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Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequential, lightning-like, life changing circumstances)
From multitudes
of abstract moments
where eyeblinks
become sole reason
belief in purpose perpetuates
like a long cleansing inhale/exhale
that satiates we wandering aimless souls
stringing together
our singular instances
allowing joy to spill over the brim
making true believers
or softening a hardened weary
smoothing severity in rough edges
suffusing opportunities
nanosecond by nanosecond
a balm of time
that captures poignancy
reflecting it back,
amped—
tenderizing that toughest part
with jaw drops
random speechlessness
and bated breath
from
every.
single.
heartbeat.
Author's Note
Thoughts on the littlest/tiniest experiences that cause the biggest life impacts. Those moments that happen in a true blink.... forever altering....
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Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
17th Jul 2021 6:39pm
Awesome the incidental moments that make life changing moments in your world
Going left when true love was on the right
Just the smallest moment when your things change
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Going left when true love was on the right
Just the smallest moment when your things change
Great write beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
Your comments are so very astute, Ron. I often think of this older independent movie from the 90's that I loved, it was romantic but it was more about the various different paths we take without really realizing it and how one small instance can change everything... one way or another....
I so appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful remarks, my dear. My gratitude is all yours for the reading list add, and being kind and attentive to my ramblings here... haha...😂
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 ⚔️ 💙
xoxo
B
I so appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful remarks, my dear. My gratitude is all yours for the reading list add, and being kind and attentive to my ramblings here... haha...😂
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 ⚔️ 💙
xoxo
B
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
17th Jul 2021 6:48pm
Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 6:46am
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
17th Jul 2021 7:07pm
Love is in your heart my friend. We deal with what life gives us. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 6:47am
We certainly don't have a choice... lol.. I definitely appreciate your stick-to-itiveness, Francisco!
You rock!
🌹
You rock!
🌹
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
17th Jul 2021 8:28pm
That single moment can go in either direction.
Well done, Blue.
hugs, luv's
buddhakitty
Well done, Blue.
hugs, luv's
buddhakitty
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 6:48am
Bingo, bk!!
I adore seeing you, my dear 🙏🏻
It's always a personal treat of mine!!
returned lovin's!
🌹 - 💙
B
I adore seeing you, my dear 🙏🏻
It's always a personal treat of mine!!
returned lovin's!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
I am thoroughly inspired, completely sapiosexually turned on by your words...the bigger the better. Tingle factor off the charts. Proof that happiness can be had in infinitesimal increments. Bravissima bella coniglietta❣🌹🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 6:54am
You are positively radiant within your lovely comments and truly generous in the way in which you communicate such voluminous emotions... You're erudition mirrors back to me much of what you just described.... it's that big old brain that's makes you one true sexy motherfuker (as Prince would have said!).. hahaha...#Truth... #sometimesyoujustgottousetheMFbomb
I am warmed through and through by your kindness, BB!!
Danke :)
🌹🐻 💋 🐰🌹
xo
B
I am warmed through and through by your kindness, BB!!
Danke :)
🌹🐻 💋 🐰🌹
xo
B
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17th Jul 2021 9:13pm
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
Ohh wow, Danny!
I am so happy you enjoyed reading and felt that emotional response... All my warmest appreciation for the generous list add and your thoughtfulness in such lovely comments , my friend.
I hope you are doing well!
It's awesome seeing you on my page 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I am so happy you enjoyed reading and felt that emotional response... All my warmest appreciation for the generous list add and your thoughtfulness in such lovely comments , my friend.
I hope you are doing well!
It's awesome seeing you on my page 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
17th Jul 2021 11:20pm
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
That's kinda my mindset.... if you read my comments to Ron at the top, you'll see where I was sort of pulling an idea from... I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your summations here, I missed reading your thoughts... They almost always leave me thinking and pondering ....I enjoy that greatly.
Thanks for the RL add and being cool, Tim.
All my warmest,
🌹 - 💙
Susan
Thanks for the RL add and being cool, Tim.
All my warmest,
🌹 - 💙
Susan
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
Anonymous
18th Jul 2021 5:04am
--Beautiful Analysis...A Love Poem?
The breathlessness particled down to a series of discrete psychological hinges, like the planks of a rope bridge...
