection points on the page.
Enjoyed!
Wow...
Nice recording.
Whenever I try to record my voice, it sounds like Tommy Lee Jones with a head cold, but recorded on the same wax cylinder TS Eliot used to record himself reading the Wasteland in 1917...
Oh well.
There's a powerful dis-connect between hearing your voice, and the voice I hear on the page of your poems.
I don't mean that in a good way, or a bad way.
This poem, read in your voice, reminds me a bit of Cavafy's wonderful poem, Ithika, which was read at Jackie O's memorial service.
Apparently, JFK's favorite poem was "I Have a Rendez-vous with Death"--Jackie had better taste in poetry.
Stubborn-ness is best applied to hope!
No sharp edges or unpredictable turns--how unlike the type-face & fonts of your poems;
the seams and wrinkles on the surface of the page, like linguistic inflection points on the page.
Enjoyed!

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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:44pm
Hey Mark! You noticed that did you? :p I always love getting a Wow.. Thank you so much, I am so happy you liked it. That's quite the description lol - now I want to hear that. Actually I looked up Elliot reading Wasteland and what's wrong with that? I will have to look up those poems as well. I like that saying about stubbornness. I am definitely stubborn sometimes (I say sometimes lol). Yes my formatting has all kinds of sharp edges and unpredictable turns. :p I always say it's impatient but that's true so I always stubbornly hope that it works. I love if it lines up in a way as to outline linguistic inflection points. I need to go back and listen with that in mind. Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:00pm
I love the tranquility of this, peacefulness of nature… yes, but also a realization of inner peace and the risks to achieve it. Many roads, many decisions. The audio accompaniment was also beautiful.
Quite awesome!
Quite awesome!
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:47pm
Ah yes, inner peace can definitely be a tall order especially these days so I am so happy you found tranquility and peacefulness in this one. So many possible roads, or paths and they all take us somewhere - hopefully for the better but many times learning some very hard lessons or taking a detour through hell even. I really love that you think it's awesome; that really means a lot to me. Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:30pm
You have a forceful voice when delivering these readings.
I'm always impressed by your determination and self assessment to go outside of the of what is standard for most. Your travel and moving to Europe at an early age set markers for you to want more adventures and risk taking opportunities.
This is a powerful message and you performed a public service for those who need a little push to achieve their goals
Well done Kristina
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I'm always impressed by your determination and self assessment to go outside of the of what is standard for most. Your travel and moving to Europe at an early age set markers for you to want more adventures and risk taking opportunities.
This is a powerful message and you performed a public service for those who need a little push to achieve their goals
Well done Kristina
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Ah, the bossy demanding voice. lol Thank you that means a lot to me. I am very determined and always trying to push forward and accomplish my goals which are never static. That is definitely true, moving was very hard and I went through a lot but it definitely set markers like you said for more adventures, risk taking, a strong desire to travel, and to experience new things. I am glad you see it as powerful message, I love doing a service. ;) Thank you so much for the BIG LIKE and RL. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
20th Oct 2021 11:30pm
I love the flow of this. Like being gently but purposely led forward. Indeed, you've written a path for the readers to follow. Very nicely done.
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 00:04am
Hey Styxian, it's great to see you in my comments. :) I am really happy you liked the flow; I like how you described being purposely led forward and giving a path for the reader to follow. That fits so well with the direction and meaning in this one. Thank you so much for reading, or listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 00:34am
Hey BP! That's like me, I want to go everywhere! :) Is there somewhere in particular you always wanted to go? You are welcome, thank you so much for reading, or listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 1:21am
The music and picture are in harmony with the reading.
Great write!! Totally different then the other stuff I have read.
This road you are on is quite lovely!!
Til the next!!!
Great write!! Totally different then the other stuff I have read.
This road you are on is quite lovely!!
Til the next!!!
