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Longist Hour
the river splashes against the rocks
sogging up my clean white socks.
the sky turns gray and the rain began to fall,
midnight lust in peacefully call.
close my eyes in heavenly wing,
fingers dance and voices sing.
the birds fly,fly so far away,
wish there was a reason for me to stay.
the trees dance in the hard blowing wind,
mindless night of close eye end.
black rose red and night unfold,
longest hour priced and gold.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
sogging up my clean white socks.
the sky turns gray and the rain began to fall,
midnight lust in peacefully call.
close my eyes in heavenly wing,
fingers dance and voices sing.
the birds fly,fly so far away,
wish there was a reason for me to stay.
the trees dance in the hard blowing wind,
mindless night of close eye end.
black rose red and night unfold,
longest hour priced and gold.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
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of course.. this is amazing
19th Feb 2012 8:50pm
re: of course.. this is amazing
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19th Feb 2012 9:21pm
Nice
19th Feb 2012 10:17pm
WOW
23rd Feb 2012 4:23pm
re: WOW
25th Feb 2012 8:22am
re: great
28th Feb 2012 4:26am
Re: Longist Hour
9th Jul 2012 7:19am
You are too modest, my friend! I love this poem a great deal, and I would say this is very much one of your best works. It has such a sense of peace to it, and of the fleeting nature of time. There is a very strong sense of the classical to it, too. You are a true artist for penning something this beautiful! I can feel the heart and emotion in every word of it. :)
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21st Jul 2012 3:00am
Re: Longist Hour
21st Jul 2012 1:45am
This is what its all about ROA,
the grays, the cold, the discomfort, we dont truly
want to leave them behind because its part of
true living experience. Its all a sign that the
flipside exists and is worth waiting for....but I
always feel that there is great beauty in the
cold and gray. Congrats on another riveting read.
alon
the grays, the cold, the discomfort, we dont truly
want to leave them behind because its part of
true living experience. Its all a sign that the
flipside exists and is worth waiting for....but I
always feel that there is great beauty in the
cold and gray. Congrats on another riveting read.
alon
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