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Fucking is not beauty
I have to let off some steam;
Because of one writers dreams.
He has taken beauty and made it trash;
Like sticking fingers in their ass.
This is not beauty as most will see;
No love., or passion; just fuck me!
Sliding down a dick so wet;
Have I convinced you yet?
Feeling my balls smack off you clit;
Nothing more the degrading SHIT!
Beauty is not making a woman feel like trash;
making her just a piece of ass.
I know in "your" world you are your master;
Defeating the passion; " bitch go faster!"
Beauty is not rubbing nipples, and tits;
Bundling her up until she submits.
Beauty is something that you see with taste;
Not fucking her with a pillow in her face.
Beauty is not fucking by the word of choice;
Shutting the bitch up; giving her no voice.
Yes, you have that right to say as you can;
Soldiers like me fucking freed your land.
So with your narcissistic mind;
Open up a dictionary beauty you will find.
It might be wrote different than the way you speak;
But beauty is beauty not classified like a circus freak.
I'm not attacking you, nor calling you out;
I just wish you knew what the fuck your talking about.
Posting a pix of a woman of nude;
Saying what beauty was is awful crude.
Yes, a pix of a beautiful woman she is;
But to degrade her like she was in the porn biz.
I want to excuse my words that I write;
For mother fuckers like me gave that freedom of their right.
I'm no better than anybody else on the earth;
But beauty is nothing like fucking; when compared to a child's birth.
This is not an insult to you; whatever you are;
Now I'm just as bad as you for what I've said so far.
Fucking is not beauty by as far as I can see;
You know what? I guess that's only me!
To save you some time so their is no intermission
Here my friend is the beauties definition:
An assemblage or graces or properties pleasing to the eye, the ear, the intellect, the aesthetic faculty, or the moral sense.
A particular grace, feature, ornament, or excellence; anything beautiful; as, the beauties of nature.
A beautiful person, esp. a beautiful woman.
Prevailing style or taste; fashion.
I can't stand when people mix beauty with trash;
Have you ever seen a trash dump and said that's beauty
Because of one writers dreams.
He has taken beauty and made it trash;
Like sticking fingers in their ass.
This is not beauty as most will see;
No love., or passion; just fuck me!
Sliding down a dick so wet;
Have I convinced you yet?
Feeling my balls smack off you clit;
Nothing more the degrading SHIT!
Beauty is not making a woman feel like trash;
making her just a piece of ass.
I know in "your" world you are your master;
Defeating the passion; " bitch go faster!"
Beauty is not rubbing nipples, and tits;
Bundling her up until she submits.
Beauty is something that you see with taste;
Not fucking her with a pillow in her face.
Beauty is not fucking by the word of choice;
Shutting the bitch up; giving her no voice.
Yes, you have that right to say as you can;
Soldiers like me fucking freed your land.
So with your narcissistic mind;
Open up a dictionary beauty you will find.
It might be wrote different than the way you speak;
But beauty is beauty not classified like a circus freak.
I'm not attacking you, nor calling you out;
I just wish you knew what the fuck your talking about.
Posting a pix of a woman of nude;
Saying what beauty was is awful crude.
Yes, a pix of a beautiful woman she is;
But to degrade her like she was in the porn biz.
I want to excuse my words that I write;
For mother fuckers like me gave that freedom of their right.
I'm no better than anybody else on the earth;
But beauty is nothing like fucking; when compared to a child's birth.
This is not an insult to you; whatever you are;
Now I'm just as bad as you for what I've said so far.
Fucking is not beauty by as far as I can see;
You know what? I guess that's only me!
To save you some time so their is no intermission
Here my friend is the beauties definition:
An assemblage or graces or properties pleasing to the eye, the ear, the intellect, the aesthetic faculty, or the moral sense.
A particular grace, feature, ornament, or excellence; anything beautiful; as, the beauties of nature.
A beautiful person, esp. a beautiful woman.
Prevailing style or taste; fashion.
