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Coalesce
Intricately woven
stitched
of strange abandon
non-linear colors
full of such richness
Where love is
a welcome home
Harnessing hope's heart
fervent attempts
claiming each day
to break dawn fearlessly
thriving upon
multitudes of devotion
where learned strength
intersects with
fought for pride
Taking heed—
to be open fully
in mindfulness
realizing the flow of respect
how it carves goodness
from that strong current
back and forth
ingrained
and
oftentimes,
set in
precarious
understanding
Breathing in,
(so sweetly now )
that which
only a creator,
creates perfectly
Questioning exactly
where questions are needed
learning to feel
from every single syllable
that slides across
a brazenly willing tongue
Becoming
the very rhythm
from abstract
to concrete
nature's
blooming
flower
Singing
of petals bursting
into honor
and found sanctuary
musical in glory,
beauty
and emotionally
infused landscapes
Where
l u c i d i t y
and
dreams
coalesce
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Re: Re. Coalesce
16th Aug 2021 6:07pm
Awwww.... best comment!
Ty,C... I appreciate you and your loveliness.
So so much - 🤗
🌹 - 💙
B
Ty,C... I appreciate you and your loveliness.
So so much - 🤗
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Coalesce
16th Aug 2021 6:14pm
This is such a beautiful piece, your writing touches the soul. Great write gorgeous
Absolutely love it
Love and light
Ron xx
Absolutely love it
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Coalesce
18th Aug 2021 4:19pm
I am so happy you enjoyed reading and extremely appreciative of your kind words, Ron. I feel lucky that I am able to touch you in such a lovely way.
Your comments light me up! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and thanks from across the pond... 🌊
🌹 - 💙
B
Your comments light me up! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and thanks from across the pond... 🌊
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Coalesce
16th Aug 2021 9:00pm
Dreams of nature are very lovely. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Coalesce
18th Aug 2021 4:20pm
Re. Coalesce
16th Aug 2021 9:19pm
It seems to us that at times you worry about blocks or not producing, this is slamming your head against a wall. You may not produce as quickly as some writers on site. But you are more than steady and there is no argument as to their quality. To tight Lady
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:13pm
Thanks for that encouragement, Me
I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughtful remarks and reminding me of my own abilities....
So grateful, my friend
🌹 - B
I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughtful remarks and reminding me of my own abilities....
So grateful, my friend
🌹 - B
Re. Coalesce
17th Aug 2021 2:56am
Dear BV,
This was such a dreamy write for me. Soothing and peaceful. I thought it was really lovely. The end made me wishful, I can’t recall the last time I was lucid but I’m always dreaming and this poem helped me float away. H🌷
This was such a dreamy write for me. Soothing and peaceful. I thought it was really lovely. The end made me wishful, I can’t recall the last time I was lucid but I’m always dreaming and this poem helped me float away. H🌷
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:18pm
I absolutely adore the idea of you being able to float away for a spell, upon my little poem. That's so heart-warming and such a motivation for me to be be able to reconcile. Ty so much for sharing that with me, H.
I appreciate you, the generous list add and you taking the time you do with me.
I absolutely cherish your visits, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹-B
I appreciate you, the generous list add and you taking the time you do with me.
I absolutely cherish your visits, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹-B
Re. Coalesce
17th Aug 2021 3:06am
Exquisite My Dear. :)))
I think for you it is both; You write while dreaming & dream while writing.
I love this write so very much. An outpouring like a waterfall of the soul.
I think for you it is both; You write while dreaming & dream while writing.
I love this write so very much. An outpouring like a waterfall of the soul.
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:25pm
Ohhh Cipher,
I am all smiles..... ;)
Taking your extremely kind comments, I infuse them to reinforce the genuine emotional impetus and inspiration within my heart, mind and soul.... Which wholly Invigorates my desire to put pen to paper....
Much love, my dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I am all smiles..... ;)
Taking your extremely kind comments, I infuse them to reinforce the genuine emotional impetus and inspiration within my heart, mind and soul.... Which wholly Invigorates my desire to put pen to paper....
Much love, my dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Coalesce
17th Aug 2021 4:00am
Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:30pm
Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, cs ... it means a lot that you participated and might have enjoyed in my little attempts to write something of a bit of worth....
Much gratitude,
🌹 - B
Much gratitude,
🌹 - B
Re. Coalesce
17th Aug 2021 9:19pm
Ah, beautiful Blue~ you have tucked me into a warm cloud of visions with this balmy ephiphany [of lucidity and dream].. and im also hearing "Silent Lucidity" playing in my head as i reread that last bit once again. yes, stunning ..
"Breathing in,
(so sweetly now )
that which
only a creator,
creates perfectly"
~this humbling set touched deep,a gentle sombering id call it ;)
as a whole, the words between the words here, beautifully humbling as well, a fresh breath of Soft~Strong, mindpics n all..
pressin pagan cali lovins all over ur page,
~d
"Breathing in,
(so sweetly now )
that which
only a creator,
creates perfectly"
~this humbling set touched deep,a gentle sombering id call it ;)
as a whole, the words between the words here, beautifully humbling as well, a fresh breath of Soft~Strong, mindpics n all..
pressin pagan cali lovins all over ur page,
~d
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:36pm
Hey there, d
It's always a lovely day whenever I get the opportunity (and I'm lucky enough) to read your comments upon my page. I really love that song "Silent Lucidity" and probably did listen to it a zillion times, way back when... lol. Good association!!
