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We are Earth
all of us
our unique fingerprint
carved into the present
moment of memory
We are earth
from root to crown
our individual history
recorded in each line
Sacred geometry manifests
patterns of existence
into the living
until fossilized
underground
We are Earth
experiencing form
all of us
~
our unique fingerprint
carved into the present
moment of memory
We are earth
from root to crown
our individual history
recorded in each line
Sacred geometry manifests
patterns of existence
into the living
until fossilized
underground
We are Earth
experiencing form
all of us
~
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Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 4:20pm
Great Message!
I am incredibly fascinated by the fractal nature of our world. I think you captured that phenomenon very adeptly.
I am incredibly fascinated by the fractal nature of our world. I think you captured that phenomenon very adeptly.
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:45pm
Thank you, Cipher_O, and welcome to the Deep side. I look forward to reading your offerings.
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 4:36pm
This is such a beautiful reminder, Ahavati. I particularly loved this stanza:
“Sacred geometry manifests
patterns of existence
into the living
until fossilized
underground”
This was such an inspiring read first thing today. Thank you for sharing it 💜
“Sacred geometry manifests
patterns of existence
into the living
until fossilized
underground”
This was such an inspiring read first thing today. Thank you for sharing it 💜
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:45pm
Re. We are Earth
Dear A,
Wild picture! I didn’t pay attention to the title until my second read through. Then saw the picture for what it was. Totally love it. Getting so bogged down in the minutiae of daily activities and then this virus it’s so easy to forget, hard though we try, to separate ourselves into clumps of genetic gene pools- we are all manifested from earth. Great write. Great reminder. X H🌷
Wild picture! I didn’t pay attention to the title until my second read through. Then saw the picture for what it was. Totally love it. Getting so bogged down in the minutiae of daily activities and then this virus it’s so easy to forget, hard though we try, to separate ourselves into clumps of genetic gene pools- we are all manifested from earth. Great write. Great reminder. X H🌷
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:46pm
Thank you, Honoria. It is the perfect visual reminder of how connected we are. Sacred geometry is magnificent.
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 4:56pm
yes, Yes, YES, .. a beautiful image and message! Absolutely love your pen!
Hugs and love xx
JeJe
Hugs and love xx
JeJe
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:47pm
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 5:51pm
We are all unique and a enigma that we try to solve by getting to know each other. Keep on writing.
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Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 6:37pm
Beautiful! Makes me feel lighter in my chest today. Poetry is the most healing of arts I can think of. 🤍💜🤍
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:48pm
Thank you, Margo. I am happy it made you feel lighter. It is comforting to know how connected we are.
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11th May 2021 12:03pm
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 7:21pm
Another fascinating poem. Lots to think about again: brain, mind, consciousness, time as a subjective or objective experience, etc, etc.
Great!
Great!
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:48pm
We are Earth
I once sang in the chorus line of "He Who Says Yes," a contemporary opera by Kurt Weill (1900–1950). One chorus was "My mother is the earth."
I think you have expertly captured the essence of this wonderful thought both in representational and literary terms.
Did not the Father mold Adam from the earth? And when the body dies, does it not return to dust? One thing is certain: in the same way that life and creation did not begin in themselves, so do they not end when flesh becomes dust again, as if no Superior Power had moved them into being.
Sincerely
cab
I think you have expertly captured the essence of this wonderful thought both in representational and literary terms.
Did not the Father mold Adam from the earth? And when the body dies, does it not return to dust? One thing is certain: in the same way that life and creation did not begin in themselves, so do they not end when flesh becomes dust again, as if no Superior Power had moved them into being.
Sincerely
cab
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Re: We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:49pm
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 7:34pm
I was just underground on the subway
Humanity a different twist of fate down there
Dig the image, my day job is in the lumber industry
We are all related to the wood
BIG LIKE
Humanity a different twist of fate down there
Dig the image, my day job is in the lumber industry
We are all related to the wood
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:51pm
I kinda miss the subway, but not the city so much. It's been over a decade and I wonder if it's changed any at all. I had no idea you were in the lumber industry!
Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:54pm
Cities are always in flux
NYC Is crazier than ever in some regards, other ways same, energy, vibe and noise
NYC Is crazier than ever in some regards, other ways same, energy, vibe and noise
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:56pm
Re. We are Earth
Anonymous
6th May 2021 9:13pm
This has me wondering if a fingerprint is part of a larger pattern appearing on the human body or if the pattern on the fingertip is repeated elsewhere on a body ( like a wallpaper pattern ). And then of course, same for a tree.
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:52pm
That is a very interesting pondering. . .Sacred geometry can be right under our noses and we might not even notice it.
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 9:43pm
Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:52pm
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 10:56pm
Re. We are Earth
6th May 2021 11:31pm
Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:53pm
Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 8:26am
N that we are indeed! You pen it so succinctly
n with such grace, it’s hard not to love this... 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
n with such grace, it’s hard not to love this... 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:53pm
Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 1:42pm
True words. From dust we came, to dust we go. In saying that, it dawns on me that the body came from and goes to dust. Our spirit is something altogether different. It flies on, and that is hope. To me anyway. Lovely piece, A.
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Re: Re. We are Earth
7th May 2021 2:54pm
Re. We are Earth
8th May 2021 7:05am
What a cool comparison this is with tree rings, I never thought of that before that it is like a fingerprint, You have such a way with visual presentation of a concept, I like this alot :)
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Re: Re. We are Earth
8th May 2021 1:11pm
Thank you, PR. That means a lot. The visual actually inspired me to write this.
Re. We are Earth
Anonymous
8th May 2021 4:43pm
Just love love that image.
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Re: Re. We are Earth
8th May 2021 10:08pm
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Re: Re. We are Earth
14th May 2021 1:18pm
Indeed, RiAN! We have so much in common with Nature; we ARE Nature, though many believe we are separate from it. Thank you for a wonderful observation. Much appreciated. xo
Re. We are Earth
14th May 2021 8:46am
I love your image. It brings a sadness as you compare the two and one is destroying the other.
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Re: Re. We are Earth
14th May 2021 1:19pm
That is such an astute observation, Lj. Seeing that image really puts into perspective how we are destroying ourselves; and, yes, it is very sad.
Thank you for noting that. xo
Thank you for noting that. xo
Re. We are Earth
28th May 2021 2:26am
Those last three lines are magical. “Earth experiencing form.” I love that. It makes me think of how the human condition has been described as the universe experiencing consciousness. The whole poem is great. Some of your work feels more akin to prayer than poetry, a meditation on the connectivity of nature.
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28th May 2021 3:24pm
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