There's a kind of deep romanticism in this. An irony....granular analysis of yearning...
Of what nature that yearning is, this reader isn't sure.
Apparently, one of the casualties of post-modern life is what we used to call "falling in love." Now, with apps & so on, the reasoning went, we can have love without the falling.
Falling indeed--here, every conscious-blurring, psychologically spaghettifying moment of romantic or otherwise existential yearning is particled down, like flecks in granite.
The breathlessness particled down to a series of discrete psychological hinges, like the planks of a rope bridge...
There's a kind of deep romanticism in this. An irony....granular analysis of yearning...
Of what nature that yearning is, this reader isn't sure.
Apparently, one of the casualties of post-modern life is what we used to call "falling in love." Now, with apps & so on, the reasoning went, we can have love without the falling.
Falling indeed--here, every conscious-blurring, psychologically spaghettifying moment of romantic or otherwise existential yearning is particled down, like flecks in granite.
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 7:08am
Yeah, a love poem... because that's the lens of which I was writing from.... However, I believe poetry to be a subjective art form... so the type or feeling of, is really based upon whatever the eye of the beholder's own truth is...
Flecks in granite... I like that... it's fractions of moments or tiny instances that can make or break... So yes, having social media feeding into the possibilities makes for an exponentially bigger 'highway of destiny'... haha...
I appreciate you reading and the deep delve you take...
Be well - 🌹
-B
Flecks in granite... I like that... it's fractions of moments or tiny instances that can make or break... So yes, having social media feeding into the possibilities makes for an exponentially bigger 'highway of destiny'... haha...
I appreciate you reading and the deep delve you take...
Be well - 🌹
-B
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
18th Jul 2021 7:21am
Ohhh... You pulled out the SMF.!. That just brings the cool factor to a "rendered speechless caliber", my dear, sweet-sweet Blu. :)))
(I fucking love this title.!.). (Abso-fucking-lutely.)
How about this: S/FMF? (Damn... That looks like something I saw on Craigslist back in the day?). Maybe you can decode the thing.?.:)))
This write is just... Cooler than a polar bears toe nails, even if the toe nails were painted Blu, under a Blu sky, standing on Blu ice...
(I fucking love this title.!.). (Abso-fucking-lutely.)
How about this: S/FMF? (Damn... That looks like something I saw on Craigslist back in the day?). Maybe you can decode the thing.?.:)))
This write is just... Cooler than a polar bears toe nails, even if the toe nails were painted Blu, under a Blu sky, standing on Blu ice...
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 8:20pm
I did pull out the "big guns"... hahaha... sometimes it's absolutely necessary!!
I get long winded sometimes, with titles but I just couldn't edit this one down and decided to keep it ... So i'm really glad you liked it, C!!
FMF usually means a female male female threesome the "S" is where I'm pondering... Single? Seriously? Submissive?... Hmmm...
fmf can also mean fuck my face, so I guess it's based upon context clues... hahaha... My kinky skills at your disposal!!
☺
Swaying to the tinkling sounds of the blu's playing (I am a big Billie Holiday fan!) amongst blu sparkling stars....
I appreciate you, C
💙-B
I get long winded sometimes, with titles but I just couldn't edit this one down and decided to keep it ... So i'm really glad you liked it, C!!
FMF usually means a female male female threesome the "S" is where I'm pondering... Single? Seriously? Submissive?... Hmmm...
fmf can also mean fuck my face, so I guess it's based upon context clues... hahaha... My kinky skills at your disposal!!
☺
Swaying to the tinkling sounds of the blu's playing (I am a big Billie Holiday fan!) amongst blu sparkling stars....
I appreciate you, C
💙-B
Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
19th Jul 2021 9:02am
Sooo glad to have your skills at my disposal... Too funny.!.
Oh... Emm... Gee...
(didn't know if you really didnt know what the F meant... Stands for "Foxy" of course... We better never post that anywhere else... people might get the wrong idea... but then... Not everyone has your skills, so, maybe they wouldn't see that "deeply" into the matter.)
I love the blu's, as well...
Keep swaying to the tinkling sounds, amongst blu sparkling stars.... My good friend.
TOO COOL
Oh... Emm... Gee...
