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I should have, but...
I
never
did
tell
you
That it was those
very first moments,
as my internal
self protect instructor
screamed out in bloody
There—
teetering on the edge
of our exquisite annihilation
in just fractions
of those hushed moments
I was already yours.
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Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 9:01pm
Re: Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 9:09pm
Wow.
That's an awesome compliment.
Ty for reading and stopping by, Robert.
🌹
-B
That's an awesome compliment.
Ty for reading and stopping by, Robert.
🌹
-B
Re. I should have, but...
Oh B ... the blunt honesty ... the regret ... I need this phrase ... in Latin ... on my family coat of arms ... nice crisp poem ... love the opening with the one word lines ... building momentum ...
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 9:56pm
(blushes)
Your day making comments are the best way to wind down my work day! Thank you, so much for sharing your thoughts, LilD. I am all wide smiles. I appreciate the list add as well 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
Your day making comments are the best way to wind down my work day! Thank you, so much for sharing your thoughts, LilD. I am all wide smiles. I appreciate the list add as well 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 9:11pm
Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 4:06am
Awww.. (hugs)
lucid dreams are something!
Thanks for reading, Tallen
I hope you're doing well and I really enjoyed seeing you today, my lovely friend 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
lucid dreams are something!
Thanks for reading, Tallen
I hope you're doing well and I really enjoyed seeing you today, my lovely friend 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 9:20pm
that sweet annihilation
between two fiery souls
knowing there is no way back
from passion
between two fiery souls
knowing there is no way back
from passion
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
Yeowza, Colin!!
That's a sizzler of a comment.... Damn.
🔥 🔥 🔥
I love it!!
Methinks that goes into a comment hall of fame!! 🏆.... Lmfao.... 😂 😂
(Oh you and your trophies!!)
🤭😁😅😉😂🤣
Seriously though, just gorgeous sentiments, you know that adore your visits so much. Thank you for the very generous list add and taking the time you do.... I am more than grateful...
It's smile inducing!!!
☺ ☺ ☺
🌹-💙
xo
S
That's a sizzler of a comment.... Damn.
🔥 🔥 🔥
I love it!!
Methinks that goes into a comment hall of fame!! 🏆.... Lmfao.... 😂 😂
(Oh you and your trophies!!)
🤭😁😅😉😂🤣
Seriously though, just gorgeous sentiments, you know that adore your visits so much. Thank you for the very generous list add and taking the time you do.... I am more than grateful...
It's smile inducing!!!
☺ ☺ ☺
🌹-💙
xo
S
Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 10:07pm
Re: Re. I should have, but...
12th May 2021 10:11pm
Ohh I like that, Numer.
I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts
🌹-💙
xo
B
I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts
🌹-💙
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
12th May 2021 10:40pm
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 1:59am
Re. I should have, but...
Anonymous
- Edited 12th May 2021 11:13pm
12th May 2021 11:12pm
This is dripping with regret. A short but sweet (like you?😉) little spill. “Shields up!!! Red alert!!! All hands brace for impact!!!”. Been there, done that. 😕😏
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 1:58am
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts and comments. It's much appreciated, PQ. I am saddened I hear of your regret, I guess we've all been there. I appreciate your list add and the time you've spent.
Best,
🌹
-Blue
Best,
🌹
-Blue
Re: Re. I should have, but...
Anonymous
13th May 2021 2:49am
I have no regret…but your poem does. A little? When your self defence mechanisms kick in and you miss an opportunity. Maybe I misunderstood…
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 2:59am
It was just me, I got it wrong .... My bad.
Apologies.
I read what you wrote incorrectly... sorry about that.... I thought 'been there done that' meant you had been there as well.... whoops....
Making assumptions... is never smart. I know better!!
Appreciate your understanding
-B
Apologies.
I read what you wrote incorrectly... sorry about that.... I thought 'been there done that' meant you had been there as well.... whoops....
Making assumptions... is never smart. I know better!!
Appreciate your understanding
-B
Re: Re. I should have, but...
Anonymous
13th May 2021 3:02am
That’s what I get for quoting Star Trek. 😂
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
I love Star Trek!
