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I adore this ... truly ... great introspection ... conversational ... not preachy ... revealing ... reminding ... strong ... but also vulnerable ... giving it an urgency ... a power all its own ... great flow ... love the mixture of punctuation ... which is saying something ... because I rarely use/like punctuation ... but in this it fits ... does not upstage the words ... the lines ... I think is truly one of your best writes ...

Definitely deer in the headlights. :) I really appreciate your thoughtful and detailed feedback so much. For you to think it's one of the best really means a ton! I respect your incredible writing and opinion so much. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment LDF!

Let it all out.  Keep on writing.

I have a lot to let out. Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement Francisco. You're great. :)

Sincere introspection
Hits hard and reveals mightily
Echo LDF

BIG LIKE

Been very introspective lately which is always dangerous. Yesterday was a pretty low point for me. I do appreciate hits hard and reveals mightily; that sounds like my thoughts. ;) Thank you so much for the comment, feedback, and the BIG LIKE.

Great write sweetie, deep and thought provoking
Love and light
Ron x

Thank you so much for the comment Ron, I am glad you found it deep and thought provoking. More love and light back at you. :)

Dear, Kristina
Sometimes silence screams. And those silent moments can be read just ads clearly as words. You illustrate that well in this piece. This passage touched me most,
"When something suddenly went off a page..."
there's a beautiful song by Alison Krauss, "When You Say Nothing At All," that paints a wonderful picture of this,
https://youtu.be/1SCOimBo5tg
Bravissima, dear friend 🌹🙏

It's always great to get your thoughtful feedback GW. I can certainly understand how silence screams, and our thoughts can torment. Another reason why we must write things out sometimes. Thank you for sharing the song, I had never heard that one.

Beautifully written

Hey Absence! Thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you liked it. :)

Very good poem, KristinaX.
Insight searcher, insight finder...
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Hey Marks! Thank you so much for the comment. I had hoped it would be thought provoking so I was really happy to get your feedback! :) 💖

You're welcome, KristinaX.
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Self reflective pieces always offer that bit of enlightenment. In essence, we reveal something about ourselves that identifies with readers in one way or another. Your spill here captures that, especially that fourth stanza, it's amazing.

Beautiful Kristina.

I like self reflective pieces also. What do you think I revealed with this one? :) I am really happy you liked it. The fourth stanza is very meaningful to me. Thank you so much for the comment. 💖