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upon the wings of fortuitousness.
destined
are their two souls
found betwixt light and dark
so tender is this certainty
of fate
binded by vows of inked raw truths
sharing deep confessions
that grow these hearts
to one
Author's Note
for Ljdynamic's 42 syllables! comp
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11901/
İBlu2021
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11901/
İBlu2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
3rd May 2021 11:34pm
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 00:15am
Thank you Wilber I appreciate you and the list add too .... I'm so grateful for the well wishes ✨
It's always so nice to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
B
It's always so nice to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
B
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
4th May 2021 00:21am
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 00:41am
Your words are wise, Tim.
I concur.
It's time for a little bit of wonder, too... lol
Thanks for reading and your comments. I appreciate you, the list add and the time you take to leave your thoughts with me.
I always like seeing you, my friend 🦋
🌹
xo
-B
I concur.
It's time for a little bit of wonder, too... lol
Thanks for reading and your comments. I appreciate you, the list add and the time you take to leave your thoughts with me.
I always like seeing you, my friend 🦋
🌹
xo
-B
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
Anonymous
4th May 2021 00:23am
Nice! Good lick in the contest. :) Is it supposed to be bound, binded or blinded? Just curious. :)
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 1:37am
Hee hee hee.... it's binded... cuz of the syllable count... lol.... Good lick?!? 🤷🏻♀️ ... heh... I'll try... 😋
Ty so much for reading, the list add and your thoughtful comments, too
I enjoyed the giggle 🤭
🌹
B
Ty so much for reading, the list add and your thoughtful comments, too
I enjoyed the giggle 🤭
🌹
B
Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
Anonymous
4th May 2021 1:50am
Ffs....😂 Luck dammit! lol Typing in my work truck on my laptop with the sun shining in the screen lol. Yeah, I figured as much after I noticed it was a cinquain. You are welcome. 🙂
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 2:00am
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 00:39am
Dear, Lady Blue,
Another truly romantic piece. This passage speaks an important truth. I believe that a relationship "binded by vows of inked raw truths" has a better chance for success. Now surprises and the skeltons are named and exposed. Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹🐻💞🐰
Another truly romantic piece. This passage speaks an important truth. I believe that a relationship "binded by vows of inked raw truths" has a better chance for success. Now surprises and the skeltons are named and exposed. Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
Thank you, BB 🐻 👍🏻
I appreciate that insight. I do believe the same... That it's the ability to understand the truths in one another, to see them... and be accepting of them, that's the key. That's where I think the hiccups occur... having blinders when a connection is initially strong. Taking one's time, is kinda imperative, imo... I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness and insight.
I love your visits (missed them!), I am grateful for you, and all your loveliness, BB
🐻🌹✨🐇
xo
B
I appreciate that insight. I do believe the same... That it's the ability to understand the truths in one another, to see them... and be accepting of them, that's the key. That's where I think the hiccups occur... having blinders when a connection is initially strong. Taking one's time, is kinda imperative, imo... I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness and insight.
I love your visits (missed them!), I am grateful for you, and all your loveliness, BB
🐻🌹✨🐇
xo
B
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 1:07am
Lovely piece beautiful, you are such a beautiful poetess, the choice of pic was awesome just all around beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 1:46am
You made me feel like I am on a good path forward, my lovely friend 🙏🏻 I thank you for reading, your generous list add and those kind words. I really cherish you taking the time
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹
xo
B
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹
xo
B
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 2:41am
Excellent concrete poetry ... love the image ... nice crisp write ... my catnip as you know ... "betwixt" ... love this word ... "binded by vows of inked raw truths" ... this has such a flow to it ... how it comes off of the tongue ... especially when whispered ... the closing two words ... echo ... beautiful write dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 5:34am
Well, LilD... You constantly make my night, that's for sure! Ahhh 'betwixt'... it's just one of those piercing little nuggets that I can't help but adore as well.. lol.... I thank you for such a pleasurable experience reading your thoughts.I feel lucky to have captured your eye there.. I appreciate the list add and most of all I am glad you enjoyed it, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
Much love your way ✨
🌹
xo
B
Much love your way ✨
🌹
xo
B
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 4:07am
Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 5:46am
I appreciate that, Remy... I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading and liked my little pic creation.
