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Hollow hearts
Why do people gossip and judge others?
The truth is bitter and sad
But it’s something people
won’t dare fathom
for they have their own
cup of sufferings
and a deep abyss created
by a sense of lack
Secretly they derive joy and satisfaction
that in misery they are not all alone;
they aren’t the only ones
carrying this sack
of emptiness and sorrow..
So in an attempt to judge others
they try to fill up their hearts that are hollow...
The truth is bitter and sad
But it’s something people
won’t dare fathom
for they have their own
cup of sufferings
and a deep abyss created
by a sense of lack
Secretly they derive joy and satisfaction
that in misery they are not all alone;
they aren’t the only ones
carrying this sack
of emptiness and sorrow..
So in an attempt to judge others
they try to fill up their hearts that are hollow...
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Re. Hollow hearts
9th Aug 2021 9:07pm
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10th Aug 2021 6:45pm
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10th Aug 2021 1:09am
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10th Aug 2021 6:46pm
I'm so glad you liked my reading 😊
Thank you so much, dear AJ for your encouraging words😊🌷
Thank you so much, dear AJ for your encouraging words😊🌷
Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 2:30am
The truth does set you free. We judge people before we get to know them, because they probably do the same to find out more about us. Keep on writing.
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10th Aug 2021 6:48pm
Thank you, dear poet for sharing your thoughts. Appreciate you reading and commenting on this piece 😊🌷
Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 7:09am
Secretly they derive joy and satisfaction
that in misery they are not all alone;
they aren’t the only ones
carrying this sack
of emptiness and sorrow..
That may explain why some launch into gossip (wanting to see someone else taken down a peg or two) though sometimes it's about envy and resentment someone else is enjoying what they have not got or done.
that in misery they are not all alone;
they aren’t the only ones
carrying this sack
of emptiness and sorrow..
That may explain why some launch into gossip (wanting to see someone else taken down a peg or two) though sometimes it's about envy and resentment someone else is enjoying what they have not got or done.
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11th Aug 2021 3:08pm
Yeah, it is also about resentment and jealousy....
To be honest, I have been guilty too, of gossiping n judging others... I tried to introspect why I did that and I discovered that deep down I was unhappy with my life... So, this poem is based on my own behaviour as well as my observation of other people....
Having said that, I would like to state that not all people who have problems or are suffering find solace in other's misery.... But, those who derive happiness in finding others erring or succumbing to some weak moments or going through some problems, they definitely are miserable at heart...
To be honest, I have been guilty too, of gossiping n judging others... I tried to introspect why I did that and I discovered that deep down I was unhappy with my life... So, this poem is based on my own behaviour as well as my observation of other people....
Having said that, I would like to state that not all people who have problems or are suffering find solace in other's misery.... But, those who derive happiness in finding others erring or succumbing to some weak moments or going through some problems, they definitely are miserable at heart...
Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 7:14am
Well worth the wait 😁 so true. People do bring others down to fill some kind of emptiness.
Great poem, friend.
Great poem, friend.
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11th Aug 2021 3:19pm
Thank you, dear friend for your kind support 😊🌷
Hope you have been doing good 😊
Hope you have been doing good 😊
Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 8:50am
Lovely piece a sad truth beautifully read, loved your accent. Great job
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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11th Aug 2021 3:20pm
Thank you so much, dear Ron for your gracious comments.... I'm so happy you liked my accent 😊
Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 2:04pm
I was so excited to see you had voiced this! And it's so TRUE! Beautiful share! Nominated! ❤
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Re: Re. Hollow hearts
11th Aug 2021 3:24pm
Thank you very much, dear Ahavati, for nominating this piece for the Comp ' Poem of the month'. 😊
I'm always grateful to you for your kind support. Much thanks 😊
I'm always grateful to you for your kind support. Much thanks 😊
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Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 2:55pm
Your voice is so beautiful
It's gentle, soothing and sexy
Wish there was someone in my life with such a relaxed sound to their vocals
There was something to how you said the words that had an Asian accent
It would be interesting to know which country has ladies who sound so smooth
It's gentle, soothing and sexy
Wish there was someone in my life with such a relaxed sound to their vocals
There was something to how you said the words that had an Asian accent
It would be interesting to know which country has ladies who sound so smooth
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Re: Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 3:12pm
Thank you so much for your kind compliment... I'm really over the moon with the review😊
I'm from India 😊
I'm from India 😊
Re: Re. Hollow hearts
10th Aug 2021 3:16pm
My apologies in advance when I say, " If your profile pic is anything to go by you are smoking hot !!! Fire !!!"
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14th Aug 2021 7:02pm
People who are insecure want to spread their shallowness. It's pretty obvious if one opens their eyes.
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14th Aug 2021 7:11pm
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14th Aug 2021 7:20pm
Thank you, dear poetess😊🌹 very much appreciate you stopping by and leaving your encouraging words. 😊
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Re. Hollow hearts
19th Aug 2021 8:58pm
Oh what a beautiful voice!!!! There's always something surprising about you, dearie! X
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Re: Re. Hollow hearts
19th Aug 2021 9:03pm
Hey thank you darling.... Your comments have always uplifted my heart n soul...😊🌹
N I'm so honoured by the RL add.... Much thanks 😊
N I'm so honoured by the RL add.... Much thanks 😊
Re. Hollow hearts
2nd Feb 2022 8:08pm
Well said. You have the telepathic ability to connect with people and know the truth.
KS
KS
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Re. Hollow hearts
2nd Feb 2022 8:13pm
Well said. You have the telepathic ability to connect with people and know the truth. We judge others to satisfy our ego and endorse the same evil view. We also judge as we are conditioned in that way and it continues without breaking the pattern. You break the pattern and turn out to be a sweetest soul.
KS
KS
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Re. Hollow hearts
28th Mar 2022 5:38pm
Beautiful writer, beautiful poem, beautiful voice reading. WOW! Total BEAUTY!!! J (O)
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