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Get up
Do not let sadness and anger control the life that you have,
Do not let anyone tell you how to live it,
Do not let anyone validate your purpose
Do not let anyone validate your destiny, someone told you a long time ago you wasn't worthy,
Someone looked you in the eye and said that you wasn't going to make it,
Pushed you down every time you tried to get up,
I say to you right now that you will make it.
I say to you right now that you must make it
I say to you right now
Must tell excuses fear and doubt that it has no place for you or your life,
This is your life that you are fighting for
This is your life that you are living for
Make no mistake, no one can be you,
Better then you
Don't wait for something to happen,
You make it happen
You make it happen for a reason,
You are not here for a season,
You have purpose,
Get off the ground,
Get up!
Move!
And take full responsibility and control,
Free your soul,
Make your heart-whole,
For this thing we call life
Do not let anyone tell you how to live it,
Do not let anyone validate your purpose
Do not let anyone validate your destiny, someone told you a long time ago you wasn't worthy,
Someone looked you in the eye and said that you wasn't going to make it,
Pushed you down every time you tried to get up,
I say to you right now that you will make it.
I say to you right now that you must make it
I say to you right now
Must tell excuses fear and doubt that it has no place for you or your life,
This is your life that you are fighting for
This is your life that you are living for
Make no mistake, no one can be you,
Better then you
Don't wait for something to happen,
You make it happen
You make it happen for a reason,
You are not here for a season,
You have purpose,
Get off the ground,
Get up!
Move!
And take full responsibility and control,
Free your soul,
Make your heart-whole,
For this thing we call life
Published 10th Oct 2021
Author's Note
I wanted to try to make a poem with what I have heard from coach pain from YouTube.
He is very inspirational, so if there is anything that sounds like him. Please let me know. I don't want to overstep with his inspirational words of wisdom.
I just wanted to dedicate a poem to him. An try to inspire someone else in that dark place.
He is very inspirational, so if there is anything that sounds like him. Please let me know. I don't want to overstep with his inspirational words of wisdom.
I just wanted to dedicate a poem to him. An try to inspire someone else in that dark place.
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10th Oct 2021 3:22pm
10th Oct 2021 3:26pm
Thank you, but it was coach pain from YouTube. That inspired me to write this piece.
He is very good inspirational speaker.
He is very good inspirational speaker.
10th Oct 2021 3:28pm
10th Oct 2021 3:29pm
Hey there Wornwolf,
This is an impactful piece and feels to me like a rallying cry! A mantra, reminding yourself and all who reads the patently powerful effect, having a positive outlook and belief system in place, can have.
Such strength and gumption!
Nicely poeted.
Welcome to DUP and I hope you enjoy your time here ;)
🌹 - B
This is an impactful piece and feels to me like a rallying cry! A mantra, reminding yourself and all who reads the patently powerful effect, having a positive outlook and belief system in place, can have.
Such strength and gumption!
Nicely poeted.
Welcome to DUP and I hope you enjoy your time here ;)
🌹 - B
11th Oct 2021 8:36am
I appreciate the compliment but if you have a chance listen to some on YouTube coach pain. He is the one that inspired this poem honestly. He has helped me keep going grit and grind over the years through all the pain. There is a reason why we still here.
We was about to say this sounds like a sermon. This is some great advice for anyone feeling a little down, thank you for sharing Lady. Tight work
12th Oct 2021 00:33am
I wasn't trying to make it sound. Like one of his speeches, I just have always appreciated his speeches. He has helped motivate me in some darkest of days, I even sent the YouTuber this poem. He said that he appreciated that I was inspired by his words to create this. I just wanted to try and help at least someone else that there is another way. An uplift someone if they needed it.
12th Oct 2021 00:41am