I can't stand when people mix beauty with trash;
Have you ever seen a trash dump and said that's beauty
Published 21st Feb 2012
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21st Feb 2012 00:35am
You are so elequent ive never even heard you
Say fu&$. Let alone that many times omg
Whomever your reeling in should go bury their head
Let you tell it very good write
Say fu&$. Let alone that many times omg
Whomever your reeling in should go bury their head
Let you tell it very good write
21st Feb 2012 00:47am
Thank you for the comment. He will never see this because he will not come to "our world"! He has his own world. He explains how his poem is in "A" reading list. Degrading a woman and labeling it as beauty. It would have made more sense by calling it " my bitch ". Which still is distasteful.
21st Feb 2012 00:54am
this rings true in so many ways, i love this so much, the energy coming off is amazing,your poem is real beuty :)
21st Feb 2012 1:50am
Thank you nanna it's a shame that women are treated like dirt. Thank you again for your comment
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 1:14am
I say thank you for this cause I got in a fight with someone here because tried his hardest to get me to use language in my sexy poems and I wouldn't. I told him that love and passion is a beautiful thing shared between lovers, so why shouldn't it be writen so. I wonder if we are talking about the same person. Mmmm! I love this write, good for you.
21st Feb 2012 1:53am
Gail thank you very much for understanding. I hated to write like this, but he burnt me up to no end. Thank you again for your comment; it means alot to me. Hugs.
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 1:16am
You have written what I have thought about
and I commend you for an excellent poem with a very important message....If you love someone...it is not called FUCKING...and the woman is not a BITCH....Writing EROTICA is a FINE line between being distasteful to some and a JOY TO READ for OTHERS.....but what you wrote - HAD TO BE WRITTEN AND BRING IT TO THE ATTENTION OF OTHERS
Kitty
and I commend you for an excellent poem with a very important message....If you love someone...it is not called FUCKING...and the woman is not a BITCH....Writing EROTICA is a FINE line between being distasteful to some and a JOY TO READ for OTHERS.....but what you wrote - HAD TO BE WRITTEN AND BRING IT TO THE ATTENTION OF OTHERS
Kitty
21st Feb 2012 2:03am
Ms. Kitty thank you very much. I know that the readers that will comment on this will be flowers. Except CAOS737 he views it the same way I do. Women are our equal. We stand beside each other. We will protect in anyway we can. I call that verbal abuse. I have poems that have little to no degrading words in it. Their a 3 ways to intercourse. 1. Fu_king 2. Sex 3. Making love. 2&3 are between a petal and the rose 1. Is the thorn because you can run you hand up the beauty; you bring it down you will get the thorns! Once again I'm glade you gals got the point and not upset for my vulgarity. Kudos to all of you, and to future comments.
21st Feb 2012 1:23am
You've spoken for so many people, an excellent poem in every which way!!!!!!!!!
21st Feb 2012 3:27am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Feb 2012 3:26am
21st Feb 2012 2:59am
but with that being said I am the first to admit that I do occasionally like a good F*** and I dont believe that is wrong if it is not disrespecting the other person and I may have written a few pieces that use some colorful words but never referring to the female as a Bitch and I do understand that not everyone is a fan of the dirtier erotics that I write but I do have some if not more of the sensual pieces as well ;) and as a fan of reading erotic and someone who enjoys writing them as said above by somelikeithot there is a fine line between hot and raunchy but being disrespectful is different and I agree is upsetting.
21st Feb 2012 3:29am
As you say " a good f--k" is it random? Or someone your close to? I understand that line. I push it too myself. However I will never degrade a woman as he did. It was truly his belief. Thank you for your feedback.
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 3:32am
lol...someone I care for of coarse :) never have been a random person
21st Feb 2012 7:02am
Then would you say it was just sex. Or just lost in translation? It seems like your a really great person. Even though they say believe none of what you hear and half of what you see. I believe until I have doubt. I don't doubt my friends. I view that we are friends?
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 7:22am
I don't doubt my friends either and yes we are :)
Hmmmmmm. Very interesting. When I was on my walk the other day I was ruminating on a similar topic.
Are you able to read my mind? I think you can :)
Anyway, here is my take on this topic.
It all has to do with an ingredient called love.
