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Discovery First
At the moment
Of our meeting
I am naked
I stand humbly
To be honest with my intentions
Although you look to me
Your words speak of my negative space
Your actions avoid my touch
Your thoughts judge grotesquely.
In a tailored suit
Well made and shiny material
I approach you.
I catch your gaze.
With words dressed in silk and satin.
You unravel your dress
And show me your honest intentions
Humbly naked.
Published 12th Dec 2020
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20th Apr 2021 3:30am
A gently baring piece, Major darlin..
Brilliant juxta in he/she comparison from stanza to stanza in regards to that *humble* .. nuzzlin ur pen, I am..
..in my own humble opinion, the male perspective here is beautiful in its baring of purely desirous intent. Intent makes all the difference I believe.. must smirk[or wince a bit in Agrees] with the female defining of that Humble here. This just means the shinee ones must be kept close, no? ;)
Much enjoyed this ponderment..
Now. ---when *I give you humbled curtsy, I do hope y'know I mean Very low ;)
with kisses n pleasantries,
~d
Brilliant juxta in he/she comparison from stanza to stanza in regards to that *humble* .. nuzzlin ur pen, I am..
..in my own humble opinion, the male perspective here is beautiful in its baring of purely desirous intent. Intent makes all the difference I believe.. must smirk[or wince a bit in Agrees] with the female defining of that Humble here. This just means the shinee ones must be kept close, no? ;)
Much enjoyed this ponderment..
Now. ---when *I give you humbled curtsy, I do hope y'know I mean Very low ;)
with kisses n pleasantries,
~d
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