(didn't know if you really didnt know what the F meant... Stands for "Foxy" of course... We better never post that anywhere else... people might get the wrong idea... but then... Not everyone has your skills, so, maybe they wouldn't see that "deeply" into the matter.)
I love the blu's, as well...
Keep swaying to the tinkling sounds, amongst blu sparkling stars.... My good friend.
TOO COOL
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Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
How amazing. Finding meaning and life within the flickering images of a kaleidoscope where others are hypnotized and lost. I find a deep spiritual undercurrent here [which would be a given, given the kaleidoscope I view life though] yet I see deep currents running though you as well. The universe exits within a grain of sand or the simple lines of prose. Peace, sorceress.
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 8:27pm
It's your own descriptions that solidify my inkling of thinking that eventually morphed into this poem.... A grain of sand,like a brief instant, indeed!
We never can know how the 'butterfly effect' of the tiniest of moments, can impact on a potentially massive scale... it's definitely thought provoking...
I am so grateful for your own mind's interpretations... I adore basking within that insight... thank you for that.
I appreciate your list add and the depth of your sentiments, Richard.
🌹 - B
xo
We never can know how the 'butterfly effect' of the tiniest of moments, can impact on a potentially massive scale... it's definitely thought provoking...
I am so grateful for your own mind's interpretations... I adore basking within that insight... thank you for that.
I appreciate your list add and the depth of your sentiments, Richard.
🌹 - B
xo
Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
18th Jul 2021 9:59pm
Who's leading who sorceress? Are we racing toward the goal of spiritual enlightenment? I am fundamentally changed by small degrees each poem you've written, each one opening a door slightly wider or the window just a little higher into my soul. Forever grateful, peace sorceress
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
20th Jul 2021 9:42pm
Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
20th Jul 2021 11:02pm
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
21st Jul 2021 1:42am
Im saying that too Apisspoorshaman! Lol I will be back later to give you a more informed comment because I’m going to read it again it was a hectic day when I saw this♥️♥️♥️🫐🫐🫐
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
21st Jul 2021 6:15am
ohhhh... hahaha... my bad... no worries, whenever or if ever... I appreciate you, no matter...
🌹 - 💋 - 💙
xo
🌹 - 💋 - 💙
xo
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
21st Jul 2021 5:02am
A symphony of those seconds in a day that can change a life. No one but you can take these moments and make them into a grand poem. Your talent keeps going on like there is no tomorrow. And we are the recipients of your gems. I feel honored to know you here through your genius of talent.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
I am beet red, blushing...
All my deepest and most humble thanks, John
My cup runneth over....
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
All my deepest and most humble thanks, John
My cup runneth over....
🌹 - 💙
xo
Susan
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
Not much more I can say that hasn’t already been said above me, just know I believe that you are one of the best writers here♥️🌹🫐
Loves you Blue ♥️
Jackie xoxox
Loves you Blue ♥️
Jackie xoxox
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
You're too too kind, Jackie! ... I humbly thank you as I strive to become better every day... Learning from all that cross my path... and never ever taking for granted my luck in such wonderful and awesome poets, responsible (in part) for a lot of the evolution of my growth!
All of your/they're lovely selflessness, and enormous support makes my time here and lessons learned, cherished beyond belief...
All my warmest appreciation, thanks and love!!
Muah Muah Muah 😘
🌹 - 💙
BB
xoxo
All of your/they're lovely selflessness, and enormous support makes my time here and lessons learned, cherished beyond belief...
All my warmest appreciation, thanks and love!!
Muah Muah Muah 😘
🌹 - 💙
BB
xoxo
Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but consequen
8th Aug 2021 6:10am
At the speed of thought, our synapses firing off, we're able to capture so much information with incredible speed.
Excellent write Blue. Very intriguing.
Excellent write Blue. Very intriguing.
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Re: Re. Living amongst split seconds~(the plethora of random but conse
8th Aug 2021 6:16am
I appreciate your summations, Walter... Yeah... just my thoughts and musings on the small instances that might ultimately end up becoming so very impactful.... You're so correct about your our capabilities, indeed!
I so appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.... You're the best ☺
🌹 - B
I so appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.... You're the best ☺
🌹 - B