the epitome of the apple

So long as you laugh.

It's when I am reminded of him without question.



Thanks reading, Jenny
🌹 - 💙
B

Good luck in the comp!
Sweet brevity. ❤

Thanks nik– for the poem comments and the comp well wishes ✨





Hope you are hanging in there!
🌹 - B

He's your legacy and his job is to give you orgasmic bliss.  Your laugh is a beautiful sexy legacy.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
 

Well, my father's legacy is definitely not that.....  


... but I will surely keep on writing....

🌹

Lovely.
❣️🙏🏼

Thank you, KP
That means a lot.
🌹 - 💙

I think you were really able to capture the story within the set limit of words and that's not an easy task.
Well done Blue. Best of luck in the comp.

I know you know the difficulty here!! Whew.... lol..
Thanks, Walter.
I appreciate the kind thoughts.

You're awesome, my friend!
🌹 - B

This had a playful whimsical feel but was brought to focus as a profound and wonderfully lyrical poem. Loved where this took me.

Xo
John

Thanks, John.
10 words is a hell of a challenge to tell the story in!
Much thanks dear friend 🙏🏻

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xoxo
Susan

dear BV

very fine p0eming

my only thought is that  the last  .  after "there" is limiting the expansiveness of 'there"

for me it takes away from the strength of the three dots after "bellows"

a warm smile
silent lotus

Thanks for the lovely sentiments, SL ... It was a poem written for a competition here, which had a specific word requirement....So, the there, there was sort of needed... lol...



I appreciate you taking the time,
🌹 - B

i’m fine with “there”

i was inferring  that the period after “there”

could perhaps be removed