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Sleep eludes me
It's half one in the morning and I really need to sleep,
I've tried everything I can think of,even counting sheep.
I have to put up with feeling like this, every bloody night,
While you're dreaming next to me, oblivious of my plight.
I'm watching the minutes pass slowly by,on the clock beside my bed.
If you don't stop snoring soon, I'm gonna punch you in the head!
I've tried everything I can think of,even counting sheep.
I have to put up with feeling like this, every bloody night,
While you're dreaming next to me, oblivious of my plight.
I'm watching the minutes pass slowly by,on the clock beside my bed.
If you don't stop snoring soon, I'm gonna punch you in the head!
Published 26th Aug 2021
| Edited 30th Aug 2021
Author's Note
This poem is about my ex,who'd regularly keep me awake with his snoring. Then he'd get the hump when I slept in the spare room!!!!!
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26th Aug 2021 1:53pm
26th Aug 2021 1:58pm
26th Aug 2021 7:31pm
Fab, and I can relate! Mine also has very long legs that take up too much room, and he likes to steal the duvet.
26th Aug 2021 7:58pm
Gosh,I remember all that too. I think separate beds in separate rooms works best,lol.😁
26th Aug 2021 9:15pm
Dear S,
I think this is a relatable issue the world over. I get it, a snuggle here and there but why isn’t it de rigeur to sleep in separate beds so one and all can sleep peacefully. This is a plight written with a sassy wit. Very much enjoyed (and related to) this poem. H🌷
I think this is a relatable issue the world over. I get it, a snuggle here and there but why isn’t it de rigeur to sleep in separate beds so one and all can sleep peacefully. This is a plight written with a sassy wit. Very much enjoyed (and related to) this poem. H🌷
26th Aug 2021 10:28pm
Hi H,
Thankyou for your message. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. And yes,it really should be considered acceptable to sleep in separate beds!
Thankyou for your message. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. And yes,it really should be considered acceptable to sleep in separate beds!
27th Aug 2021 2:30pm
Loved the last line, great poems, and thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, O
27th Aug 2021 5:00pm
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19th Sep 2021 1:57pm
19th Sep 2021 4:43pm
This is true. However it really isn't helped when your partner snores,lol. Still, that was then.
4th Feb 2022 8:37pm
I can't count the number of times I'd shake the EX awake and ask him to please roll over, he was snoring! :)
4th Feb 2022 9:44pm
Hi DB.
And I have noted he's your ex,funnily enough! I hope your sleep has been improved.😁
And I have noted he's your ex,funnily enough! I hope your sleep has been improved.😁
29th Mar 2022 10:09pm
Last 2 lines made laugh
seripusly tho lack of sleep is a killer im lucky if i get 3 hrs unbroken sleep
seripusly tho lack of sleep is a killer im lucky if i get 3 hrs unbroken sleep
29th Mar 2022 10:36pm
Wow,that really isn't a lot of sleep,AspergerPoet. You must always be tired. 😴Thankyou for taking the time to read my poem.
Sharon.
Sharon.
17th Feb 2024 00:21am
Funny poem Sharon.. I hope that you don't have this problem anymore..! You've posted some good poems!
~Christopher
~Christopher
23rd Feb 2024 11:13pm
Hi Christopher
Thankyou for taking the time to read my poems,and for the positive feedback. I really appreciate it.
Sharon.
Thankyou for taking the time to read my poems,and for the positive feedback. I really appreciate it.
Sharon.
11th Apr 2024 8:03pm
ouch...I was going to give you a perfect score on this poem... now I have a score to settle with you...ouch
