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i graduated
its the wall
deeply founded and well preserved
each brick laid with such great misery
a shelter, a cover, a shield
nothing you could foresee
or do to prepare
for it was born in me
the way i am to be.
the time came
the wall stood its ground
all i could do was make sound after
sound-
we made wish after wish
and i,
promise after promise
but no longer were we to prevail
the moments
they turned only into living hell.
Published 7th Oct 2021
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7th Oct 2021 4:36pm
Thank you for reading.
I appreciate you looking within the lines.
interpretation and reflectiveness... does not poetry make.
I appreciate you looking within the lines.
interpretation and reflectiveness... does not poetry make.
7th Oct 2021 10:33pm
Ohh the walls we tend to build or have a predispositions to lay hardened foundations for.
Your self reflection is profound, moving and aches of the type of pain that time and hindsight, afford....It's a brave and poignant write, MS.... I hope you felt some sense of healing from sharing.
Great job.
🌹 - B
Your self reflection is profound, moving and aches of the type of pain that time and hindsight, afford....It's a brave and poignant write, MS.... I hope you felt some sense of healing from sharing.
Great job.
🌹 - B
8th Oct 2021 8:07am
thank you for reading and going back to my mind in my high school days. decades have gone by since i wrote this. maybe i look at things differently now. just been going through old journal writes, going back almost forty years.
thank you for the comment.
thank you for the comment.
9th Oct 2021 9:51am
I think that finding self advancement in dire circumstances is evolution of the highest nature.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
