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I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
Let's face it
Familiarity breeds contempt
It's best when we are using each other
Twisted sex
Bondage
Clothespins
Hair pulling
Lots of spanking
Hot wax
Life on the fringe
Love optional
Bruises and welts tell stories
That's who we are
Used cars
Moderate mileage
An understanding between us ....
Familiarity breeds contempt
It's best when we are using each other
Twisted sex
Bondage
Clothespins
Hair pulling
Lots of spanking
Hot wax
Life on the fringe
Love optional
Bruises and welts tell stories
That's who we are
Used cars
Moderate mileage
An understanding between us ....
Author's Note
Image by Poetspeak
Dreary and melancholy for effect
Dreary and melancholy for effect
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Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 2:52pm
Reminds me off hot ... melting wax ... great pairing again ... well done PS ...
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 3:01pm
Thanks so much LDF
You know
No fear
Just
Hot
Satisfaction
in the realm of the senses ..
You know
No fear
Just
Hot
Satisfaction
in the realm of the senses ..
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 5:30pm
Sometimes you just need someone who understands...
That need to be the canvas for something more.
To have lines, poems, stories written in hot wax
and with the whip, clothespins punctuate so well!
Hair pulling and spanking further illuminate the page
with the excitement of dominance and twisted words.
Some books must be written in flesh and blood.
And writing those is an adventure that takes you places.
That aftercare tune up is a wonderful feeling too.
That need to be the canvas for something more.
To have lines, poems, stories written in hot wax
and with the whip, clothespins punctuate so well!
Hair pulling and spanking further illuminate the page
with the excitement of dominance and twisted words.
Some books must be written in flesh and blood.
And writing those is an adventure that takes you places.
That aftercare tune up is a wonderful feeling too.
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 8:25pm
You and I kid around a lot on here, we have that kind of dynamic
But this is the most serious response you have ever given me to a near and dear subject for both of us. As discussed, it's foremost about the trust. Can I trust you with this gift she asks and she knows the answer....
I love this world, it's the physical, the psychological and pure ecstasy of existence between two people that brings it home
Great comment
Thx Kx
But this is the most serious response you have ever given me to a near and dear subject for both of us. As discussed, it's foremost about the trust. Can I trust you with this gift she asks and she knows the answer....
I love this world, it's the physical, the psychological and pure ecstasy of existence between two people that brings it home
Great comment
Thx Kx
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 5:57pm
You can’t ever let a sub get too comfortable as she might flip the script on you, and actually realise that she’s a switchy little bitch that likes dolling out an equal amount of pain & pleasure.
Living on the edge in such duality is exactly where it’s at, in terms of exploring passion & desire. It’s soul food for those of us who crave the deep dive into such depths with their lover.
Loved the rawness of your write…😇
Living on the edge in such duality is exactly where it’s at, in terms of exploring passion & desire. It’s soul food for those of us who crave the deep dive into such depths with their lover.
Loved the rawness of your write…😇
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 8:39pm
I try to stay away from switches but truth be told sometimes I think I'm a switch. Before I do something with someone I want to know what it feels like. I'm Dominant by nature but my sexuality is somewhat complicated. I've trained women remotely over the years. It has its ups and downs. I don't like making subs. Come to me with the need but don't expect me to teach you to submit.. I did that when I was younger and had more patience but now it's about experience and need. ....
Appreciate your comment
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Appreciate your comment
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Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 7:50pm
Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 8:39pm
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 10:37pm
Reading between the lines, it sounds more like life on the edge or the minge, than perhaps on the fringe. 😉
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Sep 2021 10:59pm
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
Anonymous
17th Sep 2021 3:16am
The 2 things I like most are the rhythms, which I enjoy here--
rushing and ebbing, swells and crests, surges, etc.,
and I like the theme--
which reminds me of some great films--Last Tango in Paris, Damage (also a good novel--the film by Malle and the novel by Heart are both worthy of attention, or at least were, last I watched / read).
Enjoyed!
rushing and ebbing, swells and crests, surges, etc.,
and I like the theme--
which reminds me of some great films--Last Tango in Paris, Damage (also a good novel--the film by Malle and the novel by Heart are both worthy of attention, or at least were, last I watched / read).
Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
17th Sep 2021 4:08am
Thank you for the PARSONS AWARD
It's a big thing around these parts
Last Tango
Made a lot of people squeamish about butter
I loved it
Instructional
Thanks Mark
It's a big thing around these parts
Last Tango
Made a lot of people squeamish about butter
I loved it
Instructional
Thanks Mark
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
17th Sep 2021 7:45am
Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
17th Sep 2021 12:28pm
Thanks poetOftragedy
Some concepts need to be defined and this is one of them ...
Appreciate the RL
Some concepts need to be defined and this is one of them ...
Appreciate the RL
Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Oct 2021 2:37am
Haha. Used cars. We all have some dings and bangs.
I liked this one a lot.
I liked this one a lot.
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Re: Re. I don't want you to be too comfortable with me
16th Oct 2021 3:08am