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in the heart of me is sand
now I lay me down to sleep
will you wake me from this dream family?
into the outdoor without a care
my heart is breaking
I am found unworthy again
I am Lucifer
will I ever love enough to be whole?
my need is great
I broke up my body
will you yet eat??
sadness abounds
the krypt keeper has one my heart
then broken it again
heaven hath no pain like a woman scorned
hell receive your maker
in the tomb of the insane
their is pain enough to keep me whole
Published 22nd May 2021
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22nd May 2021 12:10pm
Dear B,
You are never unworthy and you are NOT Lucifer. You are warm and loving. H🌷
You are never unworthy and you are NOT Lucifer. You are warm and loving. H🌷
22nd May 2021 12:13pm
thank you beautiful Honoria no you're right he is my son it's just I feel so broken and pulled under by him it's hard to tell you know family?
22nd May 2021 12:18pm
I sure do understand family and I’m sorry about this. I’ll keep you both in mind hoping for peace for you both. But family, oy! I’m thinking if you. Xx
22nd May 2021 12:21pm
22nd May 2021 3:21pm
It looks like you are centering somewhat Brenda
I hope so
You presence is missed here
Real Brenda
Not doped Brenda
Fight the battle
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I hope so
You presence is missed here
Real Brenda
Not doped Brenda
Fight the battle
Like
22nd May 2021 4:13pm
You surely aren't Lucifer and you are not unforgiven. The mere fact that you care about your family negates any hellish residence.
The paragraph, "my need is great I broke up my body will you yet eat??" Is this a reference to communion, a remembrance of who you are or hope for salvation?
The paragraph, "my need is great I broke up my body will you yet eat??" Is this a reference to communion, a remembrance of who you are or hope for salvation?
10th Jul 2021 00:23am
10th Jul 2021 00:55am
good evening dearest Wally thank you for the love on this write I deeply appreciate your continued support in spite of the roller coaster of thought I've been producing❤
