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FOR ALL YOU WHO READ SOFTIES
What amazes me that you have been here
just for few days
and I have read two poems
I must add you have the inborn vitamin of poetry
as you use metaphors so easily
What amazes me more
is that you have picked up
my poem
softies
I compose rarely
I came to this sight then abandoned
then returned
Life is one large ocean
full of commotion
each one must develop toleration
to be a merged
as a part of a roaring ocean
thus settle down to calm
I shall read more
to switch over to
the fathoms of turmoils of life
you portray with such ease.
just for few days
and I have read two poems
I must add you have the inborn vitamin of poetry
as you use metaphors so easily
What amazes me more
is that you have picked up
my poem
softies
I compose rarely
I came to this sight then abandoned
then returned
Life is one large ocean
full of commotion
each one must develop toleration
to be a merged
as a part of a roaring ocean
thus settle down to calm
I shall read more
to switch over to
the fathoms of turmoils of life
you portray with such ease.
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