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submission.
a lone drop of him
to wet an opening bud
forever his rose
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 28th Sep 2021
| Edited 16th Sep 2023
Author's Note
©Blu2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 5:12am
Re: Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 12:26pm
Ohhh... nirvana!!
*Sigh, that's truly a job well written, methinks! I am all smiles and filled with deep gratitude, Colin.... Thank you for such a terrifically awesome comment.... Ambrosia, is one of my favorite words, btw.... Excellent choice! ... lol... *wink..
I appreciate you reading, the list add and all your supportive encouragement.... It means so much to me.
🌹 - 💙
B
*Sigh, that's truly a job well written, methinks! I am all smiles and filled with deep gratitude, Colin.... Thank you for such a terrifically awesome comment.... Ambrosia, is one of my favorite words, btw.... Excellent choice! ... lol... *wink..
I appreciate you reading, the list add and all your supportive encouragement.... It means so much to me.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 5:30am
The golden nectar was good to you. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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28th Sep 2021 12:29pm
hahaha.... You always crack me up, Francisco. I have been lucky, indeed.... Thanks so much for your comments....
I appreciate you. 🌹
I appreciate you. 🌹
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 5:49am
Re: Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 12:31pm
Heh heh... I can assume that my senryś packed it's proper and intended punch... lol...
Glad you enjoyed, R
Have an incredible day :)
🌹 - B
I appreciate you stopping by!
Glad you enjoyed, R
Have an incredible day :)
🌹 - B
I appreciate you stopping by!
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 9:06am
Got to.love a Rose glistening with the freshest dew
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
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28th Sep 2021 12:36pm
Oh, I heartily agree, my dear poet!! Even more so and especially when it's a result from this particular senryś's tale, told. Heh heh heh 😈
I'm so grateful for your visit, the list add and your mutual love and respect for thinly veiled eroticism...( I adore being peas in a pod!... 👍🏻)
Much love from across the pond...
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm so grateful for your visit, the list add and your mutual love and respect for thinly veiled eroticism...( I adore being peas in a pod!... 👍🏻)
Much love from across the pond...
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 11:35am
Thank you for this little jewel of a poem! Woke me up!
It really is beautiful.
It really is beautiful.
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28th Sep 2021 12:23pm
Ooooo!! .... What a lovely Cheshire Cat smile I am wearing, reading your delicious comments!, LV.
I am glad that I could awaken and infuse a little bit of beauty into your day ;)
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, I always adore the visits - 💙
🌹 - B
I am glad that I could awaken and infuse a little bit of beauty into your day ;)
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me, I always adore the visits - 💙
🌹 - B
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 12:06pm
the retention of that drop
control
true balance
hence the pressure not to pop.
the simple way,
you control me, indeed
with this read.
wonderful picture,
wonderful words.
control
true balance
hence the pressure not to pop.
the simple way,
you control me, indeed
with this read.
wonderful picture,
wonderful words.
1
Re: Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 12:16pm
... and truly wonderful comments.
I can't think of a better way to start my morning. Thank you, MS.
I am beaming.
🌹 - 💙
B
I can't think of a better way to start my morning. Thank you, MS.
I am beaming.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 12:20pm
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28th Sep 2021 12:43pm
Re. submission.
Anonymous
28th Sep 2021 7:23pm
Pure.
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28th Sep 2021 10:59pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
28th Sep 2021 7:28pm
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Re: Re. submission.
29th Sep 2021 1:31am
Hey there, Darkwords :)
I am so grateful you stopped by and left your thoughts. I'm all smiles, reading your new fan status! m Yesss!! That's awesome and I am so so appreciative 🙏🏻
So delighted you felt that sensuality emanating...
Don't be a stranger - 🌹
-B
I am so grateful you stopped by and left your thoughts. I'm all smiles, reading your new fan status! m Yesss!! That's awesome and I am so so appreciative 🙏🏻
So delighted you felt that sensuality emanating...
Don't be a stranger - 🌹
-B
Re: Re. submission.
29th Sep 2021 1:24am
Thank you , Tim.
I always get a deep thrill seeing you on my page! 🦋
It's a quirky little peccadillo of mine to try to write my bdsm themes with a small bit of tenderness, infused ... I adore the dichotomy....Its exhilarating... Hopefully that's how it read...
Lol... 🤷🏻♀️...
I am so grateful for your visit, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I always get a deep thrill seeing you on my page! 🦋
It's a quirky little peccadillo of mine to try to write my bdsm themes with a small bit of tenderness, infused ... I adore the dichotomy....Its exhilarating... Hopefully that's how it read...
Lol... 🤷🏻♀️...
I am so grateful for your visit, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. submission.
