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Whisper of my soul
These lines are mine for you - without any memorized phrases,
This is a sea of my poems ... About you ... For you ... And about us ...
This is the whisper of my soul ... I give it with love -
It beats in my chest ... with a bright flame ... a feeling ...
"I love…"
This is a sea of my poems ... About you ... For you ... And about us ...
This is the whisper of my soul ... I give it with love -
It beats in my chest ... with a bright flame ... a feeling ...
"I love…"
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Re. Whisper of my soul
19th Sep 2021 11:12pm
such great expression
and even more the delivery.
whispers are nice.
thank you for sharing
and even more the delivery.
whispers are nice.
thank you for sharing
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19th Sep 2021 11:26pm
Hey mystic, it's so great to see you! here's to that sexy whisper that lightly touches the ear with a breath and sends tingles to your toes. That's the expression and delivery, right?. ;) 👅🌬️👂xo
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19th Sep 2021 11:34pm
i was thinking of the poem's words...tingling the toes.
however...as sexy whisper touching one's ear...might make the toes curl.ha
however...as sexy whisper touching one's ear...might make the toes curl.ha
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Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 00:07am
Ultimate love
Her partner knows where they stand
There is no greater feeling than to know this rapture
I love this poem
It says so much
It's complete and desired
Lucky to receive such a gift .....
Her partner knows where they stand
There is no greater feeling than to know this rapture
I love this poem
It says so much
It's complete and desired
Lucky to receive such a gift .....
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Re: Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 00:59am
Our desire is endless to find that ultimate love; to express it in words, actions, feelings, and truly touch the heart and soul in sweet rapture... Sometimes we can say a lot with few words, I am so happy if you feel I accomplished that here in a complete and desired way. Your comment is a gift, thank you so much for sharing it!👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 00:34am
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20th Sep 2021 1:06am
Such a beautiful thing when you can truly be vulnerable and have that trust and love to share yourself completely, body and soul. Thank you so much for the comment NG! 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 00:37am
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20th Sep 2021 1:08am
Definitely, give yourself over completely and experience all that love has to offer. :) Thank you for the comment and encouragement Francisco. 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 1:04am
Beautiful absolutely gorgeous write
Love this loads great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Love this loads great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
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20th Sep 2021 1:46am
Deer in the headlights! :) Ron I absolutely love your beautiful heart and wonderful comment. I am really happy you loved it and I appreciate the compliment so much. 👅🌬️👂xo Love and light back at ya... just be careful with those brights...
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20th Sep 2021 2:07am
I never fear any type of brights. Brights are beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 1:05am
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Thank you so much for the comment AJ, I am really happy you like it and I know you have a very keen eye for beauty so I love that you see it here. ;) 👅🌬️👂xo
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20th Sep 2021 1:11am
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20th Sep 2021 1:28am
Hey Lj. Thank you so much for the comment, I am really happy you enjoyed it! and I like your description of serenading. :) 👅🌬️👂xo
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Re: Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 2:53pm
Hey BP! I am so happy you found it enjoyable and could feel the heart. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. :) 👅🌬️👂xo
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2021 3:35am
Thoughts:
1. someone's ears should be burning;
2. "sea of poems" - a lovely image; I can imagine it would be buoyant, like the Dead Sea;
3. the soul whispers: indeed it does, telling us things we have no other way of knowing; a receiver, but also sending;
4. what many have already commented, "heartfelt"; heartfelt, indeed!!!
Enjoyed! I hope "he" does, too!
1. someone's ears should be burning;
2. "sea of poems" - a lovely image; I can imagine it would be buoyant, like the Dead Sea;
3. the soul whispers: indeed it does, telling us things we have no other way of knowing; a receiver, but also sending;
4. what many have already commented, "heartfelt"; heartfelt, indeed!!!
Enjoyed! I hope "he" does, too!
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20th Sep 2021 2:59pm
I am so happy you found it enjoyable and heartfelt Mark. Oh how those ears burn. ;) I love the buoyancy of your words - the Dead Sea is amazing, I loved soaking in those heavy minerals and the cool mud on the skin is delightful. Have you been? The soul definitely has a way of telling us things and it's a good translator too. but not always, although sometimes it screams and yells at me. 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 4:44am
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20th Sep 2021 3:24pm
Shhhhhhh.... because we are in a library of poems and the soft tenderness of a whisper can be so sensual and beautiful; still listening to the soul can lead to chaos breaking the silence. ;) 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 4:52am
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20th Sep 2021 3:28pm
So happy you could hear my whispering soul, BC. Thank you so much for the comment. 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 5:31am
Dear K,
I do so love the romantic love that’s abundant in this piece. Its style is timeless and the emotion makes me feel hopeful. It makes me feel counted, important and loved. It’s very dreamy. How are you making all the fancy fonts? It’s really effective. You’re hitting these writes out of the ballpark. Lovely piece. H🌷
I do so love the romantic love that’s abundant in this piece. Its style is timeless and the emotion makes me feel hopeful. It makes me feel counted, important and loved. It’s very dreamy. How are you making all the fancy fonts? It’s really effective. You’re hitting these writes out of the ballpark. Lovely piece. H🌷
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20th Sep 2021 4:14pm
Definitely a deer in the headlights! :) Thank you so much for such an absolutely wonderful comment. I love that you feel the style is timeless and I am so happy it makes you feel hopeful, that you could feel the love. You are definitely important and loved; you should always feel that way and if I could accomplish that a little then that is the best feeling! And I always love getting your feedback on the formatting. I try to make it meaningful even if I am impatient with it. :p 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 5:48am
this is a beautiful spill kristina, nothing like the soft gentle whisper of the soul 🖤
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20th Sep 2021 3:55pm
It's so nice to see your Wh1skey, Oh yes! the soft gentle sensual whisper of the soul is definitely a beautiful thing. I am happy that I could whisper to you. ;) 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 11:02am
Sensual spill... tingling... tantalizing... like the feathery touch of a whisper....
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Re: Re. Whisper of my soul
20th Sep 2021 3:53pm
Your words are always so beautiful and poetic, InDreamz. Tingling and tantalizing indeed. :) Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts with me. 👅🌬️👂xo
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20th Sep 2021 4:33pm
Thank you so much for the comment, Adagio. I am really happy you think it's beautiful. 👅🌬️👂xo
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2021 8:34pm
Hey KX……this is beautiful…….powerful few words…….very moving…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Whisper of my soul
23rd Sep 2021 9:16pm
Sometimes a lot can be said in few words so I am really happy you liked it and found them powerful, and moving. :) Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts! I love the purple luv and hugs and give you more in return. 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
17th Oct 2021 11:23pm
I loved everything about this. The words that have been whispered are now out in the universe forever, filled with energy and reaching this other person's soul.
Wonderful spill Kristina.
Wonderful spill Kristina.
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18th Oct 2021 12:37pm
I am so happy you loved everything about this one Wally. I am glad you felt it so strongly. This is one of those that just wrote itself. It was so easy to express, and you are someone for whom this sea of poems is for so I appreciate so much that you read me and give me your thoughts. 👅🌬️👂xo
Re. Whisper of my soul
1st Nov 2022 3:41am
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1st Nov 2022 12:20pm
What pretty wings you have. ;) I am so glad you thought it was nice PPw. I really appreciate you stopping by to read me and reminding me of this one. It's been a long time since I saw it. :) Thanks you so much for the comment, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts. 👅🌬️👂xo