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Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
I was aroused by the thought of whipping you
I didn’t think I should have been
But I was
You didn’t say anything
Just stared past me
Blank as usual
Our relationship is always complicated
I still think about chamber 13
You did this to me
No quarter
Do you accept responsibility?
I didn’t think I should have been
But I was
You didn’t say anything
Just stared past me
Blank as usual
Our relationship is always complicated
I still think about chamber 13
You did this to me
No quarter
Do you accept responsibility?
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Digital image by Poetspeak
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Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
10th Sep 2021 9:17pm
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10th Sep 2021 9:19pm
I'm never too far away from the bleakness lol
It's a gas to write
Appreciate your comment and RL as always..
It's a gas to write
Appreciate your comment and RL as always..
Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
10th Sep 2021 10:10pm
Fab-fucking-tastic.
Sounds like someone needs to kneel.
The art is interesting. It looks like a very obedient line of arms and legs. Hmmm….
Love it.
xx
Sounds like someone needs to kneel.
The art is interesting. It looks like a very obedient line of arms and legs. Hmmm….
Love it.
xx
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Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
10th Sep 2021 10:19pm
Art deliberately bleak like a movie theater that needs to be cleaned
Love your comment E
You rocked me
BIG LIKE YOU
XX
Love your comment E
You rocked me
BIG LIKE YOU
XX
Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
10th Sep 2021 10:39pm
hello dearest Poet
I'm taking responsibility whether it's me or not
I'm guilty I admit it...
sexy inking...
I'm taking responsibility whether it's me or not
I'm guilty I admit it...
sexy inking...
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10th Sep 2021 10:55pm
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10th Sep 2021 11:20pm
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10th Sep 2021 11:24pm
Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
11th Sep 2021 00:59am
I was aroused by the thought of being whipped
Yes, you should be aroused by it too
Of course you were
Did I need to say anything?
Waiting
Still waiting
Our relationship seems so simple
Chamber 13 is our room for a reason.
Of course I did.
Blank stare.
Who else is going to do it?
Yes, you should be aroused by it too
Of course you were
Did I need to say anything?
Waiting
Still waiting
Our relationship seems so simple
Chamber 13 is our room for a reason.
Of course I did.
Blank stare.
Who else is going to do it?
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Re: Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
11th Sep 2021 1:05am
Who else indeed ?
I choose carefully
Tubi 60 waiting in the wings
Blast off in 3 sips
Chamber 13 well equipped to handle our mayhem
Blank stare is the ultimate submission
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I choose carefully
Tubi 60 waiting in the wings
Blast off in 3 sips
Chamber 13 well equipped to handle our mayhem
Blank stare is the ultimate submission
BIG LIKE
Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
11th Sep 2021 2:11am
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Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
11th Sep 2021 11:28am
The mention of chamber 13 is intriguing...an unlucky number, but maybe lucky for some?
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Re: Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
11th Sep 2021 11:33am
Yeah, odd numbers are intriguing especially bad boy 13
Make a good poem too, especially the mystery of the chamber
Women like it in there, I do too ..
Thanks for your comment and RL Evocation 👍
Make a good poem too, especially the mystery of the chamber
Women like it in there, I do too ..
Thanks for your comment and RL Evocation 👍
Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
12th Oct 2021 3:21am
Dayum! Once you deliver a line like that, she has to perk up and listen.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Postmodern, Bleak, Anxious, Antidepressants
12th Oct 2021 10:53am
I have found a woman who likes to be whipped
Needs and appreciates it
Demands it
Says it's the only thing in life that makes the noise in her head go quiet
A God send
Thx Wally
Needs and appreciates it
Demands it
Says it's the only thing in life that makes the noise in her head go quiet
A God send
Thx Wally