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 11:47am
Thank you for giving me feedback on the music and picture. It's always hard to know what works and even if the volume is right so that helps me a lot. I am really happy you think it's a great write too. I do love to change things up - keeps it interesting. And I think you are really lovely! :)
Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 1:35am
Love hearing your voice... the added dimension propelled me through...I enjoyed being propelled...L
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21st Oct 2021 11:50am
Hey BC! Thank you for the beautiful compliment. That really means a lot to me. I am so happy I could add some dimension and propel you through in an enjoyable way. :) Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
Dear K,
Sadly, I’d probably trod the beaten path wishing I had the strength and courage to try something new and unexplored. But my back. My knees…🙄
What I loved about this was the fantasy that I COULD explore the unexplored via the imagery you provided in this magnificent poem. And you read it out loud, and you know how much I love that! You were very thoughtful to think of me and do that 😉
Hehe just kiddin’ ya! But seriously, thank you for that. I adore your go for broke approach to life. It’s truly inspirational and really encouraging for those like me who just feel worn out and tired. It was a gorgeous read and listen and guided imagery poem. A true trifecta! H🌷
Sadly, I’d probably trod the beaten path wishing I had the strength and courage to try something new and unexplored. But my back. My knees…🙄
What I loved about this was the fantasy that I COULD explore the unexplored via the imagery you provided in this magnificent poem. And you read it out loud, and you know how much I love that! You were very thoughtful to think of me and do that 😉
Hehe just kiddin’ ya! But seriously, thank you for that. I adore your go for broke approach to life. It’s truly inspirational and really encouraging for those like me who just feel worn out and tired. It was a gorgeous read and listen and guided imagery poem. A true trifecta! H🌷
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 12:09pm
No excuses, I know you want to try something new and unexplored. ;) I am really happy if the imagery helped transport you somewhere new and unexplored in the interim. There are so many amazing places to see and experience, and new cultures are always so interesting. I was definitely thinking of you and hoping you would see this one. :) I know travel helps me to feel renewed and brings back the excitement so perhaps it is the remedy for feeling worn out and tired. Thank you so much for the absolutely wonderful compliment. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 1:55pm
Loved the last line, but the sensual voice was beyond A++... can imagine candlelight listening. Hugs and peace. Oral
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21st Oct 2021 2:09pm
I can imagine all of your travels Oral. I definitely want to know what were the most amazing places you have been. :) Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I adore beyond A++. Sitting with candlelight talking about all the amazing places traveled or to be traveled to sounds awesome. Thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
21st Oct 2021 1:55pm
Absolutely awesome for me personally my favourite place was 25 meters underwater looking at thr fish and corals of the Red Sea
The path changed every dive
Great write beautiful accent
Love and light
Ron x
The path changed every dive
Great write beautiful accent
Love and light
Ron x
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21st Oct 2021 2:10pm
Oh yes! That sounds absolutely amazing. I know the Red Sea is one of the top diving destinations in the world. It must have been so peaceful and serene down there with all the colorful fish and other life. I can imagine the infinite number of paths. I know it is astoundingly beautiful. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment Ron. Love and light back at ya. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
22nd Oct 2021 2:53am
I absolutely adored this spill, and the Read as well. Great job as always.
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23rd Oct 2021 1:18pm
Hey Wh1skey! It's great to see you... where have you been? I am so happy you adored it! Thank you for the wonderful compliment. And Thank you thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Now where is my chainsaw...
Now where is my chainsaw...
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Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
22nd Oct 2021 6:34pm
Based on this poem, the X in KX must be connected to the X-games. A modern dare-succubus you are.
Continue on, trail blazer.
“Without new experiences, something inside of us sleeps. The sleeper must awaken.” – Frank Herbert
Oh, and you got a pretty good voice! 😘
Continue on, trail blazer.
“Without new experiences, something inside of us sleeps. The sleeper must awaken.” – Frank Herbert
Oh, and you got a pretty good voice! 😘
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23rd Oct 2021 1:18pm
I do love the extreme DaVinci. You might not survive the KX games. ;) Wow - a modern dare-succubus; why do I love that so much. I could say a lot about that but... have to keep things clean. lol
Blazing like any good succubus must.
That is a great quote. So true.
Thank you so much for the compliment. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Blazing like any good succubus must.
That is a great quote. So true.
Thank you so much for the compliment. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
23rd Oct 2021 1:24pm
"path" just the word spelled out on a blank page,
cast the imagine of turns and hills, ups and downs.
accomplishments and not. was it right or was it wrong.
the way one should choose.
to feel the race, to feel the heart skip that beat, once or two to feel.
for me, sitting like a homing pigeon back in the safe.
not in vain, i do mumble time to time,
but a gentle regret that i did not strive for more rapid heart beats.
the path spilled upon the page, the beauty of the ink stain, as a finger does trace.
angelic the voice, my mind always reiterates.
cast the imagine of turns and hills, ups and downs.
accomplishments and not. was it right or was it wrong.
the way one should choose.
to feel the race, to feel the heart skip that beat, once or two to feel.
for me, sitting like a homing pigeon back in the safe.
not in vain, i do mumble time to time,
but a gentle regret that i did not strive for more rapid heart beats.
the path spilled upon the page, the beauty of the ink stain, as a finger does trace.
angelic the voice, my mind always reiterates.
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
23rd Oct 2021 2:33pm
Definitely, so many choices and so many paths that all lead to somewhere. Passion and lust, pain and suffering, comfort and familiarity, and so many other places. Accomplishments and failures; always striving to get there but so often not. I love the feeling of a rapid heart beat. I love the paths that lead to new experiences. :)
Thank you for the wonderful comment mystic. You made me so happy with your beautiful compliment on this read. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Thank you for the wonderful comment mystic. You made me so happy with your beautiful compliment on this read. And thank you for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
24th Oct 2021 4:42pm
Your reading grants dimensions to the writing. I'm glad I read it first in silence and then followed along and listened. I love the pace, details and imagery. Beautifully proportional.
