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Loving You⁓* (eights 'n sixes)
It may be too long for some … so, grab a snack,
sit back, 'n relax with a glass of good wine. ; )
"I try my best, but cannot rest
when sultry dreams collide.
Deep calls our plight throughout each night …
such lust can't be denied.
How long will we, in misery,
endure it and prolong?"
I'm on my knees; oh, hear these pleas,
"Take us where we belong;
where hungry lips partake in sips
the bounty of our heat.
Then, feel it, too, my hands on you,
our breath in perfect beat."
I touch your face and we embrace,
so close our every part.
Your breasts to mine, your mound feels fine,
we cannot pull part.
I kiss your lips, your fingertips
find my manly bulge.
I lift your dress, I must confess
my hands you do indulge.
My belt undone we're in for fun,
my trousers hit the floor.
While stepping out there is no doubt,
your treasures I'll explore.
Sweetly designed, your peach I find ...
how wet and soft it feels.
You don't complain, I won't abstain;
goodness, how it appeals!
With care and pride, your clothes aside,
I gasp at what I see.
With hips that flare and skin so fair,
I know you're made for me.
You slowly sway to bed and lay,
pull me down next to you.
Long-side your heat we're kissing sweet,
my hands exploring, too;
and, then it seems, just like in dreams,
we touch in perfect fit.
Long my finger, it does linger ~
upon your vibrant clit;
Down with my shorts, your hand cavorts
and finds a nice surprise.
Your eyes go wide at what's inside,
at it's delightful size.
I felt your knees begin to squeeze,
when you found my treasure.
A quiv'ring thigh then caught my eye ~
your impending pleasure.
Hot thighs to thighs, our passions rise,
as does my manhood, too;
feeling your hand, its touch is grand,
enthralling through and through.
Hand 'pon your mound, soft moaning sound
inspires a pulsing beat.
Pure, primal urge, gorged deep with surge
of long, hard, throbbing meat.
As I can tell, yours craves as-well,
to fully swallow me!
Spread satin thighs, moans soft your sighs,
our souls soar high and free.
Feel your slick grip around me slip,
your panting spurs me on.
You’ve wet the head, it has turned red,
a swollen, sweet bon-bon.
You rub it in and out again,
each motion makes it bulge;
and, when its huge, in a deluge
your needs you do indulge.
Oh, god, it's hot on your g-spot,
I think we'll go insane.
The head slips in, our stars a'spin ...
I see your pleasured pain.
I’m stroking now, but then somehow
I quickly slip it out!
You're writhing full, trying to pull
it back inside and pout,
"You are a cad, I need you bad;
please, don't treat me this way."
I answer, "Dear, please have no fear."
as my tongue starts to play.
Your lips I lick, your ears a flick,
then down your ample breasts.
You say, "Oh-MY!" then, ask me why,
"I can't have all the rest?"
I'm busy, though, and let you go
on whimpering my name.
Pert tips I bite, you writhe and fight
to urge me down your frame.
I'm giving in, slowly begin
my lips kissing your rose.
Bouquet of sweets, my tongue entreats
such joy, you can't compose.
You push my face into your grace
and rock me to your groans.
Wet and aflame ~ you cry my name,
I grip your thrusting bones.
My tongue is hard, plunged avant-garde
you've never had before.
With urgent sighs, your "take me" eyes
beg softly and implore,
"Oh, Sir, don't quit licking my clit,
you’ll drive me wet and wild;
if you desist this sizzling tryst...!"
I just looked-up and smiled.
You pulled me up, my lips to sup,
and all the world took flight.
Then, you and me set soaring free,
entwined with all our might.
You're wet, I glide and slide inside,
the fit like none yet known.
Soft in my ear, "Be careful, Dear ...
you feel so largely grown."
"I hear you, Sweet; entwine my feet,
take me as you adore."
“Deep ’neath my mound … ohhh, you have found
spots no man's been before!
You feel so good, I knew you would,
take me 'now' as you will.
Slip more inside," you softly sighed ...
"smooth ⁓ slowww, how good you feel."
Kissing, you say, "You make me sway
like willows in the breeze!"
In low retort, "You are the sort
I always want to please."
You then implore, "Oh, give me more;
I yearn to feel you there!"
What can I do but answer you
that I've much more to spare.
"Ohhh, you're so tight!" yet, in despite,
you beg me, "Drive it deep!"