Thx for the list add and the well wishes ✨
It's always a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-💙
Thx for the list add and the well wishes ✨
It's always a pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-💙
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 4:26am
Truly an original and creatively aflame improvisation. You took me into the heart of what love can be.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 5:48am
Your thoughtful comments are the soothing balm my psyche needed tonight, John. I was so happy to see you on my page 🦋
I appreciate your kind words, the list add and you taking the time.... it's truly meaningful to me
🌹
-💙
I appreciate your kind words, the list add and you taking the time.... it's truly meaningful to me
🌹
-💙
Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 6:03am
My spirit and mood are enriched and enlivened by your poetry. incredibly refreshing to read a poet with both heart and the ability to convey that soul into gorgeous and rhapsodic poetry.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 4:47am
Two hearts becoming one is very romantic indeed. Keep on writing you beautiful strong sexy woman
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 5:48am
I concur, completely Francisco
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts and being a faithful reader...
🌹
B
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts and being a faithful reader...
🌹
B
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
4th May 2021 4:30pm
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
Fate or fortune
simple luck
or that invisible string
of awareness
connecting
unaware to aware
a solidly in rare kinship
across sea and land
space and time
light and dark
tenderly taking hold
by her persistence
and his awakening
to now be nurtured
of sunlight, dog walks
deep delves of insight
peccadilloes
and music of just right
all starting with the flap
of butterfly wings
and inspiration
evolving their creation
simple luck
or that invisible string
of awareness
connecting
unaware to aware
a solidly in rare kinship
across sea and land
space and time
light and dark
tenderly taking hold
by her persistence
and his awakening
to now be nurtured
of sunlight, dog walks
deep delves of insight
peccadilloes
and music of just right
all starting with the flap
of butterfly wings
and inspiration
evolving their creation
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
4th May 2021 10:06pm
The wonser of love when two souls tenderly embrace little fkutters in the stomach beauty seen through the heart
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Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
ROBOT!!! 🤖
My best friend AND robot...
Do my eyes deceive me????!!!!
How did I get this lucky 🍀?
Despite all the whining and pleading 🙏🏻.....
(Har Har Har!)
I'm shocked 🤯 😲 and truly surprised to see your absolute loveliness on my page.
I have butterfly flutters just from these comments!
How easy is this task, to make a girl's day!!!
I love seeing you 🦋
and I'm sincerely appreciative and very grateful, Colin.... thank you for reading and your comments, plus the list add, too!! Holy moly.... I'm a little lucky lady, indeed 😉
💙
Xoxo
-S
My best friend AND robot...
Do my eyes deceive me????!!!!
How did I get this lucky 🍀?
Despite all the whining and pleading 🙏🏻.....
(Har Har Har!)
I'm shocked 🤯 😲 and truly surprised to see your absolute loveliness on my page.
I have butterfly flutters just from these comments!
How easy is this task, to make a girl's day!!!
I love seeing you 🦋
and I'm sincerely appreciative and very grateful, Colin.... thank you for reading and your comments, plus the list add, too!! Holy moly.... I'm a little lucky lady, indeed 😉
💙
Xoxo
-S
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
8th May 2021 10:08pm
Re: Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
8th May 2021 10:55pm
Awww.. (blushes)
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and I'm so very glad you stopped by to read.
It's always such a pleasure to make new acquaintances. I like that you can feel something that resonates.... thank you for saying so
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and I'm so very glad you stopped by to read.
It's always such a pleasure to make new acquaintances. I like that you can feel something that resonates.... thank you for saying so
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
3rd Jul 2021 6:41pm
Really loved the essence you were able to condense into the brevity of these 42 syllables, and with the image to compliment it was like the icing on the cake.
Excellent work Blue. Congrats on runner on this comp.
Excellent work Blue. Congrats on runner on this comp.
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Re. upon the wings of fortuitousness.
3rd Jul 2021 6:47pm
Thanks so much for visiting, Walter! I really enjoyed the heartfelt comments and the kindness of your congratulations... I appreciate you muchly, my friend 🙏🏻
Enjoy your day... as I prepare for a potential hit by Elsa! Uggh hurricane prep is always a pain!!... hahaha..... wish Tampa luck 🤞🏻!
🌹 - B
Enjoy your day... as I prepare for a potential hit by Elsa! Uggh hurricane prep is always a pain!!... hahaha..... wish Tampa luck 🤞🏻!
🌹 - B