What lies inside an unfurled bud

as it is un-laced
all control
the petals that fall to the floor
do they mirror the chase
your "chosen choice"
masterfully the rose is cut,
persuasively, he expects the un-furling
it is willed.

enticing, the whip of such a rose
thank you for sharing

In return, I thank you for your gracious comments, dear MS. Your sentiments read like lyrics; purposeful and with beautiful intent splayed across the page. Such understanding and insight makes for a deeply pleasurable..... experience... *wink  

I thank you for taking the time to leave me a little taste of how I was lucky enough to instill a bit of inspiration..... ✨  

Much love— and wishes of dreams come true....  
🌹 - B

As long as the seed is there growth is always a possibility.

And with possibilities there's nothing that can't be achieved.... 🤞🏻




I really like your style, cs
thank you, my dear
🌹 - 🖤

I believe I have said that this site has the most beautiful ladies, the whole world over, and I say this again, with reconfirmed certitude.  This is wonderful & powerful...  So quantum and cool.

You ladies are like...  My Golden Teachers, and I gratefully study you from my shadows.

Oh yes...  I do study the curvatures of your hieroglyphics.

I am so deeply grateful to associate with these things, in any capacity, to be honest.

but like...  to be able to call you my friend...  

damn...  what a treasure...

(thinking out loud perhaps...)

You are super cool B.

beautiful Beautiful.

If there are any better comments, than I haven't read them yet.... Just WOW, C .... Your deep and pure sentiments are absolutely amazing. The heartfelt poignancies of truth and exquisiteness, you're able to express, aren't taken for granted... and are forever appreciated.  
 
I admire your honesty and bask in the freedom of your learned knowledge, dear friend. I adore the 'work ethic' you've obtained ... heh heh heh.... *giggles..... (I lovingly tease!)  
 
My sense of wonder and joy multiply, after reading you've found some beauty coming from my general direction..... I return in kind, with all my humbled and true, heartened thanks.  
 
(I'm the one who's truly grateful -)  
 
Much love and warmth,  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Ooooh too sexy to read without a fan, very nice beautiful work gorgeous. I do love a Rose as you know
Love and light
Ron xx

I am a Rose so it's a given!! *wink
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Ron. I humbly thank you and I'm so very happy that you enjoyed and found some beauty.


You are positively awesome, yourself and I love your encouragement, always.
Much love your way..... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B

You go after what you want until you feel good with orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Is there anything better??!! (I think not!)
I appreciate you reading and for always being so great at leaving comments, Francisco

🌹 -

a sizzling glimpse...cleavage for the imagination...love it...

Oooooo.... that's a brilliantly sexy way to put it, Lawrence. Nicely commented....
*Wink and a peek!!


I appreciate your visits muchly, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - x
—B

Pandering, Perhaps...

Please, Blue, pander me some more!

lol.... you know for you, Reggie, I'd keep it up until tears 😭 were steaming... *wink...  
 
 
Thank you so much for your visit--🌹  
—B

The flowing fire that can ravage, reveal or reiterate the power truth of an unabashed want— for something so deeply innate...
....

Your comments are lovely and terrifically inspirational, DW.... Wow... thanks for taking the time to help me kick start my creative juices...

Much love,
🌹 - B

Delicate, vulnerable,  insightful.
Honest passion.....  held for the one who will peel back petals....open delights.

Ooh, your words are lush and perfectly stated!

Tis a dream, yes.... of giving (with ardent delight) the most precious gift, imo.... after finding the 'needle in the haystack' of proved worthiness....


Much thanks for sharing within this lovely dream state..... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B

Bluevelvete, you are an absolute poetic goddess. Your poetry breathes!!!!.....and in this MASTERful write breathing heavy! Your talent has no boundaries. You have that uncanny ability to stimulate your readers with your genius where your words/poetry has a pulse. You have complete Control with every Submission!!!! You are amazing!!!!!!!!!

