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....It’s like
Twisted metal
A gnarled up tree
Broken egg shells
....It’s like water in the nose
Foul mouth
Stuttering on words we don’t say
Disheveled bed sheets
....It’s like a heartless heart attack
Melted candle
Time wasted
Music moving in the wind
.... It’s like a wound that never heals
A gnarled up tree
Broken egg shells
....It’s like water in the nose
Foul mouth
Stuttering on words we don’t say
Disheveled bed sheets
....It’s like a heartless heart attack
Melted candle
Time wasted
Music moving in the wind
.... It’s like a wound that never heals
Published 13th Aug 2021
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Brava, Tommielynn❣🌹 I felt "water up the nose" i used to have a reoccurring dream, when I was a little boy, that I was sitting in the middle of an ice rink circled by skaters all dressed in Hockey goalie uniforms w/mask and terrified I would be woken by the sensation of water up my nose...go figure.
Each element of this poem is a point to ponder. Thank you for the think❣
Each element of this poem is a point to ponder. Thank you for the think❣
14th Aug 2021 00:32am
14th Aug 2021 6:17am
Hold on to your good memories of your dear friend...small consolation I know but a way to her alive in your heart❣🌹
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