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things happen
Somehow our love
moved
on a breezy night
like this
from your jacket
draped over my
shoulders
to you
handing me the keys
to fetch the blanket
from our car.
Far,
far away.
moved
on a breezy night
like this
from your jacket
draped over my
shoulders
to you
handing me the keys
to fetch the blanket
from our car.
Far,
far away.
Published 25th Apr 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Nov 2024 2:46am
25th Apr 2021 3:00pm
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25th Apr 2021 4:42pm
@Poetic_Quill, thank you for your insights; all so very true. I appreciate that you stayed and shared your thoughts and allowed me into your process as reader :)
warmly,
ursa
warmly,
ursa
25th Apr 2021 6:16pm
25th Apr 2021 8:12pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
25th Apr 2021 6:52pm
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7th May 2021 9:20pm
A two-edged sword can strike either way of course -- but a one-edged sword (I guess) has to encompass the 'unconditional' bit. Great write.
17th May 2021 3:38pm
29th Feb 2024 1:53am
Relationships sometimes have their quirks and complications, and some deviate from their true intended purpose.
Thought provoking write.
Thought provoking write.