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24th Oct 2021 7:19pm
I am so happy you feel it adds dimensions to the writing; that means it is was worthwhile. I think that is a great idea to read first and then listen as that can definitely give a different feel to the writing. Thank you for the compliment, I am glad that all of those elements came together to make something beautifully proportional. :) And thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
26th Oct 2021 4:40pm
Can I get an AMEN❣❣
Wow! This is such a wise piece. First off, hearing your voice is always a particular thrill. When I read your introduction,
"The well-trodden paths are beautiful, without flaws
And their trampled cover is smooth ,"
I was hoping you were going to go exactly where you went with this. As a too risk averse bloke I needed this sermon.
The imagery in this stanza is so poignant and impactful,
"What boredom! With the crowd, losing their will
From point A to drag to point B...
And the wings are tied so tightly behind the back
And it's cramped, stuffy, fresh in the crowd!"
I need to remember that wings are not clipped just tied and get out them scissors or bolt cutters if need be.
This passage abrought some deeply satisfying tingles of anticipation and a whole lot of what if's came to mind,
"But there is scope, there is will, there is freedom!
And my heart beats so loudly in my chest"
Not what-if-I-had-done's but what-if-I-do's.
As you have on so many happy occasions, you have lifted my spirits and infused some hope in me who is prone, as dear Hamlet says, "To grunt and sweat under a weary life," Bravissima my dear Goddess friend 💖🌹
Wow! This is such a wise piece. First off, hearing your voice is always a particular thrill. When I read your introduction,
"The well-trodden paths are beautiful, without flaws
And their trampled cover is smooth ,"
I was hoping you were going to go exactly where you went with this. As a too risk averse bloke I needed this sermon.
The imagery in this stanza is so poignant and impactful,
"What boredom! With the crowd, losing their will
From point A to drag to point B...
And the wings are tied so tightly behind the back
And it's cramped, stuffy, fresh in the crowd!"
I need to remember that wings are not clipped just tied and get out them scissors or bolt cutters if need be.
This passage abrought some deeply satisfying tingles of anticipation and a whole lot of what if's came to mind,
"But there is scope, there is will, there is freedom!
And my heart beats so loudly in my chest"
Not what-if-I-had-done's but what-if-I-do's.
As you have on so many happy occasions, you have lifted my spirits and infused some hope in me who is prone, as dear Hamlet says, "To grunt and sweat under a weary life," Bravissima my dear Goddess friend 💖🌹
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26th Oct 2021 8:20pm
Of course you can! ;)
I love getting a Wow! I am so glad I did not disappoint with the direction of the piece. We are all risk averse to a point, sometimes that is very important but it can also be limiting and keep us from achieving our true potential. Being uprooted at an early age and moved to another country combined with some very difficult things in my history made me much more keen to take risks. It can become an addiction...
Indeed you can always free the wings and fly. I know you have beautiful wings... Get out those scissors or bolt cutters and see where they take you. :)
What would life be without the tingles of anticipation. The excitement of life and possibilities is wonderful. Never lose that... :)
Most importantly I am ecstatic to have lifted your spirits and inspired. And to think I have on many occasions is just the most wonderful thought. You are awesome!
Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
I love getting a Wow! I am so glad I did not disappoint with the direction of the piece. We are all risk averse to a point, sometimes that is very important but it can also be limiting and keep us from achieving our true potential. Being uprooted at an early age and moved to another country combined with some very difficult things in my history made me much more keen to take risks. It can become an addiction...
Indeed you can always free the wings and fly. I know you have beautiful wings... Get out those scissors or bolt cutters and see where they take you. :)
What would life be without the tingles of anticipation. The excitement of life and possibilities is wonderful. Never lose that... :)
Most importantly I am ecstatic to have lifted your spirits and inspired. And to think I have on many occasions is just the most wonderful thought. You are awesome!
Thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
28th Oct 2021 5:39pm
I love the sincerity in your voice, really reaching out to your audience and connecting, registering at an emotional level.
"The limit is not visible to the eye of those roads..." I really liked the profoundness in this and that stanza.
Amazing work.
"The limit is not visible to the eye of those roads..." I really liked the profoundness in this and that stanza.
Amazing work.
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28th Oct 2021 6:05pm
I love connecting with the audience and registering at an emotional level, that is the reason for being here. :) And that I can connect with you and you with me is such a joy. Your feedback and comments really do mean a lot to me and help keep me motivated to continue. :) Thank you!
And thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
And thank you so much for reading, listening, and giving me your thoughts... xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️
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Re: Re. Off the Beaten Path (with Reading)
18th Jul 2022 2:15pm
I feel like wisdom largely comes from suffering and I have been through a lot of stuff. I am so happy you loved listening and I really love that you felt I was saying it to you. That's a really great compliment because that's what I want. Thank you so much for listening and letting me know your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot. xo 🧳🧭✈️🗺️