OMG - FF!!!!!  
I am sooooo happy to see you return!! Yesss!!! 🎉  
This was such a truly exciting and wonderful surprise, dear friend. Your comments and presence on my page are mind 🤯 blowing!!!  
Just wow - I'm completely overwhelmed by the awesomeness, it's the BEST jolt of positive energy!  
The beautiful and touching comments you've left me are far far too kind touching and move me, beyond. My heart is full and my face is blushing.... I humbly thank you from the bottom of my heart - 💙  

I'm over the moon that you still found a bit of 'mastery' within my spill ... heh heh heh...😈 😋  

Please, try not to be a stranger and I wish you all the best, (if I don't see you for a while... ✨ 💫 ✨)  

Much love and endless friendship,  
🌹 - 💙  
xo  
B

So deep the well of nourishing passion in this piece. Beautifully written !

What a truly lovely sentiment, Tony. Thank you so much for that extraordinarily kind compliment.
I am so delighted that you felt the passion, within.

I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts and I hope to see you again in the days ahead - ✨

Warmest regards,
🌹 - B

Excellent choice of words Blue. Sensual and so elegant. I couldn't almost help but feel the format of the poem resembled the stem of a rose, then again my eyes sometimes see things.

Beautiful work.

What truly kind and supportive comments, W. Thanks for taking the time, I cherish your visits and your insights.

I think you're on to something with your structure idea... *wink

🌹-B

Hey there, Selina ;)
What a true pleasure to see you 🦋

I deeply appreciate you taking the time to visit and for leaving me such wonderfully charged, meaningful comments —🙏🏻 I'm all smiles that you've found a bit of reflection as well as some heady exhilaration.... How incredibly cool!

All my humble gratitude for the list add and your thoughtful, generous sense of being.

You're always welcome here!

Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

This goes well with your current avatar.  The shy, maybe even demur public persona.  But when taken from the herd and isolated, her outer defenses peeled back like a tangerine. Only to find her firm, juicy sweet core.  Open her segments, teasing the membrane and watch the pulp drip.  A juicy delight, open for the taken.

The need to be picked, man-handled and explored; you blush with appreciation.

I harbor much that I choose not to have out there for public consumption, that's very true. I feel no need nor desire to constantly grandstand. Those who continually beat a drum to center a spotlight, are needing to do so for a reason that's never usually much good, in the end...

There's something to be said for the cunning talents and formidable strengths that you must possess to have found a way to capture .... my attention... the way that readies me in all my intensely mouth-watering and divinely succulent ripeness....

My blushing cheeks, of both sorts.... are silent pleas and palpable physical aching signs of the hunger that awaits the pure discovery of my full excavation.

🌹-🔍🔎
♡

Your reply is why you are an artist and I'm not. In a few minutes you came up with 1st class poetic, engaging reply.

flattery gets you...... everywhere. ;p



Thank you, dear Leo
💋

To be schooled in obedience by the perfect master sounds like the harmony of the spheres. There is luster in your words that shines from a position of submissive dreams that surely will find their way to deeper motions and emotions in the hands of a truly noble knight whose dominance you worship as he does you. I admire how you put trust in the right man to hold you in sweet bondage.  In the darkness of a veil, there is liberation for a woman who can let herself be trained in the arts of subservience. For in such a role you will find your destiny.  

XoXoXo
John

My darling,
The depths of which you understand my true heart and the beautiful way my particular fetishistic needs are indelibly imbued; seared to the core essence of what makes me, me.... leaves me awed. I think your talent to really peek inside, makes me covet our lovely exchanges and cherish them and you that much more. It's rare to feel so accepted and special.... I can't thank you enough for bringing me to those realizations, John.

You leave me breathless, my dear
A thousand thank you's and a thousand more...

-💙
Susan

The visuals you create for your poems is as amazing as your writings. I love how you format your words. You present with such professionalism and dedication. Your a true auteur. xo

This style seems to have changed as I grew more comfortable and confident with my writing, I believe. I kind of see it as a little gimmicky now, not that that was my original intent or anything.... I also see the beauty in it's structure and flow, especially being this kind of visual interpretation of my submissive side meant to compliment, I think is where my mind was at the time.

In any event, I really adore that you could feel the essence of what I had hoped to convey. You're really attuned, something that I wholeheartedly appreciate.

Again, I'm thankful and beyond stoked to have you leave your thoughts with me.... love that you dig what I created..

-B