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Children of a Dark Beginning
She had even said I love you
All He heard her say was "no"
He is cloaked in charcoal smoke
To mystify the onlookers
Casting out concrete definition
And upholding vagueness
She was feminine magnified
Long legs and hair, with piercing eyes;
Beauty that rains on you -
And all he can see was danger
All she could see was devotion
All He heard her say was "no"
He is cloaked in charcoal smoke
To mystify the onlookers
Casting out concrete definition
And upholding vagueness
She was feminine magnified
Long legs and hair, with piercing eyes;
Beauty that rains on you -
And all he can see was danger
All she could see was devotion
Published 17th Jun 2021
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17th Jun 2021 5:54pm
I have had to reread this several times. There is so much here. It's full of self-reflection and yet, at the same time-the theme is vagueness. And the poem is....vague. And beautiful. And I still need to work through the myriad of messages.
You're wonderful. And stop hearing no. It seems like what you are "hearing" isn't anything that's been said.
You're wonderful. And stop hearing no. It seems like what you are "hearing" isn't anything that's been said.
19th Jun 2021 3:54pm
10th Jul 2021 1:52am