If it is pure there is not such thing as an obscene act between two people who love each other. Because when you truly love someone you also respect them and when you respect them you wouldn't do anything to hurt them or do anything that was against their will. So add the ingredient of love and any truly consensual act between two lovers becomes a sacred act of beauty rather than an act of vulgarity even if it might technically considered vulgar by some. I also believe that there is no fetish, no encounter, no technique that will be as hot as an encounter you'll have with someone you truly love. True love should be a fetish, cause in the end it will always be a thousand times hotter than anything else you'll ever experience. It's sacred. It's beautiful and it is by definition never vulgar or obscene regardless of what people do in the bedroom. When you take love out of fucking it doesn't necessarily turn it into something vulgar but it can easily become so. As far as language is concerned it depends entirely on the intent of the author. If the author's unconscious or conscious intent is to piss people off or make them uncomfortable it will come across as such, but if the intent conscious or unconscious is to spread love and lust then that will come through in the words as well. In the end whether words or acts it is the intent behind them matters, not whether or not they are "raunchy" or "dirty." Wow. This turned into a long post, but it's really just my two cents. Great write!! :)
Are you able to read my mind? I think you can :)
Anyway, here is my take on this topic.
It all has to do with an ingredient called love.
If it is pure there is not such thing as an obscene act between two people who love each other. Because when you truly love someone you also respect them and when you respect them you wouldn't do anything to hurt them or do anything that was against their will. So add the ingredient of love and any truly consensual act between two lovers becomes a sacred act of beauty rather than an act of vulgarity even if it might technically considered vulgar by some. I also believe that there is no fetish, no encounter, no technique that will be as hot as an encounter you'll have with someone you truly love. True love should be a fetish, cause in the end it will always be a thousand times hotter than anything else you'll ever experience. It's sacred. It's beautiful and it is by definition never vulgar or obscene regardless of what people do in the bedroom. When you take love out of fucking it doesn't necessarily turn it into something vulgar but it can easily become so. As far as language is concerned it depends entirely on the intent of the author. If the author's unconscious or conscious intent is to piss people off or make them uncomfortable it will come across as such, but if the intent conscious or unconscious is to spread love and lust then that will come through in the words as well. In the end whether words or acts it is the intent behind them matters, not whether or not they are "raunchy" or "dirty." Wow. This turned into a long post, but it's really just my two cents. Great write!! :)
21st Feb 2012 3:40am
Grrrrr! I hate when you get in my head. Grrrrrrr. You are 100% right. But that is between two adults that are adults. When you run with the wolf you are a wolf. His belief is that " ALL WOMEN" are bitches and bow down to him and his. You have read my work. I keep it as a beautiful experience. Not porn. They are one word actors. I do not want to call him out, but I know your taste as well, as I know mine. You would agree if you read this poem and the picture it went with it. Not to mention did not label it extreme content. DUP flagged it. Plus he as pm'd me forcing his views on me and rewrote my poems to how I should've wrote it. This did not end well. Thank you for you comment.
21st Feb 2012 3:23am
21st Feb 2012 3:42am
Thank you for the compliment and the comment. I have learned alot from women. All you have to do is listen.
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 8:18am
"I know in "your" world you are your master;
Defeating the passion; " bitch go faster!"
Beauty is not rubbing nipples, and tits;
Bundling her up until she submits."
.... But on the flipside, who says love has to be soft and gentle?
Now I took a minute to read the poems of the poet in question, and while I agree they are not much cop and quite opinionated, I can't hold the moral high ground when I KNOW there are women, especially in my 'community' that want to be treated this way.
It's a fine line I guess, but kindest regards to you for eloquently making your point.
Defeating the passion; " bitch go faster!"
Beauty is not rubbing nipples, and tits;
Bundling her up until she submits."
.... But on the flipside, who says love has to be soft and gentle?
Now I took a minute to read the poems of the poet in question, and while I agree they are not much cop and quite opinionated, I can't hold the moral high ground when I KNOW there are women, especially in my 'community' that want to be treated this way.
It's a fine line I guess, but kindest regards to you for eloquently making your point.
