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Not wary
Teacher by day
Slutty by
Week-end nights
She was looking
For love
In bars, away from
Her daily worries
And not so wary
Not looking in museums
Or librairies
No, she would be bold
With cleavage and rouge
While she looked for
Comfort through
Her glass of
Southern Comfort
Slutty by
Week-end nights
She was looking
For love
In bars, away from
Her daily worries
And not so wary
Not looking in museums
Or librairies
No, she would be bold
With cleavage and rouge
While she looked for
Comfort through
Her glass of
Southern Comfort
Published 4th May 2021
Author's Note
I don't know: positive or negative. Does not really matter WHERE you meet the right person for you. Of course in my view a bar is not the best place....
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4th May 2021 2:22am
4th May 2021 2:27am
4th May 2021 6:39am
Dear R,
It’s so difficult to know anymore. You’ve portrayed those feelings of desperation with such energy you can feel her anxious anticipation.
Well done. H🌷
It’s so difficult to know anymore. You’ve portrayed those feelings of desperation with such energy you can feel her anxious anticipation.
Well done. H🌷
4th May 2021 12:30pm
Yes, and life can be so complicated sometimes. Thanks fro your comments. Regards, Robert.
4th May 2021 10:12pm
Agree, a bar is down the list of meeting places; rare exceptions. Hugs and peace. Oral
4th May 2021 10:24pm
4th May 2021 10:27pm
3rd Jul 2021 6:46pm
Many many moons ago, I was once in a bar and observed something similar, as she was loving the attention from the two "gentlemen" who were "courting" her. It was obvious she was drunk. I didn't stay long but I never forgot that mental picture, whether she was looking for love or a hook up(s).
Nice write.
Nice write.
3rd Jul 2021 7:01pm
Good. But sad news when you are looking for love...or even just companionship while drunk. Kisses, Robert.