I am huge spock fan..... another reason why I assumed, maybe .... lol... 🖖🏻
I am huge spock fan..... another reason why I assumed, maybe .... lol... 🖖🏻
Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 3:26am
I love this piece, dear Lady Blue 🌹💞 This passage makes me head-ta-toe tingle,
"teetering on the edge
of our exquisite annihilation"
Bravissima, Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
"teetering on the edge
of our exquisite annihilation"
Bravissima, Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 4:11am
It's about the tingles, indeed... Lovely seeing you, BB!! I hope your day went well and I'm so very happy that you've taken the time to visit and leave me smiling with your inspirational insights.
🌹
It's much appreciated
-💙
Blue
🌹
It's much appreciated
-💙
Blue
Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 4:04am
I'm glad he gave you orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong sexy woman.
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 4:08am
It remains to be seen..... fingers crossed 🤞🏻.... heh.
Oh you're naughty, Francisco!!! hahaha....
Ty for your commitment to visiting!
🌹
Oh you're naughty, Francisco!!! hahaha....
Ty for your commitment to visiting!
🌹
Re: Re. I should have, but...
You make me feel naughty. Be the strong beautiful sexual woman you are meant to be.
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 4:59am
😂 hahaha.... You're too much!! lol...
I certainly will try, thx Francisco
🌹
I certainly will try, thx Francisco
🌹
Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 3:17pm
Brief but powerful words. Now the truth is known. Hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
13th May 2021 10:27pm
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
13th May 2021 10:35pm
hahaha 😂 😂 😂 😂
Nice one, Tim.
Thanks for stopping by and the giggle 🤭
🌹
Nice seeing you 🦋
-B
x
Nice one, Tim.
Thanks for stopping by and the giggle 🤭
🌹
Nice seeing you 🦋
-B
x
Re: Re. I should have, but...
14th May 2021 1:57am
Re. I should have, but...
14th May 2021 7:17am
It's never to late to tell someone how you feel. It may not get the desired outcome but it might you just never know beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
14th May 2021 10:34pm
I definitely agree there's always time to speak truths.... it's the reply that might be a gut punch, indeed. But sometimes you never know it might turn out the other way too.... I love your thoughtful, Ron. My heart and soul are better enriched by having you in my corner. I am so grateful for that.
Thank you for everything, dearest poet
Much love and respect,
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
B
Thank you for everything, dearest poet
Much love and respect,
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
B
Re. I should have, but...
14th May 2021 7:47am
An erotic love poem that roars with passion. Your poeticizing took me into the heart of ecstasy where forces collide in a fusion melt. And that ending was supreme. Love in the highest order expressed through eroticism. I love how romantic bonding can be expressed ins o many ways and how your poem celebrated the way of climactic divinity.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
14th May 2021 10:38pm
Jeez John.... How do I top 'climatic divinity?' Truly inspirational, by the way.... just holy smokes!!!
You are positively radiant in your thoughtful comments. I just really thank you for being who you are and showing me such support and realness.
I'm honoured
Much respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
You are positively radiant in your thoughtful comments. I just really thank you for being who you are and showing me such support and realness.
I'm honoured
Much respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. I should have, but...
17th May 2021 6:12am
Dear BV,
How many times a day do I do this? Let me count the ways...guy in the post office, guy walking into the liquor store, produce manager at the market, neighbor down the street. Yup. They all could have had me because I had them...😉
Fab write! H🌷
How many times a day do I do this? Let me count the ways...guy in the post office, guy walking into the liquor store, produce manager at the market, neighbor down the street. Yup. They all could have had me because I had them...😉
Fab write! H🌷
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Re. I should have, but...
6th Jul 2021 1:38am
"teetering on the edge" really says the anticipation whether to fall and dive into it or wait restlessly. But those "hushed moments" are so exquisite.
Outstanding spill.
Outstanding spill.
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Re: Re. I should have, but...
6th Jul 2021 5:43am
Thanks for the visit and the generous comments, Walter. I truly appreciate you and the thoughtfulness, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B