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just a thought
today,
it is like casting a pebble into a pool of still water
hoping the ripples will come back to my shore,
yet i just went over the waterfall...
the ripples joined the current, giving a last nudge.
then tomorrow...so it will come.
it is like casting a pebble into a pool of still water
hoping the ripples will come back to my shore,
yet i just went over the waterfall...
the ripples joined the current, giving a last nudge.
then tomorrow...so it will come.
Published 30th Aug 2021
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30th Aug 2021 3:05pm
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31st Aug 2021 2:53am
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9th Sep 2021 4:35pm
Really beautiful, I felt like I was looking into the peacefulness of the still blue water. But we are always casting pebbles, we need the ripples to remind us we are alive however the excitement of the current, being swept away and moved forward quickly now that is where the true passion is for better or worse.
9th Sep 2021 6:42pm
