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His Thinkin' Spot
He tells me.. he does his best thinkin’
with his hand between my knees,
fingers travelling north
where pleas are never 'please'..
more intentionals on hot breath,
exhaled low against my neck..
those three words-- “Open for Me”
Tracing warm to hotter curves,
parting paleness that pearls..
he presses into my beginnings
from slick end to end
with a flick of his wrist..
stroking wet epiphanies,
--his ego, Relentless--
that hidden thumb counting heartbeats,
far inside my shadow's trembling..
The heated pride.. dark eyes on mine-
he, thinking hard against my thigh,
arches my back and my insides..
When his notions swirl, hitting tight,
he palms the hot spill of idea
shaped on liquid lipbite-
his fingers taking Oh So Slow notes
in conclusion blooming forth..
I whisper~tell him..
Nothing impresses my Virgo wetness
... like his heavy~pettin’ intelligence.
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Re. His Thinkin' Spot
3rd Jul 2021 2:57am
wow, this is BIG LIKE territory
Steamy and a big warm glow
Think my glasses fogged up
Like
Steamy and a big warm glow
Think my glasses fogged up
Like
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:04am
heartnuzzles for ur capitals, PoetS..
im evertardy, but always so grateful for ur presence.. and if i blushed, id blush for the RL, but i came close ;) tyty♡
lotsaloves mr,
~d
im evertardy, but always so grateful for ur presence.. and if i blushed, id blush for the RL, but i came close ;) tyty♡
lotsaloves mr,
~d
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:13am
ur mention of "ballet" puts music in my mind to this, dark n slow with deep bass.. lovely.
ima say *prerequisite is equally hott in my book, bein akin to Knowing what one wantsneeds ;)
ur comments always seem to bring smiles, tyty..
shinee wishes ur way, sweetness!
~d
ima say *prerequisite is equally hott in my book, bein akin to Knowing what one wantsneeds ;)
ur comments always seem to bring smiles, tyty..
shinee wishes ur way, sweetness!
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
Ohh my, d... You immediately had me, with that first stanza setting the erotic stage, a veritable buffet of desire and passion that was just what I need tonight.... there's really nothing sexier than a big ol' brain and utterly exquisite to superb digital/oral skills.... lmao!!!.... just my thoughts.... ha!
🌹🤓 😋✨
Really excellent ink, my lovely lady!
I am so very glad I came across it tonight
Much love your way...
-💙
xo
B
🌹🤓 😋✨
Really excellent ink, my lovely lady!
I am so very glad I came across it tonight
Much love your way...
-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:27am
oh ladylove, how i miss u when im gone from here.. ur words, ever thoughtful and touching, tyty mwahs♡♡
buffet makes me giggle n think its like nearly midnightsnack time in cali.. may end in edible writing, lol.
cant agree more on brains n skills, im in total knowin smirk with u there.. one certainly feels cherished when its applied properly.. 😈
sendin sooo much love n squeaks ur way, wishin u shinee hours, beautiful!
~d
buffet makes me giggle n think its like nearly midnightsnack time in cali.. may end in edible writing, lol.
cant agree more on brains n skills, im in total knowin smirk with u there.. one certainly feels cherished when its applied properly.. 😈
sendin sooo much love n squeaks ur way, wishin u shinee hours, beautiful!
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
3rd Jul 2021 7:27am
No doubt where he keeps his brains, the cynic may say. Imaginative handling can produce good lovemaking.
I was taken with the cheekiness of the title which sets the scene. Can be a turn on to a man to be thought of by his woman in that way.
I was taken with the cheekiness of the title which sets the scene. Can be a turn on to a man to be thought of by his woman in that way.
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:33am
So good to see u, sir Simon, its been too long.. hopin to be back for a bit n will be round to ur page soon..
first off-- im lol @ the cynic- "no doubt where he keeps his brain".. ty for the smirk of true~true. ;)
shinee blessins to u,
~d
first off-- im lol @ the cynic- "no doubt where he keeps his brain".. ty for the smirk of true~true. ;)
shinee blessins to u,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
4th Jul 2021 8:07pm
That final tercet says it all! Intellect and respect are indeed a gentleman's best tools for seduction! Well done, Darksighing one!
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:43am
aww, sweet you, ty for takin time mfriend♡
intellect and respect, indeed-- and that mutual heartbinding ;)
much loves to u, LadyA,
~d
intellect and respect, indeed-- and that mutual heartbinding ;)
much loves to u, LadyA,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
5th Jul 2021 5:00pm
This is beautiful and erotic. I love the flow and the words. Lovely!
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:48am
awww, i cud well say the same of you, Major Darlin.. tyty ;)
evergood to see u here appreciating the flow of such maulins too..
wishin u a stellar rising,
~d
evergood to see u here appreciating the flow of such maulins too..
wishin u a stellar rising,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
13th Jul 2021 10:30am
Oh my goodness! Uhm well yea he sounds like QUITE the uh… intellectual! lol… whew you go on with yo bad self! lol
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:51am
omg u make me giggle n squeak a bit with such comment.. cant help the smile.. one might think u did it apurpose. ;)
tyty *mwahs* for readin, it always means soo much to see you here!
much lovins mdearest,
~d
tyty *mwahs* for readin, it always means soo much to see you here!
much lovins mdearest,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
17th Aug 2021 11:35pm
Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:54am
you are most awesome for readin, dear poet, tyty for takin time. huggins right back! ;)
wishin lovely hrs ur way,
~d
wishin lovely hrs ur way,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
18th Aug 2021 3:15pm
Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 7:59am
such a lovely comment from a sizzling poet.. *tyty, sweet man..
wishin u fancee hours,
~d
wishin u fancee hours,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
19th Aug 2021 9:08am
This is very relatable sort of cunnilungus with the fingers though my hubby can't think any thing else while at it like yours can. This is such a juicy erotica and you express in a saucy eloquence. Kudos!
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
Plz do just read my newest poem too,
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Re: Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 8:02am
so good to see u here, ty much for takin time with a great comment.. ;)
be peekin at ur page asap, n wishin u shinee hours,
~d
be peekin at ur page asap, n wishin u shinee hours,
~d
Re. His Thinkin' Spot
6th Sep 2021 10:20am
I whisper~tell him..
Nothing impresses my Virgo wetness
... like his heavy~pettin’ intelligence. These are my favorite lines but poem itself is a complete masterpiece.... Love it!
Nothing impresses my Virgo wetness
... like his heavy~pettin’ intelligence. These are my favorite lines but poem itself is a complete masterpiece.... Love it!
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Re. His Thinkin' Spot
Your poem felt like a quiet seductive dance and your last stanza was a beautiful end.
LJ
LJ
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Re. His Thinkin' Spot
17th Sep 2021 5:50am
I read this a couple of times offline. Had to finally log in and leave my thoughts.
Always top notch scripture from you. Authentic, creative and sensual. Automatic RL
Good to see you posting again. Much respect.
Always top notch scripture from you. Authentic, creative and sensual. Automatic RL
Good to see you posting again. Much respect.
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