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We're kind of rough around the edges
Why do you love me ?
Poet asks
Is it the imaginary raw sex ?
Or my wisdom as an older bloke?
Maybe it's just my need
Colliding with yours
We're kind of rough around the edges
Beautiful to look at in a chain link way
Poet asks
Is it the imaginary raw sex ?
Or my wisdom as an older bloke?
Maybe it's just my need
Colliding with yours
We're kind of rough around the edges
Beautiful to look at in a chain link way
Published 9th Oct 2021
Author's Note
Vapor fantasies raw and intrinsic....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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9th Oct 2021 4:31am
Forbidden Love is hot. Treat with Kindness and Respect. Give her orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
9th Oct 2021 12:44pm
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9th Oct 2021 5:15am
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9th Oct 2021 12:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
9th Oct 2021 5:44pm
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9th Oct 2021 5:47pm
9th Oct 2021 7:49am
Oh. He loves my rough around the edges; I’m glad you’ve found your rough around the edges too…😇🙏
9th Oct 2021 12:48pm
I'm sure you're a handful to live with and that's what he loves no doubt .....
Keep working it .....
Keep working it .....
9th Oct 2021 2:57pm
9th Oct 2021 3:01pm
This poem is like finding a little safe pocket to sit in. I don't know how you worded this so perfectly, we all clearly connect with this one.
9th Oct 2021 7:35pm
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