I shove it home, our spirits roam,
as through us pleasures sweep.
Your knees raised high, boldly you sigh,
"Ride me cowboy, ride!"
You buck, I thrust, we're bound to bust,
so hard and deep I glide.
"I never knew," I said to you,
"loving could feel so good!"
You answered back, "You fill my crack,
the way I knew you could;
I did not know I'd love it so …
just what my pussy needs.
I want to cum, to feel the thrum
as you release your seeds.
Ohhh, move it fast! I'm there at last,
let's let our rivers flow!"
"I'm with you, Babe, you so persuade,
I'm ready to let go!"
In-tune you rock on my hard cock,
your wondrous cunt is full.
Then, I shout, "Do I pull it out?"
"Fill me up, My Bull!"
You bite your lip, a bloody drip,
your nails take half my back.
I'm in the throes and heavens knows,
we're on the inside track.
Ahead's the gate, I cannot wait;
you yell, "Fill me full NOW!”
I feel your juice rush with a whoosh,
your hips become my prow.
'Mongst stars above, we pull and shove
'til all our worlds collide:
It's true, I know, but I can't slow,
still hard and deep inside.
I smile at you, you smile back, too,
I know what's coming next:
You're now on top, we cannot stop,
our muscles fully-flexed.
Your head tilts back, I see your crack
slide up and down my prick.
Your tits invite my teeth to bite,
our juice blends hot and slick.
The friction of, you up above,
as I slide in and out:
upon my pole, you’re in control,
as you climb up I shout,
"I want your heat to feel my meat,
to make us one and whole;
ohh, ride me long, make it prolong
'til we become one soul."
Each rise and fall you take my all,
once tight, now firmly-fit.
In ecstasy we're riding free,
to You I must submit.
Eyes locked-on tight with all our might,
your beauty steals my air ...
deep from within it builds again,
as I grab hold your hair.
I'm cramming full and feel your pull
to take my cum complete.
We both explode, gifting our load,
yes ~ Loving You is sweet⁓*
sit back, 'n relax with a glass of good wine. ; )
"I try my best, but cannot rest
when sultry dreams collide.
Deep calls our plight throughout each night …
such lust can't be denied.
How long will we, in misery,
endure it and prolong?"
I'm on my knees; oh, hear these pleas,
"Take us where we belong;
where hungry lips partake in sips
the bounty of our heat.
Then, feel it, too, my hands on you,
our breath in perfect beat."
I touch your face and we embrace,
so close our every part.
Your breasts to mine, your mound feels fine,
we cannot pull part.
I kiss your lips, your fingertips
find my manly bulge.
I lift your dress, I must confess
my hands you do indulge.
My belt undone we're in for fun,
my trousers hit the floor.
While stepping out there is no doubt,
your treasures I'll explore.
Sweetly designed, your peach I find ...
how wet and soft it feels.
You don't complain, I won't abstain;
goodness, how it appeals!
With care and pride, your clothes aside,
I gasp at what I see.
With hips that flare and skin so fair,
I know you're made for me.
You slowly sway to bed and lay,
pull me down next to you.
Long-side your heat we're kissing sweet,
my hands exploring, too;
and, then it seems, just like in dreams,
we touch in perfect fit.
Long my finger, it does linger ~
upon your vibrant clit;
Down with my shorts, your hand cavorts
and finds a nice surprise.
Your eyes go wide at what's inside,
at it's delightful size.
I felt your knees begin to squeeze,
when you found my treasure.
A quiv'ring thigh then caught my eye ~
your impending pleasure.
Hot thighs to thighs, our passions rise,
as does my manhood, too;
feeling your hand, its touch is grand,
enthralling through and through.
Hand 'pon your mound, soft moaning sound
inspires a pulsing beat.
Pure, primal urge, gorged deep with surge
of long, hard, throbbing meat.
As I can tell, yours craves as-well,
to fully swallow me!
Spread satin thighs, moans soft your sighs,
our souls soar high and free.
Feel your slick grip around me slip,
your panting spurs me on.
You’ve wet the head, it has turned red,
a swollen, sweet bon-bon.
You rub it in and out again,
each motion makes it bulge;
and, when its huge, in a deluge
your needs you do indulge.
Oh, god, it's hot on your g-spot,
I think we'll go insane.
The head slips in, our stars a'spin ...
I see your pleasured pain.
I’m stroking now, but then somehow
I quickly slip it out!
