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Proved a liar
Of any creature • I've encountered
One is of the worst • of cowards
For the sheer effort • that's required
Covering • transgression with words
It sickens me,• how lies conceive
Painful still • what it proves to me
That you deserve • to be believed
And I deserve • to be deceived
This offence • I offer hatred
Of this • I can't rise higher
My truth of lies • that you painted
Show less a man • proves a liar
ARM 6/2021
Published 12th Jun 2021
| Edited 18th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Married to a liar
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
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29th Sep 2021 6:24pm
Your raw emotion here is palpable, as is the shadow of time, looking back across a minefield of experience.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Dec 2022 2:45pm
9th Nov 2022 6:31pm
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11th Nov 2022 3:44am
The picture; a devil in a shadow?
This write of yours is really good. The title caught my eye, and then the write itself kept my attention. I can easily sense the obvious anger within this, and frustration. You wrote it out strong as hell.
I know it's an older write, but new to me. Very well written.
This write of yours is really good. The title caught my eye, and then the write itself kept my attention. I can easily sense the obvious anger within this, and frustration. You wrote it out strong as hell.
I know it's an older write, but new to me. Very well written.
31st Dec 2022 7:11am
Thank you. I remember how pissed off I was back then. Poetry was my life saver.
25th Mar 2024 00:26am
Strong poignant piece, looking at the fork in the road and making choices.
Well done.
Well done.
