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Nightswimming
Strength awakens
slick
w(h)etted
passion
irony smiles wry
at a lost love
newly
realized
Lavender
hued
happiness
is potent
visceral effervescence
Flowering blossoms
scent the night,
adding breezes
of perfumed bliss
Hybridized—
immutable beauty
fortifies delicate brawn
amid nature's
sustaining
ebb and flow
Hands pull fierce,
idyllic waves
asunder
Distinctive form
invites ardent
fervor.... reclaiming
How enduring,
this blistering
radiating endurance
Thine purpose driven heart
emanating deep
within,
is desirous fulfillment
O' mighty
'tis pleasurable a burn
penetrating
searing
carefully
caressing
Of purest truth
(in body and mind alike)
A lush whimsical tide
tenderly to wash
silky smooth skin,
cleansing
a soul's harsh divisions
Reaffirmations
teeter upon
honey'd lips,
dying to burst
infused of sweetened
oxygenated
endorphin'd breaths
Muscles expand
then
rigorously contract
hard aching
in requisite splendour
-Lighter
than
light-
A body's essence
utterly...
transcends
Steeped hope,
surrounds wholly
determined darkness
enhanced by
dreamscape noises
pain and pleasure
entwine
peaking in exhaustion
onyx mist
lazily
d i s s o l v e s
to bathe—
exquisite
Author's Note
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 2:34pm
Hi, Rian :)
I adore you and your incredible comments... I know It's always going to be a good day when I see you have visited... Yay! The ability you have to personify and deeply dive into the very heart of what I try to exude or even just slightly get across, leaves me spellbound!! Your comment phrasing and lovely gusto remind me of Daniel Christensen's (oh how I miss him and his writings!) and the way he was able to so brilliantly convey himself... It's a similar adoration that I have for you both.... So, I wholly thank you for letting me be reminded of him.... You're a bright spot and I love the light you shine....
Much love and respect your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I adore you and your incredible comments... I know It's always going to be a good day when I see you have visited... Yay! The ability you have to personify and deeply dive into the very heart of what I try to exude or even just slightly get across, leaves me spellbound!! Your comment phrasing and lovely gusto remind me of Daniel Christensen's (oh how I miss him and his writings!) and the way he was able to so brilliantly convey himself... It's a similar adoration that I have for you both.... So, I wholly thank you for letting me be reminded of him.... You're a bright spot and I love the light you shine....
Much love and respect your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 7:52am
Your deft pen took me into an erotic dream beyond anything remotely ordinary in its sensuality. This is magnificent. Each nuanced sensuality took me deep into a world of bliss and passion that I never wanted to end.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 2:38pm
Ahhh... That fluidity where time is on pause and the sensuality and desire can foment.... so very willingly! I loved your comments and the generosity of the power behind them.... Purrr worthy, John!! I appreciate the list add and all the time that you've taken to leave me your thoughts, today. It's always a pleasure seeing you and something that I look forward to, always!
Loads of hugs and kisses - 💙
Susan
xoxo
Loads of hugs and kisses - 💙
Susan
xoxo
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 8:14am
Go beautiful back with a bang, smashed the poetic ball clear out the park. I'm delighted you are home where you belong
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 2:47pm
I tried to write something different from my usual and hopefully it can be something that people might give a chance, by reading.... We'll see..
I am so grateful and lucky to have you here and in my corner.... I adore you and the thoughtfulness you've shown me.
I appreciate it all, so very much 🙏🏻
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I am so grateful and lucky to have you here and in my corner.... I adore you and the thoughtfulness you've shown me.
I appreciate it all, so very much 🙏🏻
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 1:08pm
Such a great piece of art this is. Hope all is well with you my friend. And if not, well you have plenty of friends at DUP 😁
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 1:09pm
You honor me with such wonderful comments, DC.... A big heartfelt thank you.
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 3:50pm
Bluevelvete,
Your writing transferred me back to that first time I took an unclothed plunge into the dark unknown and surfaced transformed! Beautifully written.
down2dirt
Your writing transferred me back to that first time I took an unclothed plunge into the dark unknown and surfaced transformed! Beautifully written.
down2dirt
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
Hey there down2dirt,
I am all smiles that you found some semblance of enjoyment within my spill ;) I loved that you were able to find glimpses of that first night-time skinny dip! What a tremendous and cool memory to be able to elicit ... I thank you so much for taking the time to read and for leaving those thoughts. It's truly truly meaningful to me; inspiring me with self confidence along with the motivation to keep on a forward path, ahead....