You're writhing full, trying to pull
it back inside and pout,
"You are a cad, I need you bad;
please, don't treat me this way."
I answer, "Dear, please have no fear."
as my tongue starts to play.
Your lips I lick, your ears a flick,
then down your ample breasts.
You say, "Oh-MY!" then, ask me why,
"I can't have all the rest?"
I'm busy, though, and let you go
on whimpering my name.
Pert tips I bite, you writhe and fight
to urge me down your frame.
I'm giving in, slowly begin
my lips kissing your rose.
Bouquet of sweets, my tongue entreats
such joy, you can't compose.
You push my face into your grace
and rock me to your groans.
Wet and aflame ~ you cry my name,
I grip your thrusting bones.
My tongue is hard, plunged avant-garde
you've never had before.
With urgent sighs, your "take me" eyes
beg softly and implore,
"Oh, Sir, don't quit licking my clit,
you’ll drive me wet and wild;
if you desist this sizzling tryst...!"
I just looked-up and smiled.
You pulled me up, my lips to sup,
and all the world took flight.
Then, you and me set soaring free,
entwined with all our might.
You're wet, I glide and slide inside,
the fit like none yet known.
Soft in my ear, "Be careful, Dear ...
you feel so largely grown."
"I hear you, Sweet; entwine my feet,
take me as you adore."
“Deep ’neath my mound … ohhh, you have found
spots no man's been before!
You feel so good, I knew you would,
take me 'now' as you will.
Slip more inside," you softly sighed ...
"smooth ⁓ slowww, how good you feel."
Kissing, you say, "You make me sway
like willows in the breeze!"
In low retort, "You are the sort
I always want to please."
You then implore, "Oh, give me more;
I yearn to feel you there!"
What can I do but answer you
that I've much more to spare.
"Ohhh, you're so tight!" yet, in despite,
you beg me, "Drive it deep!"
I shove it home, our spirits roam,
as through us pleasures sweep.
Your knees raised high, boldly you sigh,
"Ride me cowboy, ride!"
You buck, I thrust, we're bound to bust,
so hard and deep I glide.
"I never knew," I said to you,
"loving could feel so good!"
You answered back, "You fill my crack,
the way I knew you could;
I did not know I'd love it so …
just what my pussy needs.
I want to cum, to feel the thrum
as you release your seeds.
Ohhh, move it fast! I'm there at last,
let's let our rivers flow!"
"I'm with you, Babe, you so persuade,
I'm ready to let go!"
In-tune you rock on my hard cock,
your wondrous cunt is full.
Then, I shout, "Do I pull it out?"
"Fill me up, My Bull!"
You bite your lip, a bloody drip,
your nails take half my back.
I'm in the throes and heavens knows,
we're on the inside track.
Ahead's the gate, I cannot wait;
you yell, "Fill me full NOW!”
I feel your juice rush with a whoosh,
your hips become my prow.
'Mongst stars above, we pull and shove
'til all our worlds collide:
It's true, I know, but I can't slow,
still hard and deep inside.
I smile at you, you smile back, too,
I know what's coming next:
You're now on top, we cannot stop,
our muscles fully-flexed.
Your head tilts back, I see your crack
slide up and down my prick.
Your tits invite my teeth to bite,
our juice blends hot and slick.
The friction of, you up above,
as I slide in and out:
upon my pole, you’re in control,
as you climb up I shout,
"I want your heat to feel my meat,
to make us one and whole;
ohh, ride me long, make it prolong
'til we become one soul."
Each rise and fall you take my all,
once tight, now firmly-fit.
In ecstasy we're riding free,
to You I must submit.
Eyes locked-on tight with all our might,
your beauty steals my air ...
deep from within it builds again,
as I grab hold your hair.
I'm cramming full and feel your pull
to take my cum complete.
We both explode, gifting our load,
yes ~ Loving You is sweet⁓*
Published 18th Jul 2021
| Edited 19th Dec 2021
Author's Note
"Ahhh, such charged⚡enthrallment, dreams might oft enfold!"
(artwork) Courtesy of Pinterest Sensuals.
(form)
"Et Ses Octo"
(Doubledown Style 1 or Eights 'n Sixes)
Original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins
© 1 Apr 1987
Any number of 4-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or centered.
Syllable count per verse:
4-4/6/4-4/6
Rhyme scheme:
xxxaxxxa
xxxxxb
xxxcxxxc
xxxxxb
xxxdxxxd
xxxxxe
xxxfxxxf
xxxxxe
Etc...
