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from the day's mixed moods :: 1-5 miscellany minimalism
1.
::this vicious thus ::
yes sir, second jabbed.
but, where are the jobs...
hmm. the real parasites
are..... _________,, you know.
2.
:: viral expressionism vs writer's block ::
love this feverish temper
i burn fluently high now...
than the wordless asphyxia
of a marooning heart.. by
the summing up chronic toxins
of a pretty veiled world's smiling
assassin acts- a slow python kill
more a sleeper cell terrorism
3.
:: no number game here, meow ::
cats are better than stats.
in all probability perhaps.
they don't know the math,
you gaming robo corps...
4.
:: 'Thala' Dhoni ::
the hi-watt crickets
spark fire tonight in
victory stridulations..
'yellove' ev is the lang
of your diehard people,
Captain Storming Calm
5.
:: a dazzle du dawn today...::
..by the Danielesque- Poetic
Sun in return.. You are such force..
..of epic poetry & pure soul
dear Poet Max. . .says quick
this lil minimalism~ maniac
Published 26th Sep 2021
| Edited 29th Jun 2024
Author's Note
from today-'s or nowaday's happening chaos..of mixed huey emotions & essence.. comes this scribbled 1-5 extemporaneous minimalism.the
4th one a salute to M.S.Dhoni & cricket, 5th one is a pure respect & live to our own Du sun & star Daniel.welcome back & best health friend adored poet soul!
hope you feel these writes or bear up with them;) .. keep safe these times, light love ev dearz xx
*pic :web. #Beksinski's last work on day of his death. somehow felt apt for this piece.
*shared fr minimalist comp.
4th one a salute to M.S.Dhoni & cricket, 5th one is a pure respect & live to our own Du sun & star Daniel.welcome back & best health friend adored poet soul!
hope you feel these writes or bear up with them;) .. keep safe these times, light love ev dearz xx
*pic :web. #Beksinski's last work on day of his death. somehow felt apt for this piece.
*shared fr minimalist comp.
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Such beauty, in your presence.... the love is power packed tons of emotion spilt within those tidbits of clever poetic noshes! Yess!! Fantastic...
Some really excellent examples of varying degrees and outputs of feelings.. An amazingly cool spectrum to behold and delve into ... tender, excited, concerned, questioning....
It's so nice to have such a wonderful DU friend, return and bestow his takers.... Makes for a great day!
Really enjoyed reading, Uma - Outstanding ink-🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Some really excellent examples of varying degrees and outputs of feelings.. An amazingly cool spectrum to behold and delve into ... tender, excited, concerned, questioning....
It's so nice to have such a wonderful DU friend, return and bestow his takers.... Makes for a great day!
Really enjoyed reading, Uma - Outstanding ink-🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
27th Sep 2021 12:52pm
Exquisite delivery of small scribblings on big themes. Beksinski was contemptuous of those who sought meaning in his art work. They just existed.
Probably the first cricket vignette in DU history. Lol. Good you wrote for Daniel too. Loved these doo.
Love me xx
Probably the first cricket vignette in DU history. Lol. Good you wrote for Daniel too. Loved these doo.
Love me xx
28th Sep 2021 2:54am
29th Sep 2021 6:33pm
I was thinking as I read, before I got the Author section, that it is a succinct and revealing expose of the zeitgeist. Seems like I wasn't far off the mark. 💖🙏
20th Dec 2021 7:58pm
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14th Nov 2024 4:58pm
Yes my dear one lighted soul friend .. will do. need to read a lots of u n my adoreds’ in du xx love ev A
14th Nov 2024 5:10pm
14th Nov 2024 9:31pm
Sure Missed you & du terribly. hope will be here with you lovable poetic souls . love xx