I am so happy you enjoyed reading, my lovely dear. I feel all your lovin's and Cali hopefulness, pressed deep.... I couldn't adore it more.
Ty so much for stopping by and getting the smile that I'm smiling to blossom in real life.
All my warmest returned hugs and endless amounts of respect... 🌹-💙-🤗
xoxo
B
It's always a lovely day whenever I get the opportunity (and I'm lucky enough) to read your comments upon my page. I really love that song "Silent Lucidity" and probably did listen to it a zillion times, way back when... lol. Good association!!
I am so happy you enjoyed reading, my lovely dear. I feel all your lovin's and Cali hopefulness, pressed deep.... I couldn't adore it more.
Ty so much for stopping by and getting the smile that I'm smiling to blossom in real life.
All my warmest returned hugs and endless amounts of respect... 🌹-💙-🤗
xoxo
B
Re. Coalesce
18th Aug 2021 7:24am
Somewhere deep in your soul Blue, you managed to string together this amazing collection of words...BRAVO!!!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 7:53am
Thank you so much for sharing your truly kind words of encouragement, Harry
I am so happy to see you and just love that you enjoyed reading...... so very much 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I am so happy to see you and just love that you enjoyed reading...... so very much 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 10:07am
Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 10:07am
Re. Coalesce
18th Aug 2021 11:27am
I find this very impressively powerful and beautiful.
“ Where lucidity and dreams coalesce” A truly wonderful pen. Thank you Ms B.
“ Where lucidity and dreams coalesce” A truly wonderful pen. Thank you Ms B.
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Re: Re. Coalesce
18th Aug 2021 4:16pm
Your words and lovely sentiments made my morning!
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and leave such thoughtfulness. I am so grateful - 💙
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and leave such thoughtfulness. I am so grateful - 💙
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 6:48am
Just wanted to say this poem's imagery is so beautifully complex that I find new revelations with each reading. The poem then is opening doorways for me that very few works of writing has ever achieved. We obviously view life through our own lens, yet you have given me a new lens with this poem. My heart's desire, though you knew it not, that I am so amazingly grateful for the chance to read.
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Re: Re. Coalesce
Richard,
If ever there was a time that I needed kindness in your beautiful comments, it was this morning. I have been down and out sorts for a while and your lovely sharing of how I impacted your thoughts and feelings has really made my day (so far!) and I am so so thankful for that, my dear poet 🙏🏻
I appreciate you and don't take your thoughtfulness and continued support lightly...
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
If ever there was a time that I needed kindness in your beautiful comments, it was this morning. I have been down and out sorts for a while and your lovely sharing of how I impacted your thoughts and feelings has really made my day (so far!) and I am so so thankful for that, my dear poet 🙏🏻
I appreciate you and don't take your thoughtfulness and continued support lightly...
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 9:12am
' that which only the creator creates', love this line in your great sublime poem. I like your word choice as well. Kudos!
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:52pm
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generosity of your kind words.
Much thanks for stopping by!
🌹 - B
Much thanks for stopping by!
🌹 - B
Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 3:55pm
Beautifully blended ... perfect flow ... undulating line length ... makes the poem come alive ... masterful spacing ... great bookending with last line and title ... another flawless performance ...
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Re: Re. Coalesce
19th Aug 2021 4:55pm
Thanks for the lovely feedback, LilD. I really needed that jolt of upbeat positivity and motivation. My heart soars that you enjoyed reading and I couldn't be more appreciative of your valuable thoughts and opinions....
I am so so grateful - 💙
🌹 - B
I am so so grateful - 💙
🌹 - B
Re. Coalesce
21st Aug 2021 10:16pm
A magnificent montage of symbols and images as the dance together into forms of exquisite meaning and sensory beauty. You took me on a voyage into the heart of the sensate universe that puts into words what it feels like to be human. That is the height of poetic expression.
Much love,
John
Much love,
John
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Re: Re. Coalesce
2nd Oct 2021 5:21am
I am so grateful for your visit and upset with myself that I missed replying.... but I look at it as a gift of sorts.... Cheering me up when I least expected it.... (thanks for that!)
Your comments pack a wallop of delightful and uplifting sentiment, John. I am so fortunate and always surprised that I can impart /impact anything for anyone, so when reading your thoughts, I'm utterly and completely awed.
Thank you, thank you.... thank you.
You're kindness is the stuff of legend!
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
Your comments pack a wallop of delightful and uplifting sentiment, John. I am so fortunate and always surprised that I can impart /impact anything for anyone, so when reading your thoughts, I'm utterly and completely awed.
Thank you, thank you.... thank you.
You're kindness is the stuff of legend!
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
Re. Coalesce
2nd Oct 2021 3:02am
I gotta say, there's a bit of sensuality weaving through some lines, (like a sprinkle), and then you go ahead and paint "beauty and emotionally infused landscapes"
Beautifully crafted work.
Beautifully crafted work.
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Re: Re. Coalesce
2nd Oct 2021 4:19am
Ohhh WOW.... Thanks for the flashback, Walter!
I really appreciate you reaching back, which allows me to, as well.... Your kind words are so uplifting and I'm grateful you can feel the light essence of sultriness... That's so awesome and rewarding to me!!
All my warmest regards ✨
Hope you are doing well, my friend
🌹
I really appreciate you reaching back, which allows me to, as well.... Your kind words are so uplifting and I'm grateful you can feel the light essence of sultriness... That's so awesome and rewarding to me!!
All my warmest regards ✨
Hope you are doing well, my friend
🌹