(artwork) Courtesy of Pinterest Sensuals.
(form)
"Et Ses Octo"
(Doubledown Style 1 or Eights 'n Sixes)
Original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins
© 1 Apr 1987
Any number of 4-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or centered.
Syllable count per verse:
4-4/6/4-4/6
Rhyme scheme:
xxxaxxxa
xxxxxb
xxxcxxxc
xxxxxb
xxxdxxxd
xxxxxe
xxxfxxxf
xxxxxe
Etc...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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18th Jul 2021 6:58am
Romantic and rampant! Liked the rhythm, exampled by my favourite set of verses:
Your head tilts back, I see your crack
slide up and down my prick.
Your tits invite my teeth to bite,
our juice blends hot and slick.
The friction of you up above,
as I slide in and out:
upon my pole, you’re in control,
as you climb up I shout,
"I want your heat to feel my meat,
to make us one and whole;
ohh, ride me long, make it prolong
'til we become one soul."
Your head tilts back, I see your crack
slide up and down my prick.
Your tits invite my teeth to bite,
our juice blends hot and slick.
The friction of you up above,
as I slide in and out:
upon my pole, you’re in control,
as you climb up I shout,
"I want your heat to feel my meat,
to make us one and whole;
ohh, ride me long, make it prolong
'til we become one soul."
18th Jul 2021 4:57pm
I thank you, Syr 🍂
I'm honored you selected one of my pieces to read and comment on; especially, this imaginative mammoth tale of a passionate couple experiencing so vividly and deeply what lovers do … what so many of us love doing, remember doing, or dream of.
Your highlighted verses are amongst my favorites, too … good choice! A keen eye, too, in recognizing the rhythmic poetic tempo. This is a form of my own invention; if you might wish to try it, see Author's Notes for instructions.
Thank you again, ever-so humbly … a great Sunday to ya! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I'm honored you selected one of my pieces to read and comment on; especially, this imaginative mammoth tale of a passionate couple experiencing so vividly and deeply what lovers do … what so many of us love doing, remember doing, or dream of.
Your highlighted verses are amongst my favorites, too … good choice! A keen eye, too, in recognizing the rhythmic poetic tempo. This is a form of my own invention; if you might wish to try it, see Author's Notes for instructions.
Thank you again, ever-so humbly … a great Sunday to ya! ⁓ Richard 🍃
18th Jul 2021 9:38pm
24th Jul 2021 11:17pm
18th Jul 2021 9:49pm
RLD U remind again when again had his first time
but its so long u have one
again would have cum ten times
cut the length what
not urs yuor poems ...its too long to hold on
///try as many times any guy or miss/// love cums in a swish/// experience it RLD THIS
but its so long u have one
again would have cum ten times
cut the length what
not urs yuor poems ...its too long to hold on
///try as many times any guy or miss/// love cums in a swish/// experience it RLD THIS
24th Jul 2021 11:14pm
Greetings, Again 👌
I thank you most gratefully for enduring this mammoth poem, and for the delight of your creative take on it, too.
Isn't it remarkable what will reach deep within one's memory and take us there "again"? ; )
What a pleasure to it is to share with with You, M'friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I thank you most gratefully for enduring this mammoth poem, and for the delight of your creative take on it, too.
Isn't it remarkable what will reach deep within one's memory and take us there "again"? ; )
What a pleasure to it is to share with with You, M'friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃
25th Jul 2021 10:34pm
19th Jul 2021 5:06am
Wow! Created an amazing UP. Thanks for the stimulation. Hugs and peace, oral
24th Jul 2021 11:26pm
With happy thanks, Syr Poet 🥂
It's great to know the intention in sharing this virtual erotic journey of a poem has brought enjoyment to one of my peer readers … still, I'm not sure there's enough ink left to write another … I mean, my pen's tongue was hanging out by time we finished the finalé … LOL!
Thank you again, Oral, for enduring and leaving such good feedback! ⁓ Richard 🍃
It's great to know the intention in sharing this virtual erotic journey of a poem has brought enjoyment to one of my peer readers … still, I'm not sure there's enough ink left to write another … I mean, my pen's tongue was hanging out by time we finished the finalé … LOL!
Thank you again, Oral, for enduring and leaving such good feedback! ⁓ Richard 🍃