It's so nice to seeing you 🦋
🏊 🌃 🌙
Much love and gratitude your way....
🌹 - B
I am all smiles that you found some semblance of enjoyment within my spill ;) I loved that you were able to find glimpses of that first night-time skinny dip! What a tremendous and cool memory to be able to elicit ... I thank you so much for taking the time to read and for leaving those thoughts. It's truly truly meaningful to me; inspiring me with self confidence along with the motivation to keep on a forward path, ahead....
It's so nice to seeing you 🦋
🏊 🌃 🌙
Much love and gratitude your way....
🌹 - B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 7:34pm
Eternity existing within a single moment of time. Every spiritual guide talks of 'living in the moment' yet only you have created that moment by showing the path to a sensual awakening. Ah, to exist as a small fish nibbling on your toes. Peace Sorceress.
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
Dearest shaman,
It's words like yours and the unfiltered inspiration you so kindly and generously permeate me with, that allow for such clarity and hope to invade my mind's eye... filtering throughout, making it's way to my pen....
Thank you for the generous list add and your thoughtful remarks; you made sunshine where there was only rain.
🌹 - 💙
B
It's words like yours and the unfiltered inspiration you so kindly and generously permeate me with, that allow for such clarity and hope to invade my mind's eye... filtering throughout, making it's way to my pen....
Thank you for the generous list add and your thoughtful remarks; you made sunshine where there was only rain.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 8:01pm
There’s something about the night and the water at night, “ a body’s essence utterly… transcends!”
Perfect
NG 🌹
Perfect
NG 🌹
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 10:58pm
I am totally smiling ☺ and loving this comment, so much, NG. I appreciate you reading and I'm overjoyed that you found a teenie bit of perfect, from within my words ... I wholly agree, there's a smidge of magic swimming under the stars...without a doubt! 🏊 🌟 ✨
Thanks so much for stopping by,
It's a pleasure
🌹 - 💙
B
B
Thanks so much for stopping by,
It's a pleasure
🌹 - 💙
B
B
Re. Nightswimming
21st Sep 2021 8:21pm
Skinny dipping is hot. Is that you on that picture? Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
22nd Sep 2021 8:36am
Skinny dipping is cool.... lol.... feels lovely, indeed...I thank you for reading and your comments, Francisco.
🌹
It's appreciated
🌹
It's appreciated
Re. Nightswimming
22nd Sep 2021 1:52am
To cloth passion in a dance of a thousand veils, tis an art I thank you for sharing. 🌼
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
Hey there AJ :)
It's a dream and a true lovely joy to read your silken comments. I'm left utterly beaming...
All my warmest appreciation for the list add and the poetic loveliness of your kind words
You made my early morning!
🌹 - B
It's a dream and a true lovely joy to read your silken comments. I'm left utterly beaming...
All my warmest appreciation for the list add and the poetic loveliness of your kind words
You made my early morning!
🌹 - B
Re. Nightswimming
22nd Sep 2021 5:28am
Re: Re. Nightswimming
22nd Sep 2021 7:42am
Awww..... That's got to be the best compliment! Thanks so much for that, PR. I deeply appreciate you taking the time; it makes me incredibly happy to know that you felt that kind of draw! I appreciate you leaving me the generous list add and total smile from ear to ear....
Much love and gratitude,
🏊 🌃 🌙
🌹 - B
Much love and gratitude,
🏊 🌃 🌙
🌹 - B
Re. Nightswimming
22nd Sep 2021 7:29pm
Sensual serenity and baptism.
If you tire or the water become perilous, the double O is a certified lifeguard. In case you need assistance.
🌊🏊♀️👙
If you tire or the water become perilous, the double O is a certified lifeguard. In case you need assistance.
🌊🏊♀️👙
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
Dearest Leo, The water washes away all that needs cleansing..... bathing one's self, especially under the moon's umbra, magically soothes a tattered soul.
