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Coddle me at your Breast
Humbled deep down
Honored by worship offering
A Viper though
Can't help but to bite
Symbolism has no path here
A lonely rider
Out on the wing of solitude
Gentle breezes
Keep me at bay
I will gaze at you hungrily
Just feed me at your breast
Coddle me to sleep
Honored by worship offering
A Viper though
Can't help but to bite
Symbolism has no path here
A lonely rider
Out on the wing of solitude
Gentle breezes
Keep me at bay
I will gaze at you hungrily
Just feed me at your breast
Coddle me to sleep
Published 12th May 2021
| Edited 18th May 2024
Author's Note
Trying a different style.....
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12th May 2021 1:24am
Totally got this saloon feels, little mining town. Where the harlots are kind and hangout windows showing just enough jiggly bosom!
12th May 2021 1:34am
It's a different approach
Even vipers get tired
Try to find a place in their hearts to redeem
But you always have to be careful with them
Especially when they are unsure of their mission
Hearts vs instinct can be treacherous
12th May 2021 1:43am
12th May 2021 2:08am
Anonymous
12th May 2021 5:24am
I do declare, there were times when I was so lonely I took some comfort there.
Good write 🌟
Good write 🌟
12th May 2021 5:28am
12th May 2021 9:35am
I look forward to interacting with some of your previous stylistic approaches. This one worked well I thought... Interacted real cool with the mind.
Thank you Cipher
Mixing it up a bit and trying a new approach
Appreciate the read
Mixing it up a bit and trying a new approach
Appreciate the read
12th May 2021 11:16am
dearest Poet this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read by you
I want to weep from its beauty but I'm too tender still I finally quit the dope
you would be proud of your girl...
I want to weep from its beauty but I'm too tender still I finally quit the dope
you would be proud of your girl...
15th May 2021 12:51pm
Hello Benda
I'm glad to hear that you quit using
Everyone who knows you wants to see you off that evil dope, especially me ...
Thanks on the poem ...
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I'm glad to hear that you quit using
Everyone who knows you wants to see you off that evil dope, especially me ...
Thanks on the poem ...
X
5th Jul 2021 00:03am
5th Jul 2021 1:24am
