trinity of thoughts

Nice! Made me feel warm and safe to read this. Just beautiful.

I really adore your remarks, LV... Thank you so much for sharing them with me.
I truly appreciate it



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B

Reminded me of The Cranberries “Dreams”. The absence of words actually sounds increased my desire to get to the end. It was like a jigsaw puzzle that I wasn’t sure if all the pieces were there!

I like that idea, very much.... anticipation is such an aphrodisiac...In my opinion!!
Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave me your thoughtful takeaway.... I really enjoyed and appreciated it!


You're always welcomed here 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B

You are a true master of structure, Ms. B.  :)))

(The inverted exclamation point really individualizes the write & gives the piece a touch of the Blu Foxiness, like you do so well.)

These still frames, come to life, just exquisite & beautiful.  

The perfect amount of information & mystery.

With such a gratifying ending...

Wonderful & leaves me in a state of wonder.  :)))

Awww, thank you so much for reading, Cipher ;)
I am so happy you found pleasure in the formatting and structure..... It's definitely something that I work on, continually...hoping to add an additional emotional element.... bringing the poem together in a tighter 'whole.'

I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... So grateful!
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B

lovely form and content, gently taking the reader to ubderstanding, delightful. R

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, RL... I am so appreciative of your visit and I'm all smiles that you found delight.



Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - B

Wow, you had me traveling down one road then you made a detour, an amazing poetic and content approach, but what else should we expect from amazing Ms. Blue? Great and hugs, xo, O

I really enjoy your remarks, my dearest Oral!.. I have missed your presence and I'm so grateful for your thoughtfulness....


Please don't become a stranger, l thoroughly your perspectives!
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B

Thanks for your graciousness. Have a wonderful and write day; we are hungry for your next amazing poem. Hugs and peace, O

Ok Gorgeous that was smashed not just out the ball park but the stratosphere. Beautifully written, wonderfully presented just absolutely amazing
Love, love, love it
Ron xx

Dawww.... you make me blush deeply, my lovely friend 🙏🏻 I thank you for enjoying my little poem as much as you did.... You inspire and motivate with your kindness.


All my warmest appreciation for your visit, the list add and your generosity of spirit.

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
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xo
B

Beautiful honey

Thanks Jen... I really love seeing you and appreciate your lovely comment ;)

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B


(beautiful avatar, btw!! ✨)

Awww, that's a truly a lovely comment, indeed. I thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me your thoughtful remarks....

All my warmest appreciation,
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B

PS - Welcome to DUP :)  
I hope you enjoy your time here ✨

Great work.

Thanks, cs.
Knowing you're reading and liking my little spill, definitely keeps my creative lava flowing... Thanks for the comment.... It's like mental fuel, powering  me.... and inspiring me to continue to engage....  
and hopefully, continuing to write....  


I really really appreciate that - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

enjoyed your trinity.
your thoughts, what can one say...
always do they convey...
i enjoy your thoughts.

I adore seeing your beautiful rocks on my page, Ms! Thank you for reading and for the warmth of your lovely comments... Your written 'voice' is a smile inducer for me.... and always will be!

You're always so welcomed here 🦋
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B

Touch until your heart is content.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Thanks for being so kind and faithful in your readership, Francisco!
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A beautiful poem, Blue...and yet...there is that melancholic reminder that it is all too short and love always ends in tragedy. Bravo my friend.

Cheers...Harry

Your wise comments always seem to punctuate, perfectly, Harry. I can't help but include some depth with a tinge of melancholy... here and there... lol.... I hope that love doesn't ALWAYS end in tragedy.... fingers crossed 🤞🏻.... hahaha 😂

I love seeing you on my page, and I wholeheartedly appreciate your thoughtfulness, the list add and your sage insights...

Much love and respect, my dear friend 🙏🏻
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B

Once and a while, Blue...both lovers depart this world together...so I guess neither experiences the tragedy of the loss that the one left behind must endure in most cases. I was watching my beloved, Carol as she slept just the other night...after 28 extroadinary years I still find her so wonderfully beautiful. My usual wish popped into my head...don't you dare go before me honey...of course, I know that's being a little greedy...but hey...I want her to grieve for me...coz I know that I don't have the strength to grieve for her.

Cheers...Harry X

How amazing, there is so much power here. Love and lust are so perfectly joined that it is impossible to tell them apart and in fact erases the boundaries between those words. A spiritual awakening of erogenous imagery that is simply numbing to satiated emotions and physical responses. You've written a beautiful spell sorceress.  

Ohhh my!!
Your comments always leave me swimming amongst the clouds 🌥 filled with hopeful motivation and a feeling of accomplishment. That's truly the best thank you that I can offer . I'm extremely hard on myself and you being able to elicit that response, is epic in it's value.
Thank you thank you!! 🤗  
All my gratitude and heartfelt appreciation, my dear shaman...
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xoxo

(You've made my day - ✨)  
-B

Delicious.
🙏🏼

Mmmm.... thank you, KP - 😋






🌹 - B

Beautiful presentation and flow

Thank you for stopping by to read and for the  kind remarks. I wholly appreciate you taking the time you did and I'm glad so you enjoyed. - ✨  
 
 
 
Please don't be a stranger!  
It's nice to meet you :)  
🌹 - B

Smooth as a caress ... in that place between felt and imagined ... exquisite dear B ...

Your comments made my day, LilD. Today has been a tough day to get through.... So I wholeheartedly thank you for leaving me your thoughts....


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B

the design is great

Thank you ☺





I appreciate you stopping by to read and for leaving me your thoughts.... 🙏🏻  
🌹 - B

Like finding a jewel in a gypsy blanket. This poem is a precious gem that strokes my manliness and tells of the sweet joy that touch can bring. Withing the layers of your words paradise beckons. There is a magic in your sensuality that no ordinary wordsmith can create. You are a goddess in all the nuances that word brings.

Xo
John

I giggle and shake my head 'noooo'... "There's no goddess here", I think..... My humble heart beats of it's self critical and denying beats.. lol ...as I try and process, reconciling your lovely kindness....

I truly thank you for sharing your amazingly wonderful and inspiring feedback. I am like a deer in headlights, John!. Just, wow.
The power of my emotions, need and desire is what fuels.... I am so sensitive to your understanding of that.... It's freeing!

All my warmest gratitude.... - 🙏🏻
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Susan
xo

The biting of the lip huh...
Blue, that was exceptional. It was eloquent and seductive in it's softness. It really builds anticipation leaving "shuddering" smiles.
Great work.

.... and Ohhh how I love evoking those "shudders"!!! Yesss! 😈 I'm all smiles myself, reading your terrifically awesome comments, Walter!


Thanks for the killer sentiments and the lovely visit.
🌹 - B

This poem makes me think about the temporariness of life and things I never have. My abuse makes me not miss it for some reason.