28th Sep 2021 8:13pm
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28th Sep 2021 10:58pm
Your comments always leave me so full of hope and warmth, LilD....I'm all smiles, that you liked it
Thank you for taking the time,
I really appreciate it
🌹 - 💙
Thank you for taking the time,
I really appreciate it
🌹 - 💙
Re. submission.
29th Sep 2021 7:04pm
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29th Sep 2021 8:04pm
🎯
Thanks so much, bk
I am so happy you thought so - ☺
I am deeply appreciative of all your visits today
Yep, totally basking.... lmao...
Returned hugs and kisses too
🌹 - B
Thanks so much, bk
I am so happy you thought so - ☺
I am deeply appreciative of all your visits today
Yep, totally basking.... lmao...
Returned hugs and kisses too
🌹 - B
Re. submission.
30th Sep 2021 00:43am
Re: Re. submission.
30th Sep 2021 8:44am
Awww... Thanks so much, journey.!
I love that you think so and I'm all smiles, you enjoyed!
I am truly grateful for your visits to see me it means a lot. Plus, it brings me great joy and a bit of motivation to know that I can share a tad bit of loveliness, too.
I appreciate you -💙
🌹 - B
I love that you think so and I'm all smiles, you enjoyed!
I am truly grateful for your visits to see me it means a lot. Plus, it brings me great joy and a bit of motivation to know that I can share a tad bit of loveliness, too.
I appreciate you -💙
🌹 - B
Re: Re. submission.
30th Sep 2021 8:25pm
Hey there ;)
Thanks so much for visiting and for the 'like'. I am glad you enjoyed reading and even more so that you left your thoughts upon my page.
Nice meeting you - 💙
I hope you enjoy your time here with us.
You're welcome, anytime
🌹 - B
Thanks so much for visiting and for the 'like'. I am glad you enjoyed reading and even more so that you left your thoughts upon my page.
Nice meeting you - 💙
I hope you enjoy your time here with us.
You're welcome, anytime
🌹 - B
Re: Re. submission.
30th Sep 2021 8:31pm
That's wonderful to hear.
I definitely hope you enjoy your time here! Please feel free to reach out with any questions, if needed...
Your feedback skills will absolutely improve the more you read and the more you reply. Hang in there!!! - ☺
-B
I definitely hope you enjoy your time here! Please feel free to reach out with any questions, if needed...
Your feedback skills will absolutely improve the more you read and the more you reply. Hang in there!!! - ☺
-B
Re. submission.
1st Oct 2021 8:19am
Fingers pricked by thorns, yet love turns pain into desire. A rose by any other name still leaves small drops of blood along her path so she my find her way back to my heart. Peace sorceress.
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1st Oct 2021 7:49pm
Your comments always make me feel a particular kind of way.... unique and individualized.... specifically applied to your thoughts and generous nature. I ponder and bask and wholly appreciate your soulfulness.... It's just beautiful.
Thank you for everything, dearest poet.
You have been and are, a very bright light here... and I'm so fortunate and incredibly grateful.
Much love and peaceful thoughts your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for everything, dearest poet.
You have been and are, a very bright light here... and I'm so fortunate and incredibly grateful.
Much love and peaceful thoughts your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. submission.
1st Oct 2021 8:18pm
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From your mouth to God's ears..... heh heh heh 😈
Thanks for that killer imagery for me to gnaw on and ponder, cs..... yum 😋
I appreciate you taking the time and freaking love your visits!
🌹
Thanks for that killer imagery for me to gnaw on and ponder, cs..... yum 😋
I appreciate you taking the time and freaking love your visits!
🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Oct 2021 11:45pm
6th Oct 2021 4:44am
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Re: Re. submission.
Hey there, Nobody7... ;)
You're absolutely 100% correct... There's so so sooo much more.... You'd probably be shocked, methinks.... It's purposely pent up..... always trying.... clawing, to find an outlet ...
Sometimes, it can....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments,
and I deeply thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I look forward to seeing you... again 🦋
🌹 - B
You're absolutely 100% correct... There's so so sooo much more.... You'd probably be shocked, methinks.... It's purposely pent up..... always trying.... clawing, to find an outlet ...
Sometimes, it can....
I appreciate your thoughtful comments,
and I deeply thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I look forward to seeing you... again 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. submission.
19th Oct 2021 1:15am
Didn't think I'd see so much sensuality in a little senryu.
Just wow.
Your pen is on fire.
Just wow.
Your pen is on fire.
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Re. submission.
19th Oct 2021 1:40am
Lol.. I definitely do my best to!
Thanks so much for finding the eroticism within!
💧😏🌸
I appreciate you, W!
B
Thanks so much for finding the eroticism within!
💧😏🌸
I appreciate you, W!
B
Re. submission.
14th Jul 2022 8:54pm
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14th Jul 2022 11:39pm