Nail on the head. Force one option and make it a fact is like being breast feed at the age of 40. It makes no sense. Yes, peoole are out there that feel that they need to be striped of : humanity, values, morals, and things that are out of the norm. This might be the norm for some people. How do you mingles with people that dont respect themselves? " Walk by and say fuck you slut!" No rhym or reason to destruct ones character unless it is what they want. That is to believe in nihilism. The meaning that the human has no value. Thank you for the input.
On the flip flop... "Love"(key word) may take many forms. To view women as nothing more than a whore or a bitch; is to judge. They wanna play GOD I guess that is fine in that state mind. A opinion was forced on my values. Values being the key word.
As art comes in many forms...Picasso as an example. Deplicted and deranged, but art. On a strange note; deception is the art of war.
On the flip flop... "Love"(key word) may take many forms. To view women as nothing more than a whore or a bitch; is to judge. They wanna play GOD I guess that is fine in that state mind. A opinion was forced on my values. Values being the key word.
As art comes in many forms...Picasso as an example. Deplicted and deranged, but art. On a strange note; deception is the art of war.
Wonderful write, bro. I've been writing for a while but I've never really read other people's work. Especially not as much as I have been lately. I really dig seeing the different styles and mechanics people use when constructing things and yours is one of my favorites so far. Also much respect on the soldier level. I was with 75th Ranger Reg for quite a few years with 4 deployments under me. I'd give my life for every single one of you fuckers..lol Y'all are all family to me and I'm always very happy to meet a member of that family that I haven't yet.
21st Feb 2012 6:48pm
You know what? I guess that's only me! No my dearest darling you are not the only one who feels the way you do as is evident by the amount of comments this piece got. I don't have too much time but this piece deserves to be commented ASAP!
Too long this has been a sore subject with me. It is by all definition porno even if you write about it; it is lewd,crude,rude, LAZY and above all degrading and exploitative to women.Bravo my friend Bravo!!!!
Too long this has been a sore subject with me. It is by all definition porno even if you write about it; it is lewd,crude,rude, LAZY and above all degrading and exploitative to women.Bravo my friend Bravo!!!!
21st Feb 2012 11:39pm
Sonya my dearest I knew this would be a grabber to you. I just waited for you to post. I'm glad that the pluses out weigh the negatives. I want to be treated as a human not something at someone beckon call. Yes, I have wrote " a masochists prayer" it was a tit for tat with Vixen. Why take away when you can add a value. I am almost at a loss with this battle for it will only be a circle. Thank you for you comment an the agreement.
22nd Feb 2012 1:13am
A man was walking on the beach and noticed a woman with no legs and no arms. She was crying. He asked what is wrong? She replied I am 35 years old and I have never been kissed by a man. So he stooped down and kissed her. He goes to walk away. She continues to cry. He asked what's wrong now. She replied I have never been hugged by a man. So he does so. Started back to walk away; she is still crying. Now he is getting upset. What is wrong with you now he asked. She replied I have never been fucked by a man before. So he picks her up and throws her in the water, and says "now you're Fucked!"
22nd Feb 2012 1:47pm
I know it's wrong on so many levels, but that's what I think of the word f__ked when used.
Laugh at me, that's not funny;( Lmao. Hugs
Laugh at me, that's not funny;( Lmao. Hugs
24th Feb 2012 1:36pm
i read this poem a few times over, and i love it more each time i read it..... very catching!
24th Feb 2012 4:51pm
Thank you very much. I had to read it a couple times too. I never read my poems for I am the writer. Things need changed here and there, but I felt this at that moment so it will stay. Once again that you for you compliment and comment.
25th Feb 2012 4:39pm
I think that each individual has their own "reality" and nothing beyond it. The "reality" of others is only perceived inside of your own "reality."
I like that you use this poem to escape from the frustration of your ego-centrism. We are all born with it, judging others by our standards, maybe because of the lack of unity of the world, but there and back, it doesn't matter why. This is the way we are, and some of us lack the understanding of openness and how our actions affect the entire universe, and ultimately everything on this earth.
