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Night Work
Now, the chamber
Nude and grinding
Causing electrical current
Steamy rendezvous
Stretched flesh, whips and magic
A phenomenal hardening and wetness
Lush, languid and bittersweet as the sun emerges
Back to the dock
Looking into your eyes
A gentle parting
I go east you west
I look back to see you looking at me
Till we meet again...
Nude and grinding
Causing electrical current
Steamy rendezvous
Stretched flesh, whips and magic
A phenomenal hardening and wetness
Lush, languid and bittersweet as the sun emerges
Back to the dock
Looking into your eyes
A gentle parting
I go east you west
I look back to see you looking at me
Till we meet again...
Author's Note
Inspired by the underground, covert missions, spies in lust ...
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16th Oct 2021 4:38am
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Re: Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 12:40pm
Re. Night Work
Anonymous
16th Oct 2021 4:58am
Lovely piece. Captured my imagination.
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16th Oct 2021 12:41pm
Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 1:08pm
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16th Oct 2021 1:25pm
Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 8:21pm
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16th Oct 2021 8:40pm
Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 10:34pm
My General another masterpiece from your creative mind. Thanks and hugs, }O{
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16th Oct 2021 11:03pm
Re: Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 11:08pm
My General, your training is amazing...wow, the thought of taking over your COMMAND is exciting,,, teach me more. Hugs and peace, }O{
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Re. Night Work
Anonymous
16th Oct 2021 11:05pm
It's a conflation of 2 artistic techniques:
impressionism & abstraction.
Not from the interior perspective, but an impression of an outer, more or less "objective" reality, hence the fragmented impressions, bits of reality, hard and squishy, bumping and clattering.
Yet...the double lens of abstraction.
I suppose, if I wanted to quibble and fuss, I'd wonder which lens comes closer to the original, fixed reality: that is, are these impressions of an abstraction, or abstractions of an impression.
But that would spoil the fun.
Enjoyed & LIKED!
impressionism & abstraction.
Not from the interior perspective, but an impression of an outer, more or less "objective" reality, hence the fragmented impressions, bits of reality, hard and squishy, bumping and clattering.
Yet...the double lens of abstraction.
I suppose, if I wanted to quibble and fuss, I'd wonder which lens comes closer to the original, fixed reality: that is, are these impressions of an abstraction, or abstractions of an impression.
But that would spoil the fun.
Enjoyed & LIKED!
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Re. Night Work
16th Oct 2021 11:17pm
It's more outer limits
I like to give the reader a scenario, a jumping off point
I'm never going to write play by play sex
Dick in cunt stuff
The reader needs to be as covert as I am to get my play
I might be graphic but not mainstream pornhub
Parts and labor
Thanks Mark
Glad you like
I like to give the reader a scenario, a jumping off point
I'm never going to write play by play sex
Dick in cunt stuff
The reader needs to be as covert as I am to get my play
I might be graphic but not mainstream pornhub
Parts and labor
Thanks Mark
Glad you like
Re. Night Work
17th Oct 2021 00:15am
I always love the Chamber! (you must capitalize this one). This is so sexy. My mind and body are definitely full of electrical current remembering the whips and magic, hardening and wetness. This one is definitely dripping with lust and passion. Next one cannot come soon enough. BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Night Work
17th Oct 2021 00:26am
Chamber 13
Come see me
Leave your problems at the door
Step into my masquerade
You'll experience sensory
Top to bottom
An avalanche of pain
A river of sanctuary
I await you
Thx for the trust
RL too
Come see me
Leave your problems at the door
Step into my masquerade
You'll experience sensory
Top to bottom
An avalanche of pain
A river of sanctuary
I await you
Thx for the trust
RL too
Re. Night Work
25th Oct 2021 6:41pm
Very cool, spyish (James Bond) 60s look in the background, looking through windows, into the soul type of vibe here.
Well done sir.
Well done sir.
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Re: Re. Night Work
25th Oct 2021 6:59pm
Definitely some cloak and dagger going on there …
Glad you enjoyed my caper
Thx Wally
Glad you enjoyed my caper
Thx Wally