Ohh the security derived, from such talented and accredited brawn.... makes for a delightful sense of well being and some serious goosebumps in the sexiness category.... *wink
You're a jack of all trades, methinks.... 😏😉
🩳🌊👙🌙🌌
xoxo - B
(Thanks for reading and your comments.... I appreciate it, muchly)
Ohh the security derived, from such talented and accredited brawn.... makes for a delightful sense of well being and some serious goosebumps in the sexiness category.... *wink
You're a jack of all trades, methinks.... 😏😉
🩳🌊👙🌙🌌
xoxo - B
(Thanks for reading and your comments.... I appreciate it, muchly)
Re. Nightswimming
23rd Sep 2021 3:43am
Dear BV,
I could relate to all the comments above. There’s such a sensual feeling and spiritual freeing in a night skinny dip. Although I’ve never actually skinny dipped I have gone night swimming and what I found so in sync with your poem was the sound of the water against the silence of the night. It was almost like an orchestra of crystal glasses lightly touched. Very twinkly. This doesn’t sound like it makes much sense or relate to your lovely write but my head just went there😔
H🌷
I could relate to all the comments above. There’s such a sensual feeling and spiritual freeing in a night skinny dip. Although I’ve never actually skinny dipped I have gone night swimming and what I found so in sync with your poem was the sound of the water against the silence of the night. It was almost like an orchestra of crystal glasses lightly touched. Very twinkly. This doesn’t sound like it makes much sense or relate to your lovely write but my head just went there😔
H🌷
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
Dear Honoria,
I think your idea of hearing an orchestral *tinkling* of crystal glasses makes perfect sense to me.... it's such a close association, music and motion... A memory or sense of nostalgic past that swells an emotional feel of freedom and floating.... I absolutely love where my little write was able to take you..... I thank you for sharing that with me. So pretty and tender.
(I hope you get to experience skinny dipping just once.... It's totally worth it... I promise *wink)
I wholeheartedly appreciate your generous list add and all the wonderful kindness you have shown me along my journey here..... It's helped me become a much better writer.... There's really not a big enough thank you I can offer for that - 🙏🏻... Yet, I needed you to know that I sincerely do....
Much love, dear lady
🌹 - 💙
✨ 🏊 🌃 🌙
-B
I think your idea of hearing an orchestral *tinkling* of crystal glasses makes perfect sense to me.... it's such a close association, music and motion... A memory or sense of nostalgic past that swells an emotional feel of freedom and floating.... I absolutely love where my little write was able to take you..... I thank you for sharing that with me. So pretty and tender.
(I hope you get to experience skinny dipping just once.... It's totally worth it... I promise *wink)
I wholeheartedly appreciate your generous list add and all the wonderful kindness you have shown me along my journey here..... It's helped me become a much better writer.... There's really not a big enough thank you I can offer for that - 🙏🏻... Yet, I needed you to know that I sincerely do....
Much love, dear lady
🌹 - 💙
✨ 🏊 🌃 🌙
-B
Re. Nightswimming
23rd Sep 2021 10:47pm
Your poetry is a blessing in ways more than one can see. Keep it flowing.
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
23rd Sep 2021 10:55pm
That's one of the best comments I have been lucky enough to be paid.... I deeply appreciate it and sincerely thank you, CS.
I will do my best to keep my particular strung together words flowing strong...
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
I will do my best to keep my particular strung together words flowing strong...
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Nightswimming
11th Oct 2021 4:52pm
I wonder if you're still reading from the darkness of the wings.... this poem is sadness mixed with a bit of refreshing hope and promise.... as the cool night water washes over.... cleansing away the pain.... soaking a body's hurt..... while thoughts permeate for want of understanding.....
(i miss you)
(i miss you)
Re: Re. Nightswimming
11th Oct 2021 6:57pm
Wow! ... To me, that's deeply meaningful and a perfect 👌🏻 comment.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts , Hashman
It's a true pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts , Hashman
It's a true pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Nightswimming
18th Oct 2021 1:00am
"visceral effervescence" and "flowering blossoms" I like how these and other phrases through the piece bathe in sensuality and natural flow.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. Nightswimming
18th Oct 2021 1:27am
Awww... Thanks so much for those kind words, my friend. I'm so very glad you enjoyed the 'soak' and found it to be all that you described.... I'm humbled and very appreciative 🙏🏻
It's always lovely seeing you 🦋
🌹 B
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It's always lovely seeing you 🦋
🌹 B
x