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Fake Illusion
gifted power seeing thru secrets
beckons silence to be upon knowing lips
fake illusion of happiness transparent
how long can truth beguile luv
sacrificed broken heart grieves lies
settles for disrespect so not to have nothing
ending alone not luved would hurt less
eyes of a deceiving fool turns away smiling
hiding from his own mischievous masquerade
Copyright © 2021 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
beckons silence to be upon knowing lips
fake illusion of happiness transparent
how long can truth beguile luv
sacrificed broken heart grieves lies
settles for disrespect so not to have nothing
ending alone not luved would hurt less
eyes of a deceiving fool turns away smiling
hiding from his own mischievous masquerade
Copyright © 2021 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 2nd Sep 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
2nd Sep 2021 10:16am
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6th Sep 2021 9:47pm
Hey BP……..thank you for feeling the emotions…….sad situation…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Sep 2021 3:35pm
Your disappointment is palpable, Flowered One. I am so sorry for that. Rise, Sister. xo
6th Sep 2021 9:51pm
Hey Avahati……my heart breaks over the situation……I’m just praying smart decisions will make it all ok…….thank you for the sensitivity…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Sep 2021 4:59pm
flowergirl,
Wow, you dug deep into the soul for this one. Bravely displayed!
down2dirt
Wow, you dug deep into the soul for this one. Bravely displayed!
down2dirt
6th Sep 2021 9:55pm
Hey DD…….thank you for feeling my soul……..it deeply hurts me but all I can do is offer support when needed…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Sep 2021 8:09pm
6th Sep 2021 9:58pm
Hey Phantom…….it’s not me in crisis here……I feel it deeply though as if it were…….thank you for the positivity…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
Luv the deceptive charm you write of. We're all good at it when we want to be. I have to say, the protagonist reminds me of Garath Gates, only, without the mask. Watch!
'Garath Gates - Anyone Of Us'
'Garath Gates - Anyone Of Us'
6th Sep 2021 10:00pm
Hey Billy…….it’s a heart breaking situation…….thank you for the feature to watch…….I will check it out for sure…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Sep 2021 12:45pm
It’s amazing what our minds will do to protect us. When we should walk away, we stay, trying to stay closer to the allure of happiness. Really nicely written FG. I ve already read this several times.
8th Sep 2021 1:00am
Awe thank you RPM…….it’s super hard to watch lives of others and not get involved…….I know they have to learn lessons in life as I did……it just hurts my heart so much……thank you for sharing your thoughts with me……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
