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Is this all I am?
We long for human connection.
Even when our personalities sometimes avoid it. The spirit is weakened.
When our efforts are thwarted.
A self inflicted wound that eyes can not see.
A feeling of desperation... is this all I am to be?
Even when our personalities sometimes avoid it. The spirit is weakened.
When our efforts are thwarted.
A self inflicted wound that eyes can not see.
A feeling of desperation... is this all I am to be?
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Re. Is this all I am?
24th Apr 2021 2:02am
"A self inflicted wound that eyes can not see."
~always the deepest one of all, I know it well..
So much essence in your lines.. enjoyed your honest pennings and wishin u sweeter hours,
~d
~always the deepest one of all, I know it well..
So much essence in your lines.. enjoyed your honest pennings and wishin u sweeter hours,
~d
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Re. Is this all I am?
24th Apr 2021 5:59am
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Re. Is this all I am?
24th Apr 2021 7:55am
We are who we are....
Yet because we see ourselves, we also see faults in that, never perfect
So we can always better ourselves...
Great ink
Yet because we see ourselves, we also see faults in that, never perfect
So we can always better ourselves...
Great ink
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Re. Is this all I am?
24th Apr 2021 2:29pm
Great question. And my answer is NO...there is so much more for all of us to Be and Become. Peace, oral
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30th Apr 2021 4:50pm
Re. Is this all I am?
3rd May 2021 4:08pm
Namaste Devine soul 🙏✨🕉 This hit home for me, I have battled all of my life within and against myself, not many know for my bright smile shows no shadows 🤕 💔 I found a mediation platform and a community full of souls searching, seeking, wondering, wandering, for answers, hope, faith, healing, connection (even when wanting to avoid it) and finally found my Avenue to hang out with mindfulness my best friend these days (except when I’m expressive writing) 😉❤️🪞 The universe has also gifted me this new Poetry family 🖋🔑for the opportunity to continue healing through vulnerability, with added hope of maybe one day inspiring someone else through my heart and soul 💞🪞 With abundance of Gratitude for your vulnerability and sharing this space beautiful poet 🙏sending light✨Love💞blissful joy 🌈
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9th May 2021 00:32am
Re. Is this all I am?
6th May 2021 10:34am
I think that observing and reflecting upon the human condition is perhaps to stare into the abyss longly and have the abyss stare back into you... I admire your courage to stare into that abyss with fearless daring... Maybe fearless in the sense of overcoming the fear, which is a remarkable feat.
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9th Jul 2021 10:07am