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The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
Days morph
of invading stardust
Lessons of lifetimes
tattoo indelible knowledge
viscerally, upon each thought
A mind opens wider than
tempted of ornamental starburst
Recruitment of a tattered soul
followed by
it's patchwork'd weary heart
beating willing subjugation
Claimed by complete dominion
of forevermore
splicing ink with blood
This, my pact of prose
Ritualized in rhythmic flow
verses born exquisite;
while tears silently fall
and breaths hitch in chest;
purposely splayed
of raw honest strength
is to be of beauty incarnate
To be word woven,
each fiber written, stitched
and intertwined in always
Unveiling a newborn species
a mythos of love,
unfathomable in it's scope
Where imagination and flesh
big bang combust
creating those very origins
inspiration's impetus cries out,
brevity blooms
and poetry
permeates
this, renewal of life.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 21st Jul 2021
| Edited 27th Jul 2021
Author's Note
An ode to my love of poetry and how it's an integral part of my DNA on this, my one year DUP anniversary. 🙏🏻
Thanks for being part of my journey.
©Blu2021
Thanks for being part of my journey.
©Blu2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
21st Jul 2021 10:52pm
A love we both share, poetry has become a life force a way to express, my thoughts and dreams, it is a integral part of who I am
Great ode beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Great ode beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
21st Jul 2021 10:57pm
Yep, I completely agree... it's wriggled down into my very being, that's for sure! I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Ron. I adore that we share that feeling of love, release and poetic rapture... lol...
Thanks for being here, the list add and all you do you make my day! ☀
Much love my dear
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for being here, the list add and all you do you make my day! ☀
Much love my dear
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
21st Jul 2021 11:43pm
I love your vocabulary it’s so smooth ♥️♥️
Love you Blueboo ♥️
Always 🤗
Jackie xoxox
Love you Blueboo ♥️
Always 🤗
Jackie xoxox
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 3:17am
Ohhh Yay! That's quite a lovely compliment, Jackie.. thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your support and encouragement.
🌹 - 💙
Don't be a stranger, my lovely sister in ink!!
xoxo
-BB
🌹 - 💙
Don't be a stranger, my lovely sister in ink!!
xoxo
-BB
Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
23rd Jul 2021 2:37am
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
21st Jul 2021 11:47pm
writing is wiven in tg
tho8e heart and soul. it becomes a breath that needs to exhale. a whisper that's a cry of freedom. expression of feeling in frin the darkness ti tge glory of light
tho8e heart and soul. it becomes a breath that needs to exhale. a whisper that's a cry of freedom. expression of feeling in frin the darkness ti tge glory of light
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 3:20am
'The glory of the light' .... Wow what beautiful beautiful comments, C. Just gorgeous.... Thanks for that and all your amazing kindness throughout this year... I am lucky to call you my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 - Susan
Much love and respect,
🌹 - Susan
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 1:10am
Congratulations on one year anniversary at DUP. You have found your forever love hope he's treat you well. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 3:21am
Thanks for your comments, Francisco... I appreciate all your support with your continued readership!
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Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
beauty manifest in flowing rhyme and imagery. I am but human to admit my flaws of jealousy of something that has not touched my heart as yet BUT over joyed as your soul burning bright and shared within your prose, beckons with beguiling light illuminating a path for my journey as well as others.
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 3:26am
Once again, your amazingly kind comments blow me away with their impact. I am undeserving of such acclaim but I do hope that I can be of inspiration, just like you are to me...
I am so grateful that you find a light within my poetry.... I just beam with that knowledge, Richard.... All my gratitude for the generous list add and every kindness you've shown me along our journey to date.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
I am so grateful that you find a light within my poetry.... I just beam with that knowledge, Richard.... All my gratitude for the generous list add and every kindness you've shown me along our journey to date.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 2:32am
Happy anniversary Blue...and this piece of poetry shows just what a wonderful Poet you truly are my friend.
XX Harry
XX Harry
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 3:29am
Thank you, Harry ;)
Your kind comments make me smile from ear to ear. All my warmest thanks for reading, the list add and being a part of my journey here on DU.
You've taught me a lot, my friend 🙏🏻
Loads of respect and peaceful thoughts your way
✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Your kind comments make me smile from ear to ear. All my warmest thanks for reading, the list add and being a part of my journey here on DU.
You've taught me a lot, my friend 🙏🏻
Loads of respect and peaceful thoughts your way
✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 5:10am
I adore the title Blu. :)))
This reads a bit more experimental than your other work, which I have read.
(but I do see you as an experimental risk taker. And I LOVE that about you.)
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PIECE.
I am right there with you.
You inspire me so much.
This reads a bit more experimental than your other work, which I have read.
(but I do see you as an experimental risk taker. And I LOVE that about you.)
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PIECE.
I am right there with you.
You inspire me so much.
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 6:37am
The inspiration flows from you own pen to my psyche, too!! It's a truly beautiful symbiosis!! haha! Poetic voices singing out into the online ether....
I knew adding that title, that you might dig it!! 👍🏻 Ohh hellz yeah, Thanks for that! It means a lot!
I threw this down on a break from work (I work @ home) so I am still unsure of it but I totally get that experimental feeling... I agree...
I adore having you along for the ride, Cipher!
Thanks, again!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I knew adding that title, that you might dig it!! 👍🏻 Ohh hellz yeah, Thanks for that! It means a lot!
I threw this down on a break from work (I work @ home) so I am still unsure of it but I totally get that experimental feeling... I agree...
I adore having you along for the ride, Cipher!
Thanks, again!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 6:20am
Can't believe it's been a year already, you poems still read as beautiful as the first one....
Another great ink
Another great ink
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 6:31am
Awww... Wow! What a beautifully written comment, POft! I deeply appreciate it and thank you from the bottom of my heart ♥
Best wishes your way, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Best wishes your way, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 5:33pm
Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
22nd Jul 2021 7:11pm
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
27th Jul 2021 7:46am
Poetry has always been a big part of my life. Maybe it's one of those things people don't get unless you're one who gets it.
Wonderful ink.
Wonderful ink.
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Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
30th Jul 2021 6:19am
A grand impressionist beauty of love incarnate. This took me along the cosmic path into the heart of something altogether blossoming like the soul of a galaxy that unfolds through epochs of passion. I loved the trip through the multiverse of love and how it took me to this:
Unveiling a newborn species
a mythos of love,
unfathomable in it's scope
You really expanded your vista to encompass the universe.
XoXo
John
Unveiling a newborn species
a mythos of love,
unfathomable in it's scope
You really expanded your vista to encompass the universe.
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
30th Jul 2021 7:22am
I am sooooo glad you enjoyed this one John. My heart soars, reading of your understanding and kinship.
All my warmest and truly heartfelt appreciation.
🌹 - xo
Susan
All my warmest and truly heartfelt appreciation.
🌹 - xo
Susan
Re. The combustible birth of forever love. (A pact)
9th Aug 2021 5:32pm
I've always thought of poetry as a journal, expressing those private thoughts made public helping us reflect and figure things out. It's a wonderful piece, how dedicated you are to the art that's been a big part of your life. I think I may speak for many others here, but we're glad you are part of this community in sharing your phenomenal work.
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