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Night moves
In darkness, we are
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry
sensing
reaching
savouring
responding
I imagine
you could be anyone
and therefore
so can I
Published 21st Jul 2021
Author's Note
For Missy's classy erotica comp
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21st Jul 2021 2:46am
21st Jul 2021 3:29am
Well gosh, that means a lot coming from the king of sex poems....! I'm blushing.
Thank you. ❤
Thank you. ❤
21st Jul 2021 6:27am
Romantic and sexy. Favourite verse:
In darkness, we are
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry [visualisable nocturnal scene be it in bedroom or al fresco]
In darkness, we are
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry [visualisable nocturnal scene be it in bedroom or al fresco]
27th Jul 2021 10:46pm
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22nd Jul 2021 3:55am
27th Jul 2021 10:48pm
Not sure I've ever been classy or erotic, but I'm glad this fit the bill! 😊
22nd Jul 2021 6:37am
27th Jul 2021 10:49pm
25th Jul 2021 5:11am
Dear K,
The best part of sex…imagining an imaginary lover. Oh dear! Is that in print? Did I just write that?!
One must do what it takes and I like that you own it. Brava. I wish you the best in the comp. H🌷
The best part of sex…imagining an imaginary lover. Oh dear! Is that in print? Did I just write that?!
One must do what it takes and I like that you own it. Brava. I wish you the best in the comp. H🌷
27th Jul 2021 10:51pm
Yes, it's in print! We both said it! Doh!
Whatever it takes... I live in my head most of the time anyway...
Thanks for getting it! 😉
Whatever it takes... I live in my head most of the time anyway...
Thanks for getting it! 😉
3rd Aug 2021 9:45pm
A well deserved winner bt, that takes the challenge to another level. Congratulations
4th Aug 2021 00:23am