Ah, but I say this with every bit of honest hypocrisy that I can. I believe in the paragraph above so strongly, that I try to never blame anyone. But I know I do, I must abide by the passive code of humans, to gain trust and ultimately to survive.
I think the only right thing for us to do as a species is to survive, no matter how many good people die. A condescension upon women is but a mechanism to protect this man from his feelings, and to attain a level so superior that he lacks any humility, which I think most people would strongly agree with and is what he needs. But he is just surviving, minimizing a clear disdain for women and sticking with his roots (how he was raised), so I don't blame him. He will maybe see one day. But for me, it doesn't matter, because he is not affecting my pursuit of survival, only my passion for it.
Great read, thanks! Read my verse if you'd like! I just registered on this website, and I feel that I have a knack for instilling emotion in my poetry, so tell me what you think!
- Ryan
I like that you use this poem to escape from the frustration of your ego-centrism. We are all born with it, judging others by our standards, maybe because of the lack of unity of the world, but there and back, it doesn't matter why. This is the way we are, and some of us lack the understanding of openness and how our actions affect the entire universe, and ultimately everything on this earth.
Ah, but I say this with every bit of honest hypocrisy that I can. I believe in the paragraph above so strongly, that I try to never blame anyone. But I know I do, I must abide by the passive code of humans, to gain trust and ultimately to survive.
I think the only right thing for us to do as a species is to survive, no matter how many good people die. A condescension upon women is but a mechanism to protect this man from his feelings, and to attain a level so superior that he lacks any humility, which I think most people would strongly agree with and is what he needs. But he is just surviving, minimizing a clear disdain for women and sticking with his roots (how he was raised), so I don't blame him. He will maybe see one day. But for me, it doesn't matter, because he is not affecting my pursuit of survival, only my passion for it.
Great read, thanks! Read my verse if you'd like! I just registered on this website, and I feel that I have a knack for instilling emotion in my poetry, so tell me what you think!
- Ryan
25th Feb 2012 6:20pm
Any belief that we as humans are only known what we have been shown. We change as society its self changes. We can't fight change. Therefore everything that we know as truth can be treestec in the art of philosophy. I have read bibles and many cultures in countries for the grasp of understanding. To have an ego and to preach of it to spread their point is almost an act of domination. Christianity has been known to be spread thru anger, rage, and death of people to spread Christianity. In all contradicts of one who has faith of birth of sin or born with the struggle with pain. I have not judged nor will I ever. I have only stated my point of view in which I have some followers. "Defratimation of character " is to tell a lie and spread it enough to prove it to be true. No matter what religion or beliefs that we may have. We has humans have three choices. Accept; reject, or leave that situation. I had a topic not to convince any body to follow me. People have a choice. Not so much to obtaine their chair next to God, but has more of a conformance of society or inter societies.
I may see your point in someways but to be hypocritical is to say," if we do not believe in sin, we are never to be forgiven".
We as Americans have that right to choose, we have the greatest freedom one can ask for," freedom of choice!". If you do not agree as per my poem; that is choice. We may all have this right to choose what we may to do behind closed doors. To "force an opinion", and make believe that it is a fact; is to say an orange is orange because of its color. No! One day someone called it that. Do we were raised to know its an orange. Everything can be true in philosophy, in the world of what if's. We all have our own beliefs. As I said in the first verse "I have to let off some steam!". My question to you is what was you own view of my write. Believe or not to believe not what you grew up knowing.
Thank you for your time.
Dave
I may see your point in someways but to be hypocritical is to say," if we do not believe in sin, we are never to be forgiven".
We as Americans have that right to choose, we have the greatest freedom one can ask for," freedom of choice!". If you do not agree as per my poem; that is choice. We may all have this right to choose what we may to do behind closed doors. To "force an opinion", and make believe that it is a fact; is to say an orange is orange because of its color. No! One day someone called it that. Do we were raised to know its an orange. Everything can be true in philosophy, in the world of what if's. We all have our own beliefs. As I said in the first verse "I have to let off some steam!". My question to you is what was you own view of my write. Believe or not to believe not what you grew up knowing.
Thank you for your time.
Dave
